I got excited reading from the first chapter and i couldn't stop it till the most recent one.
Please update it very often as i want to get to know more about it. I too am excited with what the characters are going to be in the latter part of the story.
The story is immensely written and is very exciting to read. I wish to read the whole book as soon as possible. If you can do more action scenes that would be very interesting. Please build up G some more. She sounds like a very amazing character. By the way, great first 3 chapters. Keep up the good work!