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Silent_Dawn
Hi, author here! First and foremost: Thank you for visiting this book and looking at it. If you want to read it, be my guest. If you want to comment or clarify things about the book, be my guest. I'll try to respond as quick as I can. The novel has elements of Fantasy, transmigration, and futuristic factors. Magic and technology co-exist, and the former develops the latter. The MC seems to start very strong, but realizes the God who gave him abilities used a hole in his requests, causing him the need to cultivate and be a magician, striving for Godhood (or more). He has the mind of a mid to late 20s man living in a futuristic world, and he is a cynic and values his life and safety above all else. He is rational, and calculates everything to the best that he could whether it is good for long term or short term periods. He has little to no romantic relationships being developed. He is open minded. Technically, he was a bisexual before he reincarnated, so anything goes for him. He would experience ambiguous scenarios with different species of different sexes, but 99.99% of the time, nothing romantic will develop. (Because he analyzes everything objectively and distantly these things) He has a set of general goals, which is: - Live safely, but discover the world, the universe, the Great Void. - Be powerful enough to protect those who he considers family and friends. - Never be affected by betrayal. - Find out the truth behind the "benevolent God" that sent him in Eteria's universe. Well, I hope you would love it. Thank you once again.
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Wolf_Savage_9952
this novel to me was nice seriously I really liked the book that is until i read the last 3 chapters that is Ch 41,42,43 I can't just think of any reason the MC did that he could have done something less psychopathic and achieve the same result so why did he do that is not as if they was a grave hatred between them I really want to understand the reason or is he affected by Somme sort of corruption ?. anyhow the novel is truly great until now it was perfect ( to me) and maybe stil good for those who love unstable MC
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naughtius_maximus
the book is really good. can't wait for chapter 113, I recommend it to anybody who's looking for a well written story with transmigration, action and sci fi
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Async0929
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The_Reviewer47
I'm not sure why this novel has more than 1 stars as a overall. This is absolutely idiotic. This novel is presented with a world which has both scientific elements and magic. If the magic system was explained properly in a scientific way then it would be absolutely brilliant. But, this takes normal science and mixes with elemental magic and we end up with a mix of mumbo jumbo that doesn't follow even a tiny bit of logic the novel itself sets. To explain, the main character has Space-Time affinity. The author doesn't understand how either of those work and so we end up with something like what we see in cultivation novels. Applied in even more idiotic way. The MC can accelerate or decelerate time relatively to his world, (which is ok) but he doesn't need to eat while he's doing it. For example, he teaches a sprite how to converse. So, he increases time flow for him and the sprite with a ratio of 3 years for them and 3 hours for his world. Once he's done teaching he comes back to have fucking dinner. Another one is the issue with banking. MC deposits millions in a bank at 2.5% interest which he knows will be functioning for next 2000 years because he has seen the future. Yes, MC can freely go back and forth in time and also view the future. MC gains valuable knowledge from the future, such as certain technologies being developed, world development, where to invest, information discovered from the future from ancient sites and so on and on. He wants that ancient site runes. So, he says he will go to the future to obtain it. When any normal person would go back to the ancient time period to learn that specific rune and much more. For all the authors out there, you can't time travel. Or, you can't time travel if you have logic in your world. As you can see, there's not much logic in this novel. Also, the above points are only the most irritating ones for me and haven't mentioned all the other stupid stuff in detail like creating the sprite, college enrollment and co-authoring a paper.
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BlackGod
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3RR0R_404
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3RR0R_404
๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ท๐Ÿ˜ท๐Ÿ˜ท๐Ÿ˜ท๐Ÿ˜ท๐Ÿ˜ท๐Ÿ˜ท๐Ÿ˜ท๐Ÿ˜ท๐Ÿ˜ท๐Ÿ˜ท๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ™‹๐Ÿ™‹๐Ÿ™‹๐Ÿ™‹๐Ÿ™‹๐Ÿ™‹๐Ÿ™‹๐Ÿ™Œ๐Ÿ™Œ๐Ÿ™Œ๐Ÿ™Œ๐Ÿ™Œ๐Ÿ™Œ๐Ÿ™Œ
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YoungMaster_MtTai
Don't really have mich to say except that i love the novel. It great and i enjoy the fleshed out magic system and his magic.
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3RR0R_404
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Doverow
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Doverow

I find this whole story pointless. why do I find it pointless? This is because he could have just gone to every empire (not just empires but others things too just working on the info I have) in the universe to get info on ways to get to god rank or to max rank. He could have then went to some random planet and stayed there until he can overrule the universe or multiverse. But this is a story meant for reading that does not happen even though everyone would probably do the same if put in the same place.
