Ch 15 Very bland read.
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Finally a good naruto fanfic
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good story development, the progress of the MC and OC are visible to see how strong they become. Also the storyline are good with all kinds of original events along with the butterfly effect are showing perfectly.
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One of the best Naruto fanfics on webnovel.
The Story is much more realistic, with genuine emotions, filler episodes that aren't filler, and relates to how a normal Naruto fan will actually react. It is really like seeing another version of anime.
when you start reading you will probably believe this story is interesting with tons of potential. unfortunately, as you read it goes down hill...not sure why you make an op mc just to nerf him. This is common with Chinese authors but they at least wait till chapter 800. This story seems more positive focused on Naruto while giving a few thoughts to the mc.
mc is fake don't believe that someone who has powers to become god is a guy who is very weak and just gives everything away doesn't make the mc unique at all instead it just makes him very fake. no way there is a person like this. With obsession comes greed then there would be no way for him to become very weak he would do everything to have kaguya by his side however this mc is like the most far away from being human and its bad since how tf will you understand the mc it just makes the story very dumb asf and the title should just be "journey of the most beta mc ever with kakashi syndrome(faints from chakra exhaustion) with an M fetish"
i just started this novel and well it's interesting. with lots of potential . nice going author San . I am reading other Naruto fanfiction *uchiha's butterfly* and well Ur novel reminds me of it
Good so far.
Good so far.
Good so far.
Good so far.Good so far.
Good so far.
Good so far.
Good so far.
Good so far.Good so far.
Good so far.Good so far.
Good so far.Good so far.
Good so far.Good so far.
Good so far.Good so far.
I like it, if there were more frequent updates, I would rate it higher. I really like the novel and hope you continue.
** I cant write good reviews I tried my best
I love the way you portray the different elements like, Izanami as ex deus machina or sth. like that. But i dont like how kushina says he is her son but dont treat as the real one. There is always elements that shows kushina even though saying ishizu is her son always maintain the gap of being adopted and the real one. I dont like that. Change it. please. I love minato& kushina so i dont want to see them bad. so i want them to treart ishizu as their real son not as adopted.
This is the best I could give you. MC is basically the secret golden finger/ dude who was op as f but lost all his power and bonds with MC type. Legit gives everything to Naruto. If Naruto asked the MC for his his love interest MC would legit give her away. One of the worst fanfics I have ever read. The high rating is bots.
Overall great fanfic and quite original I mean the po sage was a nice touch š¦ character design was nice
Inclusion of kushina and mato was quite to my liking too just keep up the good work
the author focuses too much on naruto that he give naruto everything from the start he has the love of family 2 girls that love him strong ability completely deleted what makes him what he is in the original and what he does with Sasuke is more than stupid in my opinion he decided to take away his arrogance personality and leave him with pride once just for the sake of his plot take away his love interest Hinata and Karin he turns her into lesbian and now even he wants to make Sasuke into mc spy (more like a puppet) I know u hate Sasuke and love to naruto but man keep some original.
Good Work Author San I am loving your work more as Story progress,
This one is good please don't drop this novel in middle.
Let the story progress slowly so we can enjoy reading.
Great work.
I love this book very much, and i hope this book will continue going on for a long while.
Since the protagonist is able to cross over to kung fu panda, i wonder if you can take the protagonist after he will release his wife, to other worlds too, in a sort of honey period.
I like the story...I like the story...I like the story...I like the story...I like the story...I like the story...I like the story...I like the story...updating quality is poor but... It is appreciated that it is not dropped... Love to see more chapter
Novel is great there is so much suspense and lots of thrillin adventure but author has very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very slow hands. No stable update
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