I just realized that you deleted your story. I don't know what motivated your decision but it's pretty sad because Takashi x harem stories are rare. 😔
I guess you don't intend to repost it? 😢
Thanks anyway for sharing it.
The mc wishes for his memories to be erased, this is literally a re write of the actual hotd anime. the only change is the lemon. This was garbage.
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i think this story is interesting, something like a zombie and aphocalypse background story, character from another anime, and etc. But, you need something significant in story, like conflict. But, i enjoy your work dude [img=recommend]
Hey there!
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I think the girls should not fall in love with the MC instantly because except for the girls, they should gradually have feelings for the MC, for example the character of Rei contradicts herself a little, when she had the first sexual relationship with Takashi, she felt completely in love of Takashi, but in the last chapters the author completely changes Rei's attitude, for example on the roof of the school Rei's feelings should not have changed dramatically after her boyfriend died, he should recover the love that she placed for Takashi in her childhood, meeting him again, and knowing why Takashi was not with her every time she needed him to hear her complaints and the reasons why he did not comfort her when she needed him ... with the few chapters that already I read the plot, I can imagine who will be the one to betray Takashi again, this is very similar to my personal story, when you do not accompany your partner in good and bad, definitive mind the woman will seek comfort with another person, sad but it is the truth.
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this will be the greatest anime harem story for sure so keep it up buddy you sure are an artist that write a piece of art so far so great and i expect it to be greater in the future
You said you were doing it for fun so my review may be harsher than needed. My main problem with the story is that the mc being a reincarnated person has absolutly no effect on the story. You could have had the system awaken at a certain age like The Gamer, but connected to the multiverse with abyss auction. The mc could have aquired his sexual skill there, being attracted to all the beauties around him.
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