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7Setin7
I hope to see more soon, this is a very long story ... XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP
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Garmanderter
I love this novel, it explains the power and dedicates entire chapters for information on the world in which it is found, what in my opinion is necessary is a common talk without giving a sea of information, We are just at the beginning and I hope that in some the moment you focus less on it. And more what the protagonist does with the characters. The chapter upload is good, it does not give much for its extensive number of words, but not little. I hope to follow this novel in the future, continue like this author. (Some things were missing to comment but I am still satisfied with the novel)
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FrozenPhoenix
Very good book with an extremely detailed magic system and world building. MC is good. I appreciated reading it. Some sentences are weird sometimes but it's still easy to understand the meaning. I honestly hope that more people will read it and author will release more chapter's !
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Eternal_Ouroboros
Is this book perhaps the work of the divine? The writing Quality is outstanding for this site, itโ€™s also very well structured and easy to understand. World building is amazingly done with a lot of interaction with other countries, provinces cities, towns, even other planets, which includes interstellar relationships. ๏ฟผ๏ฟผ๏ฟผ๏ฟผ So far, the stability of the updates has been beautiful.๏ฟผ The character design is also a very strong point for this novel, from the main character to the secondary characters in the antagonist of the story. There is a lot of point of you change to make us, as readers, understand the inner workings of the plot and the scenarios. ๏ฟผ๏ฟผ๏ฟผ Overall, the story development is easy to follow, interesting and engaging as a reader and pulls me into it and practically forces me to read more.๏ฟผ๏ฟผ This book is definitely one of my top rankings , I love it๏ฟผ!!
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4_greenbeans
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Imposible
you make a good novel interesting, seriously actually want to read more please multiply update 1 day a few chapters :) .................................... ..................... ............. ..
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_Leylin_
This novel is very detailed with perfect background creation for the mc, world, universe, empires and all related to power! The chapters are long but they are easy to read and you don`t want to stop reading! For sure with the amount of care this novel has it can become a new book! I`m in love with it!!!!!
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Ethan132
Honestly if this book doesnโ€™t deserve 5 stars in everything then no book does, it is a well thought out book with thought that transcends most authors abilityโ€™s to provide reason to the power the mc has. Amazing book well done author and thank you!!!
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Nereid
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First off, love the way space-time powers are used. On of the few stories where I can legitimately see that a young child would be able to be that much of a genius. And the way scientific terms are wound in is good. My main issue is I canโ€™t really relate to why he is so desperate to travel out of the world(enough to spend hundreds of years researching one spell)- I may have missed something? And the lack of emotionally meaningful side characters.Though Iโ€™m only around 30 chapters in so may develop in future. Anyway good writing- keep it up:)
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Lord_Fujin
It's a very well written webnovel, unfortunately I'm feeling a Yaoi vibe and it's just not my area. ....................... ....................... ......................
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Hiro_uzumaki06
The story is very good, being one of my favorites. Readers who want MC with OP and a good story can read this one but there is too much information dumping in the chapters. Overall this is one story that I recommend to read at least till for 10-20 chapters. The story gets on your mind as it moves.
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yaboihae
This is criminally underrated because the story talks about time and space concepts like he has a degree and brings up ideas I never thought about.Op protagonist though it could be a positive or negative but it doesn't bother me.
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Wow. Just wow. I am speechless. This book is an amazing one. The Author has a deep knowledge of many aspects and it shows in his work. The world-building is measured, the MC relatable and sensible, the other characters are developing steadily and the story is unique. The author's take on space-time powers is perhaps one of the best I have ever read. The story itself has depth and there is a specific, in-depth explanation for every phenomenon in the story. It is truly an amazing novel. We understand the different character motivations yet there is still a measure of suspense. Author, you have done a fantastic job and I would definitely recommend this novel for anyone who wants to read it. You will not be disappointed.
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Yousef_Amayri
Thanks for this amazing novel I liked it actually very much but there is a point I am not sure why did you make him very cruel to all the people that maybe will effect him a bit bad by erasing them from the universe like that woman husband and her 2 children or grandchildren and remove the teacher if you look closer they are not bad people they just question him you could make the teacher forget everything from what happened??
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DraconicWulf
its good sofar ........................................................................... ..........................................................
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SolarXWings
A well-written novel that almost seems like a mash-up of a sci-fi and cultivation novel. It also focuses a lot on the theory of his powers. The only complaint is that so far there have only been a few battles scenes with the fist one literally named Battle.
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Firehawk81
Really good book! Hope you keep on writing! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
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TempestWolf1013
All i have to say is that this is one of the most perfect original novels on here that isnโ€™t translated plz keep doing what your doing and keep it up
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SirMemes
Sorry Iโ€™m not really good at putting my thoughts to words. This story is really well and I really enjoy reading this! Itโ€™s always cool to see creative ways to make power systems, use powers, etc!
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Daoist922237
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