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Okai, here's a little glimpse into what this story is basically about/will be about.
A rather complex story involving many intricate parts of the modern political world to later on evolve into a magical scenery where our mc finds himself bombarded by mysterious happenings orchestrated by the Being who practically imprisons him in an endless loop of rebirth. Mc must strive against subjugation using his political prowess to make allies, placate enemies and use his powers to enhance his own position in the world making his survival more likely.
I might just be too stupid but what is this story actually about.
I personally hate it when the synopsis doesn’t really describe anything and no one spoils anything or make useful reviews 😭
So I’m just asking so I don’t disappoint myself .
Actually, I am here for the review swap but I didn't expect that this will get me hooked up!
I noticed some typographical errors and misplaced marks and some confusing passages, however, I am still impressed because it depicts the most crucial points.
Stability of Updating: 5/5
Story Development: 5/5
Plot like this isn't something new, but your own concept of this plot makes this novel unique!
Political novel is not accurately 100% hit to the readers, it needs to have an intriguing plot line and few entertaining scenarios to keep the readers going.
And I want to congratulate you for achieving that!
Character Design: 5/5
The MC's nature is quite likeable. He's not like other leads that became OP just because they reborned for almost 10 times. He signifies that there's still a room for improvement.
He has his definite goals in life and very resolute. His mind isn't clouded with revenge (not anymore) and he's thinking more of his surroundings.
Other leads like him thinks about women, women, women, and power and they became really really, really, really arrogant and annoying.
Anyway, lemme give you a high-five for producing a marvelous MC!
The concept or world building is really tough, truth to be told. And your current world, its concept, is still quite shaky and but I know it will progress in the future!
Extra suggestions (?)
1. Okay, so I already commented this on one of the chapters: Put footnotes at the end of the chapter.
You see, I really like to emphasise its importance especially to your novel because it really needs that.
For example, you put a certain political or economical terminology in the chapter, unless you discuss it thoroughly in the said chapter, the readers( most of them) won't understand it because of its complexity.
2. This is not really important. You know, you can use descriptive words to describe his appearance, the people around him, the object around him, the houses or even the environment to make the story more vivid. But if your style writing is more on the MC himself, then it's okay not putting these.
3. That's all thank you! Good novel BTW 😊.
The concept is new and wonderfully depicted. I love the pace of the story. It's intriguing, pulls the readers into the world of mystery. I love ML. This is my first novel where Male MC is not doing cultivation or RPG thing.
Firstly I was like this (☆_☆)while reading. Why? For this you should give it a go. Quoting the title normally it's about rebirth of a damsel who again falls in distress or probably arrives back for revenge. But this is the first plot who revolves around a male lead, who had been reborn. What adds to this idea is the notion that he had already lived upto his nine lives (as perhaps he dies a horrible death every time,lol). Secondly I must say author has a unique sense while chosing names of characters which to me was quite funny. Thirdly I really want to praise the author about chosing the chapter titles, highly infused with vocabulary spice this is a gem. And the structure of sentences are great and praiseworthy, the tone is wonderful throughout. Though I haven't read much but I got immersed into the tone of the story, author is skilled in presenting the world by dialogues and has a keen sense of political scenarios, tricky things. I recommend this to all who want something that revolves around male lead, this is a MUST TRY. ❤
The grammar used is alright and understandable. Nonetheless, proofreading would make it better. The plot is interesting as well. Nonetheless, the stability of updates is really low, so that should be fixed.
A very interesting concept and execution. Love the how detailed the world building is and the how realistic the political jargon is. The writing and grammar is true to it's setting and nothing seems out of place or jarring. Looking forward to future updates!