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Should be classified as a fan-fic as of chapter 9. Plot is nearly identical to the light novel “Tales of Demons and Gods”. Grammar is amazing compared to about 75% of this app. Characters are true to themselves and world building is above average.
Cons: the cliche fat bestfriend, the mc hiding his abilities and pretend to be trash, the cliche young master who wants to trouble mc just cause he’s a commoner and trash(cuz he’s hiding his abilities,) the usual cliche noble is everything, if you’re not noble then ur trash
At first excited to read this novel. It turned out to be boring and frustrating to read. full of cliche
cliche plot/arc, cliche friends, cliche mc who tries to be lowkey but fails etc...this novel is not for me
Its so nice. Even better than my whole fantasy stories that I read. Its so good. So exciting and I love Z. He is so cool and he cares about others. I love the way he acts like he didn't care and just wait for them for the first move. And also I like his fighting style. He is so experienced and I feel like I wanna fight like him. I do taekwondo so I feel I am not bored anymore when I imagine fighting like like him.
The english doesn’t make all that much sense, there are random bits where the author writes about some event that had no relation to the last chapter and no explanation how it got to that point, and honestly the plot is just confusing and incoherent.
Other than that it’s a pretty good novel
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This book is good
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It is an excellent book for people who like to read action-packed books with a good storyline, this book develops really well and I 100% recommend you to read it
I read until chapter 109. So far it has been a massive waste of time!
I was hoping for something more, since this novel is a rewritten novel, because the author wasn't satisfied with his initial work.... But I can just guess how bad the initial novel has been, when the rewritten one ist as bad as it is now 🙈.
Grammar and correct use of past, present and future are obviously not Mr. Authors strong points... Not even nearly!
Character builds are strange and change in-between, like the girl with the power to control liquids and later on she is capable to create cold and ice at will. Initially she was only capable of freezing liquids over because of some artifact...
Even MC has no real personality, as he acts differently most of the time, as his initial description described him to be... Antagonists and MCs friends are cliché as hell and encounters are often close to copy paste to other chinese novels... It's like Mr. Author is compiling standard settings and happenings from other novel so much, that he is drowning the few good ideas of his own...
The only good point I have found so far is, that this story hasn't gone premium. Seems like the author at least knows, that he hasn't yet reached the level of writing, where it is justified to ask for money.
I hope that in the future Mr author uses novels like Supreme magus or legendary mechanic as inspiration and not those ever-repeating standard cultivation novels...
Dropping this novel and moving on!
Really enjoyable to read. Good to finally see a character with my name sake haha. Only problem now is that I want more as I may have read the whole thing in a day ahah.
This author has a great sense of knowledge and appreciation for the fine culture the culture in terms of aspects and worldly belongings is quite deep and thoughtful
Honestly no redeeming qualities for this **** show of a story, 44ch in and we already have concluded that mc either has some kinda split personality or he’s retarded, the fat friend fucks everything in mc plans and ruins a majority of the story, the power levels are absolute garbage and author doesn’t know how to write a single consistant character
well i didnt read it cause everyone on review is complaining about it being full of cliche moment.. i always asked myself why mc like to hide their strength? would the antagonist annoy them if they know that the moment they did mc would most likely beat them. mc acting weak to me is basically them asking to be bullied by the bad guy.. cause in this cultivation world is always the strong is respected while the weak are not so why mc have to act weak?
Good story it's give me the feeling of
the hunger game movie don't ask me way,
I hope the author can make some of the scene more mild it's look a little bit forced and pleas stay with the main storyline i don't no where the relation between what the MC do and his past live.
And thank you for the good story i hope you make it good to the end.
"What will Z do when he is reincarnated into his past self. Will he seek the path of vengeance, once more killing his way to supremacy? Or seek to discover his lost humanity?"...
Well, don't we all fking know what he, and every other MC when there is a starting question like that, chooses? Obv its going to be to become a "good guy" and try to become more "human". God dang, wish authors could make badass MC's that are actually badass.
Ok, other than that, the story is actually pretty good, but again, has cliche's and sometimes you just wanna punch the MC, but then you realize the MC is made by the author, so you want to just punch the author =P
This story is pretty good. Aside from some minor grammatical mistakes here and there, the overall character and world building has been pretty good so far (chp 89).
This should definitely be higher on the charts!
Addictive, I strongly recommend giving it a try.
The world building is done quite well. And it does not have any obvious consistency errors in it that I have seen in a few other novels here.
It’s very unoriginal and full of cliche moments. I don’t want to read a novel where it’s pretty much copy pasted scenes from other lame novels. I’m out.
Pros: none, for me at least
Cons: the cliche fat bestfriend, the mc hiding his abilities and pretend to be trash, the cliche young master who wants to trouble mc just cause he’s a commoner and trash(cuz he’s hiding his abilities,) the usual cliche noble is everything, if you’re not noble then ur trash
Conclusion: dropped, byeeer
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