Pretty decent story. Some of the grammar and wording is weird at times. Character background is kinda missed out on. Not much detail, it just skims through the story. Hope the author can write more though, it has potential.
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its a great story and all but does anyone know if its abandoned the author put it in hiatus 6 months ago and hasent been back since even being busy id think hed check in every 3 or 4 months to let us know he hasnt gotten tired of it
I love background but the mc is a real crap.....but will wait for the author to play his part and see where he goes.....this concept is really good and i hope tha author keeps it up.....love very much and hoping for it to be better.....
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is it goiis it going to be continued or gonna be dropped afterwards ? pls answer.
is it going to be continued or gonna be dropped afterwards ? pls answer.
is it going to be continued or gonna be dropped afterwards ? pls answer .
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