I was cringing half the time I was reading Ambrose praising himself as I often look in the mirror and call my self a handsome devil too. Hahaha for boosting confidence, it actually works. That aside, the chapter was good. Ambrose is entertaining if not yet likeable. I'll need to grt to know him more to say that for sure. XD
Well done on this intriguing first chapter, Aysel!
Like I said in the review, here is a great chance to set up your world background. What does Ambrose's room look like? What type of bathroom did he walk into? How big is his mirror? Where was his dad waiting, we know it's downstairs but where? Foyer? Stair landing? What was he wearing what did he look like? In Ambrose's opinion is he an okay looking father but pales in his son's sexiness?
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