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No clue on how this is rated pretty high for something that seems to be written randomly....plot is pretty trash....MC is stupid.....somehow this was reviewed with good ratings by bots im guessing i dont know
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Cliche protagonist and novel, dropped it because mc is that lolis slave ***********&&__&_&&&&\************************\**\\***\********\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\7777\\\\\\\7\\\7777777
Mc has a low iq he thinks himself as that edge kid who has super powers and is mega awesome but has the mental capacity of a gnat he gets abused by a dead twin tailed drill head egotistical tsundere who acts like she's the most perfect being and after mc beats up some dudes she acts like he's kinda handsome now ...anddd now you can see where this story is going... Also the mc uses katanas so you can tell it's pretty much a classic trope of all cliches and from what I can guess it will either be a harem in the end or a ton of chicks who follow him around or lust after him but he only picks one and makes him self sen loyal cause of that as he levers at all the legs ass and tits around him .... so yeah... right now he acts like he's shy and blushing and useless around females but he's 10 most guys don't even understand females at this point and have yet to see them as anything but the ones who wear dresses so yeah mc apparent,y already at 10 is past puberty and aware of females ... And the dead I might add fl is aware of him as a guy... And she's 1 dead and 2 a little kid... so we have necrophilia and child perversion? Seriously? How low are people sinking these days
Hi guys, author-san here! This review is about the book, which also helps you before you get started in this.
Firstly, welcome to the new world! What is this world about? It's taking place in future. What happened after the judgement day of earth? How did the puny people survive?
This book is not about OP MC or genius MC from the start! My MC is a kid that grows with the changing world.
The first chapter is a glimpse of his future. It will appear again after a while which will be crucial (I hope). Up to 17 chapters, the story is about the world, the changes and the different powers and basically the system of the world. You can skip this if you want and go to MC but you will miss epic war fight.
You want to see how the world works? Go to chapter 49 and 50. There will be no spoilers but will just tell you about the world.
You can even skip this if u want and go to 78 to see a cool op MC and how his life started. If you want to know about the charas and backstory after getting interested. Come back to the first chapters.
**IMPORTANT THINGS**
Please ignore some Grammar mistakes, I'm trying to fix them.
Updates will be random for now because I don't get any comments and Idk if anyone's reading so..... I'll update when I can.
Thank you for being patient and reading this.
Hmm... Where do I start..
I'll be frank, I wasn't much interested in the initial plot parts. Since I'm used to the mc being op, and slaughtering his way up. Faust on the other hand... Didn't exactly meet those criteria.
Then comes the part where the narrations seem endless.
The grammar was improper in the beginning as well.
And that's all of the complaints I have.
(Don't kill me for this)
Next comes the pro points.
I love how the author proceeded with Faust's character development. *and I'm always expecting more action as well as gore, as promised from the first chap*
Though the story was slow paced in the beginning, it's slowly catching up.
The grammar too, has been fixed as the author has mentioned in his notes.
This novel, has lots of potential and trust me, I was probably the second happiest person when I saw that it got contracted XD
**: Happy New year, and be happy :)
A new story for me..must read for this..i have to put some effirts and time to read this christmas break comes..❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👍🏼👍🏼👏🏼👏🏼👍🏼👍🏼👏🏼👍🏼👏🏼👍🏼👏🏼👍🏼👏👍👏👍👏👍👏👍👏👍👏👍👏😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
Ok, so I recently discovered webnovel for king's avatar, I'm more of an anime person and honestly, I never read these novels, only anime/manga/manhua.
First reason I was here? I got intrigued by the book name.
Second, the synopsis, totally nailed it.
Third, I started reading the book from 50th chapter, I know, that's what I do. I don't start I from 1st, I just wanted to see where it is, how is the characters developing and what this shet is about.
And OH MY DADDY,
The story and the WORLD SETTING! i can imagine a really good anime, if the author gives us the badassery that is.
The first few chapters were really light, not going to lie. But MANH the crazy and psycho rage!!! I loved every bit. The dark/crazy MC I'm ready! Love this man!
One thing tho, I keep wanting to read moree! So keep them chapters coming!
The cover looks very interesting and drew me in. The first sentence "The rich gets richer and the poor become poorer" is what got me to keep reading. Very interesting premise. Lots of action...just the way I like it!
