Reviews of [Alpha] by Karstag - Webnovel

So, the story itself is not bad, but the author gives MC powers that are not explained how he get them. Basically everything is done with time skips without any context whatsoever. The grammar is horrible, like rly garbage. Author rly does not care, cause even the first few chapters are not fixed. If you are looking for literature masterpiece go somewhere else. If you have nothing else to read go for it. So basically this fan-fic has more plotholes than switz-cheese.

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just realized I haven't given this a review, well I think the only thing I should really have to say is after a 9 month break with no updates or warnings, it stayed in my library and I still commented and wanted a new chapter (as did MANY others) this is my #1 favorite ff and it deserves that title.

The further, the more chaotic the story goes. The protagonist is an intellectually deprived, absolutely unbalanced, rabid dog. Rabid dogs are not stroked, they are euthanized. In the conditions of war, such a person was simply and unpretentiously shot after the first bounce. He does not learn how he threw his fists at people in childhood, and continues to do the same when he is 30 years old. Degenerate.

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i'll write this in hope author continue his story. Your story is really great, my favorite of the style. The caracter of your mc is so good how he deal with problems and how he fights is so great. Pick it back pls.

The grammar is atrocious, nothing makes sense, everything's jumbled. Oh, and the writing style is horrible.👎exactly 140 characters. Noice!!

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1. Mc character and progression: He was a good character, i mean an interesting way of introducing a reincarnated person and his battle junkie attitude, but went off road after his waking from ice, i mean i loved his character before time skip but didn't after timeskip, be became, annoying i guess? it's hard to explain. 2. The plot was amazing up until him getting stuck in ice, i mean i guess author didn't have other way to make him young for canon or something, but his eventual awakening and that batman thingy and all that threw me off, i mean yeah, but that's just my opinion. 3. Great portraying of fight scenes and good buildup. All in all i'd rate it a 7/10.

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the best fanfic out there the characters are really well written the hero is badass and achieve everything through his brain and his hard work a master piece really no cheat no dumb woman I was really surprised to find something this good

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Can you like keep posting or are you Finished because ive been looking forward to another chapTer and i don’t want to get my hopes up so it’s either you want to post ir you’re done with this story

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Perfect… What? You expect me to say something else? Open your eyes I gave it a 5/5 review. The only thing I can say it that this story is perfect… Even thought the author is a little lazy with his uploads

This is not an objective review, but i think i can post it here? 5 Star just for having "NO HAREM TAG" 5 Star just for having "NO HAREM TAG" 5 Star just for having "NO HAREM TAG"

I rate it with absolute 5 star dont ask me why im too lazy to write and if u ask why im writing this shit its because the fucking word cant less than 140

The personality of the main character is rather grating and her is a bit marry sueish. it seems like everyone likes him no matter how annoying he acts. if you can ignore that its a decent read.

Really good story you have here, the marvel universe is extremely unique and it is a crossover with characters of the dc universe. it has gal's wonderwoman and Batman, I am not sure who the actor is, I wish you luck and I hope it is not dropped.

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