Reviews of Strongest Weakling by AlpheusFelix - Webnovel

Shameless Author here, with a shameless review. I wrote a novel recently, which is Call of Ring. It was my very first attempt at writing, and there may be some mistakes and errors in it, but I still feel extremely proud of it and enjoy it thoroughly. Please give my story a try and leave some comments for me. Thank you! https://rb.gy/5s05wc

For 3 chapters, it piqued my interest a bit. I am fond of an MC gaining a system and going back in time, so I'm biased on that. The writing is understandable but needs to be polished. The fight scenes are a bit dull I guess, I need details. That last chapter though, I'm worried on his sister, is he going to fight that person who recently appeared?

I think you should continue the series