Chapter comments on the chapter The Asura of the book A Fool's Dream

Hi. Chapter is good but I noticed you're not adding a period (.) At the end of your paragraphs. Not sure why, but you should so it'll signify an end to the lasr sentece of your paragraph. :) Just my advice. :)

Hi, think you should look into punctuations. Nevertheless, word choices are great.

Thnx 4 the chapter!

Nice shot

Intriguing...