Chapter comments on the chapter The best time to be rescued of the book Sex Stories

The story started strong but you lost your way in the middle and couldn't fix it from then on. Just make sure each part is strong and build on it. Your writing is great and I'm looking forward to your next story.

Ero_Saint, your writing is really good and yes i enjoyed your book. However, yes the ending was very anti-climax but i understand when you have no idea coming up its really difficult. All the best in all your other books and i have start with the Astral womaniser.....

Can i get ur invitation id?

Overall I enjoyed the story

This one was good but my favorite part now is ryu and amanda

I really loved the story and it was wonderful

Good

It was so amazing, don't worry

Hmm!i little quick for the ending though..but over all i love your story and it's not too late to improve more in which you're lack in dear author!we're still looking forward for the next story of yours and just keep it up!👍👍👍💜💜💜

A bummer tho that i didnt read the part were he did it with his mother

True this arc is such huge let down for me I hope nxt arc is gonna be good keep up the good work bro

You gotta add how he gets his own mother

Need tittle

Thx

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I was hoping there are detail sex scene about amanda and ryu

Nice💋

Nice💋

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I wish you good luck