Author here, first chapter is a bit short, but I plan on releasing longer chapters as I go along. First time writing a novel but hopefully it will contue to be interesting. Definitely not for those under 18 as the story progresses. The relationships are not going to just be bang and next so I'll try build them rather than protagonist banging like 1k people, but his harem will have interesting characters that are not often in others!
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arthor are going to update it is being 1 year now and im aiting aaa long time now and dont add neotiri in this novel i love this story a lot and im waiting a long time now what are doing anyway or why are you taking a long time to update the novel
decent story BUT no updates for pretty much a year, I won't be surprised if this author is dead, the very least he's inactive, so I suggest reading something else
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dont mind what is written here im just your normal user going crazy and stupid exp farm to get some levelups to sate my hunger of extremely specific but only fast pass accessible content
Need more chapters, overall great story and I love the setting of the story. Just need more. Much more. Well written in my opinion. Wish to read more soon.
Good book but the release rate per week is not fine. Update is fine if the author release more than seven chapter or more per weak. But apparently he is releasing more chapters.
This is a nice book with good **** and likeable for what we can see of them characters. It principle problem is the reliability of the author. The update rate is abysmal making the pacing seem worse those three thousand chapters epics you can cut 1500 from and not lose material character information. At the rate he's going large material progress needs to happen and resolve to an extent in each chapter or the size needs to multiply by three.
Entertaining book that keep you coming back for more. With it Juicy and mouth watering detailed events. Story plot good and raising in quality as time goes by.
I'm pleasantly surprised. I admit I was expecting a little less actual story and more monster of the freak and smut. I'm giving the Stability of Updates a pass considering the world atmosphere at this time. I look forward to more updates and hope to see the story go on for a long time.
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Honestly, yes its lewd but somehow im actually severely pulled into reading it. its interesting as hell and i cant wait to see where the author pulls it.
So far from what I've read of the book it has me interested in seeing where the story goes and how the characters develop I see some potential just wish it was updated more frequently
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The story is pretty interesting sort of reminds me of prince of domination but with a more natural feel inste of a forceful control over the mind. Tie Zhu is really well developed although his dragon transformation description sounds like maleficent with scales and bat wings along with a tail. Maybe you could have his scales change color in the future and have the girls come to an agreement but great work man I as the lightbringer and bane of angels commend you 😇👌🏾😈
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Great but dont just take my word for join in on the fun is all I can say so what you do here reading reviews It already has what caught your interest old problem is the update rate so vote so power stones so author can spill out 2chpts a day muhhahahahaha
This story is quite a blast to read! It’s fun and erotic at the same time! It’s one of those stories that get you going and even has a developing relationship inside of it. I would say that as a novel it is quite good and gives you the overall suspense and feeling you want. It’s a all in all great novel and is carefully written out with little to no mistakes in writing which leads to better enjoyment during reading.
One minor quirk I have is the author does take a very long time to post a new chapter. Just be patient is all I can really say I guess.
TLDR: It’s a great novel, 100% should read, although updates take a long time.
I was somewhat feel disappointed and frustrated to the fact that it didnt have Confrontation scene between Tie Zhu and Bei Meifing ...what a threesome love story..
Well so far the story is good I am just done with 7th chapter and the premise of the show is done well and makes me wonder about some things. Hope to get even more nice chapters in the future.
What a scene... But i am excited of what maybe the outcome.. Is bei meifing will try to stop what they are doin or she will just be an audience.. And what will be the next move of tao keke?.. Can she suppressed the urge of lust?
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