The story is great. The first chapter is really intense and awesome. The world background is very detailed. The character design is also very fun and adventurous.
It is a new and interesting story. Continue your excellent work, MiniAce!! ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Second shameless review!!! New readers better go and start to read now 😊
Story is amazing! I am not a fantasy fan, but it's so easy to follow and keep me waiting for the next releases. Chapter length is just nice, and author releases daily so that's a great BONUS for me as a reader too!!!
Keep it up, author! You're doing great!
The story seems interesting from the beginning, you are very attracted very soon. I am curious about how the story will develop. One negative thing I found is the mixing of present-past tense. I think the author should decide about what to use. If he wanted to use present tense, I suggest to use 1st person narrator protagonist that could be cool as writing style
Hi, I saw your advertisement in the 'Light Novels', FB group. Here's my initial review as a show of support to you. Hoping you could check my work too and drop some support - 'War Grounds' is the title. Keep up the good work, there are still some grammar errors, hoping you could go at it again and do some edits. For the rest, your rock the world, dude. CHEERS!
wow, noona is so proud!! I like how u describe your character and the detailed background about the world and your english also great just missed a little bit but that's fine, I know u will improve along the way.
keep up the great jobs my dongsaeng!!
For a fantasy book this should be highly recommended. I like ML that can rival one punch man lol. Just read the first ten chapters and I'm already attached. Author isn't really into romance scenes but maybe we'd get more and more spicy scenes. For now let's make the best out of what we have. The grammar is really on point and the gore scenes are also descriptive. I like it because I get the vibe of military/war anime I've watched. Nice work !
Though I am new to fantasy genre I can tell that this book is really good and unique.
The development in the story is pretty good either. And moreover author used my favorite Greek mythology 😍😍
I recommended this to those who wants to read something like "Arms and the man" play by Shaw. The story covers the art of sword fight like chinese animes as a main thing. Combined with supernatural this story is set in between a war field and a best choice for action lovers. Though some grammatical and structural errors are there to be corrected which I hope author will improve. ❤ Fighting !
The grammar requires some correction at points. Other than that, the plotline is quite decent, and the pace maintained is well too. The English is understandable.
Overall, I must say that you write a good story for a grandaddy.
Wow, you started it with intensity. It was smooth and OP That I cant help but wanting for more, it just that I want to read more about that mysterious man than what is happening now. If that man is Faust, does it mean all of those characters will die? Or it was different person? But I'll wait for more to know. Such I good start!
It's great how imaginative the author is -- he doesn't hold back when it comes to world building. The characters are likeable, the story's pacing is decent, and the action is on point. It's still too early to seriously judge the story, but I can certainly conclude that it's interesting, that's for sure.
Unfortunately, the story's a little bit rough around the edges because of the author's writing skills, but it's nothing a bit of polish can't fix. Cheers!
The storyline is good and interesting. There are no grammatical errors or typos that i could find so far. The author has done a good job.
Keep it up 👍♥️
As a reader of Romance novels, this is a whole new experience for me, I liked the story so far, character development is good, I found this novel a bit complicated, it tests your imagination. But it is still readable. This story has a lot of potential. Keep up the good work.
I am a new reader in Fantasy genre so my review maybe bias. But this book is good! The description is detailed and captured your attention right away.
The progress is well pace, the storyline is great too. It's still early for me to judge, but it's already doing great so far!
Thanks so much for introducing this to me.
Wow, a complete surprised read, I hope you could keep the pace of the story and updates for the readers to enjoy it and welcome in the big WN authors family, with this unique and interesting story.
Good luck
It definitely stands out from your typical story of love/cliche-romance. There are some issues with grammar and overall writing (why I docked off a star there), but it doesn't distract from the reader's actual understanding of the book. The only thing that sort of distracted me was legit the one emoji you put in the middle of the paragraph tho lol.
Hey author!
Stories are this are not common in webnovel. So, it's refreshing to see one.
It's only 3 chapters, so I won't comment about the development. The idea itself is really good. But I hope to see development in the main lead.
As for the grammar, it's not perfect, but it's fine.
Good luck, author! And thank you for creating a new piece and working hard on it.
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