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LV 2
Kitsunc
What I would do? Well if I was in his situation where I only practice archery, I would max out my assassination skills while training on archery, why? because I would like to be 1 meter away from the target and still not be seen while having my bow in front of his eye.
LV 3
Paget
So far so good. It is a little slow to update but the author does keep you in the loop with these things. I like the pace and how it builds up bit by bit. Thank you keep up the good work ^_^ looking forward to the MC getting stronger.
LV 4
WizardWands
I really enjoyed the first half. Then the author decided to change the power/ AI system. This created three big issues for me. First, the reason for the system change was clearly shoehorned that it takes the readers out of the experience. There was no valid reason within the plot of the story to justify such as change. Second, readers have already invested 30+ chapters by the time this abrupt change happens. Feels a little bait and switch, especially if you are specific about the kind of isekai/novel you read. Third, the writing style also changes significantly around the same time as the system change. It's very jarring to all of a sudden feel like you are reading a completely different tome. The biggest example of this is the observable lack of banter between system and the MC post changes. I did enjoy the first 36 chapters.
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LV 4
Armaggedon_674
Well, basically typical isekai+system kind of world, but original in their own way.
I totally recomend it because it doesn´t fall into the clichés that 99% do. Also It has a little bit of world-building, that in my opinion should have a little bit more, but for the ones who like a more light experience or are not so interested in such things, It won´t become anything unbereable. In addition it has a 4th wall breaking for time to time and a nice humour.
As I said before It totally recomend it.
LV 2
Kile_Hague_1285
Great story can't wait for the next chapter. Awesome development of each character and great story line. One of the best books I've read in a while
LV 3
Dark_Raine
What’s the point of following the life of this mc when there’s nothing unique about him. He’s just a guy that’s given a cheat too overpowered and he doesn’t know how to use it.
He’s even less than an average Joe. He gets treated like a sick cat, kicked around and toyed with and all that’s in his head is acting as they wish so he won’t get into trouble.
Novel sickens me.
LV 3
Daniel_Martinez_8972
Very interesting story looking forward to seeing it evolve.also I'm looking forward to seeing how the magic Archer learns how to control his evolved form of magic
LV 4
grimmhorizon
not bad so far. ive really enjoyed reading your novel up til this point.
keep up the good work and i'll gladly keep on reading. and now im just feeling letters
LV 1
RobinJPokorny
I like it! This story has the op and weak moments that I was looking for! It also is funny at times and the world concept isn’t hard to understand.
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Keep updating and writing this story please! It’s really good and tbh my favorite at the moment! Keep up the good work!
LV 6
Henrique_Paiao
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LV 4
TurtleManiacc
Good 👍 great👍 amazing👍 incredible 👍
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LV 4
Arvolth_Edelweiss
the writing quality is good, but you need work harder on world building departement. i cant say much about other thing since it's still to early to judge.
keep up the good work.
A litle question Author-san, i just read that its a Kingdom not a village... really?
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LV 5
KoalaMager
Good work (σ≧▽≦)σ..........................................................................................................................................................................
LV 4
QuasiKai
Author here! Just wanted to say thank you to everyone who enjoy the Novel and want to keep reading.
To whoever is scrolling through WebNovel for something to read, this novel includes Isekai, a System, World Exploration, Magic, and some other stuff! If you're willing to read this, then thank you, and I hope you enjoy.
LV 5
DraconicWulf
good so far waiting for more ............................................................................................................................................
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