Reviews of La Serpiente, Foxy cursed bride in CEO Ghost's lair by Aysel_Inara - Webnovel

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Good book. Well written plot lines and the building of the characters. I really enjoyed it. It well put together and well planned. Update fast

●>Before you begin || read this<● If you are reading this review in between the month of [March-April 2020], then please be patient because I'm going to begin with editing in a few days. Secondly I want to state a few things as per calculated with comments more likely want to elaborate. ○There aren't any poisons actually, metaphorically I've stated greed, lust for power & jealousy as venoms. ○There isn't any basilisk, instead just symbolically the sound is stated. ○The major theme revolves around those elements, magic element lies in second place. ○The narration style is indeed readable but needs polishing and spice of vocabulary. On which I'll work soon. ■About Characters■ ○The Lord of Hell, Hades is portrayed but I haven't stated the Gods as some OP and killing machine, rather the Gods are neutral, behaving like humans, loving and yes, some action too. ○As for this is first draft, the characters have flaws & needs rebuilding, which I'll begin soon. ○There are flashes of past as Syna and Sinclair MacLaverty have been reborn but this isn't a system or reincarnation theory, just flashes to clear up the past things. ■Characters List■ ○Sinclair MacLaverty || Ghost Lord/Ruler of Spirit Realm ○Jason MacLaverty || Younger brother ○Syna Rhys || Cursed Bride/Previously a princess ○Lolita aka Hestia || Syna's friend ○Brandon Brighton || Apparently seems Syna's suitor ○Braille Matteo Leste || Jason's mate ○Phobe || The Villain ○Iñigo De Raizel || Vampire Noble Lord ○Elmore Drago || Guard of Spirit Realm ○Isabella Drago || Elder sister ○Mr Lorenzo || Orphanage owner ○Mr & Mrs Benz || Partner in Orphanage 》Will appreciate constructive criticism.

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The story is captivating and engages the reader totally with a desire to read and know more. The past and present are fused together perfectly to give an interesting masterpiece. Looking forward to reading it completely.

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This book is very interesting to read.. not like the normal stories of vampire and it's a breathtaking story... I really appreciate the work done by author. Keep it up 💪

Wonderful story by my favorite author! The descriptions are really 🔥 and then the romance infused with supernatural thing is always my thing 😍 The very first chapter has sprouted the mystery that this plot has to offer and then the plot twists are really gold! I really love this book, give it a try guys!!! The hotness for me on my knees 🤣😏 Keep up the good work author!!!!!!!!!! ♥️

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Nice concept with different plot of story.. Characters portrayed nicely... Good story.. Like to read it.. Good twist and turn... Nice written but there are some grammar mistakes..

The title of this novel is something that intrigued me. There aren't many stories here based on this theme- snake, venom and love( I might be wrong though but I haven't come across them). The author has done a great job in portraying the characters, keeping the mystery intact. The suspense of what actually will happen and what storyline is all about, will keep you hooked and waiting for future updates. This books needs editing but nothing that will hinder you from enjoying the world of fantasy romance author has created. For being the first draft, this story sure will surprise you with all what Author has planned for it. I'll surely recommend this 👍

As it happened with the author's other novels, I had a fun time reading it. The grammar could be corrected at some parts, nonetheless, it doesn't disturb the reading! Definitely recommend and keep it up!

With much enthusiasm and avidity the the author presents us with an engaging story. The storyline, as well as the presentation and design of the characters throughout the story, continue to be appealing and winsome. Sadly, I do have to add that there are some mistakes concerning grammar and vocabulary - and that 's alright, everyone makes them - yet I believe it is a pity since this work has some potential. It simply needs to be polished into the gem it might be. Overall, I find it to be a relaxing and engaging read, very suited for this platform. I wish you a lot of fun continuing your story.

A very much of a MUST READ thing for every romance and fantasy lover out there, who wants something to read a slightly CEO thing. With every turning of page author has skilfully made readers to hold their breaths. 😂😂 Yes it is full of surprises in every chapter.

Fantasy infused erotica, what more can you ask for? I have been following this Author for a while and her works have never disappoint me. Storyline and pace are very well thought out, with enough character exposure and drama to keep you on the edge of your seat. Give it a try, and you won't regret it.

It's going damn good with this 'Dating Chapter'.❤❤❤❤ What will happen if Sinclair find it? I'm really waiting for next updates to see who stopped Syna at the door.

The title attracted me first. The story is well-paced. Grammar is okay but needs some work (punctuation). I like the intense and funny relationship grown between the ML and MC. The mystery is intriguing.

It is something AWESOME and WORTH READING ❤ The concept is flawless and the efforts author has placed to bring out a new meaning of LOVE comparing it to VENOM is mind blowing. I don't know who is the male MC as one man appears only in first two chapters as far I've read. But I recommend to all romance lovers this book.

I must say it's a worth reading, wonderful experience. The synopsis itself is compelling to force the reader to dive in without hesitation. This is a uniquely written combination of fantasy and CEO romance with switching of POVs and definitely very different from regular billionaire stories. Give it a go for sure ;)

Everything is mysterious and remained like that till six chapters and I don't know who is the male lead. The author has created many things in just a few chapters yet many questions arises regarding every single chapter. ❤ It is a worth read to everyone.

Poisons and snakes, just whoa! 😮 This is something definitely new on webnovel. I highly recommend this to every romance and fantasy lovers. It's a love and lust narration with great vocabulary. The character in the car hissed like snake presented that either the author is obsessed with snakes or love this theme.

"LOVE IS A POISON" is something new to read at least I haven't saw this theme here. Absolutely a whole new style, the author has used POVs which are something different to see. Vocabulary and emotional balance is outstanding. A worth read fantasy ❤ Just try it.

A very different theme to read, though it's a CEO romance yet it's something intriguing to read. To compare love with poison is a new thing I read here at least. Give it a try for sure.

So the very first chapter is a little shaky but there further you go the better everything gets. There are a few POV's but still enjoyable. Oh and very steamy descriptions of hunklicious characters. 😀 And encounters. Wink, wink, nudge, nudge. Me likey. 😀😀😀 I thought I knew who the ML was and it revolved around him but I was very mistaken. The novel revolves around FL and her life she also has a connection with possible ML's father or grandfather? Still trying to figure that one out. Very interesting would like to know what happens done the road but there is only 6 chapters from when I did this review. Updates: There are only 6 chapters but you know what that's fine. Life is busy and being able to give time to write is amazing. So I always give 5 stars because you are doing your best. World: All you can really tell is it's in modern times. There isn't much description about everything but everyone has satin sheets. Oh la la, so chic. Aside from that the characters are well detailed and easily imaginable so that's a plus. Keep at it.