Reviews of While Others Cultivate, I Use My Unique RPG Leveling System to Cultivate Smut Romance With Their Girlfriends! by MotivatedSloth - Webnovel

This is a story that strikes a unique balance, a realistic balance. The mc is not a smartass, badass, or a emo drama con like most of the other novels. The protagonist has more realistic behaviour than most stories, with his unique character flaws and quirks. Both negative and positive aspects. Hence when reading this book, you have to keep in mind that it's not a story about you or your hero, but a unique realistic character. He makes mistakes, he gets lazy time to time, sometime he panicks, and sometimes he banters, but those are in small amounts and personal quirks. Most of the time he is smooth and cool. The other characters (most non villains) are like that realistic, each with their personal quirks, both good and bad, albeit sometimes a bit weird. But that's on the aspect on it's in a cultivation world, different culture, different perspectives. And lastly this has hands down the best system so far, like a good partner also with it's own unique quirks! On the other hand if you readers enjoy reading something that is not OP, badass, smart ass, get all the girls harem king, picture perfect, god and demon worships hero. But a rather more slow realistic pacing and approach, even with it's own setbacks from certain situations. Then you will definitely love it. The only down side of this book is, that like so many other author, has more other works, and thus makes the chapter quite short. While an author might think he needs to keep up with daily releases. It's not a big deal if it's a chapter every 2 or 3 days. That way readers can still enjoy it after coming back after a week or 2. But noooooo, the horrors! Sometimes the chapter so short, that you won't even feel like reading anything even after bingeing 2 chapters. Thankfully it's only some chapters like that. I wish you all a good read, support the author by atleast unlocking chapters by paid coins, and hopefully stockpile 10 chapters before each read.

okay I know I'm too early to write a review but I'm going to update this.I'm at chaptr 2 and I feel like I'm not high enough to read this..................

Started off great. but after ch 250-300 range, it really started to lose its spunk. MC randomly because brain-dead, sooo much info-dumps, and soo little progression in the story.

This author explains everything too much. MC talks in his mind while comments everything he see. If he talks a line, he will think and talk to himself in his mind 3 paragraphs. Its annoying to read all those. Wastage of time on focusing unwanted things. Novel is good except that.

I like this novel. The MC is very immature though, which gets annoying really fast.

amazing read ngl it was the only book I have been able to actually read through in years

great story really enjoyable but man the writing quality is rough, highly recommend seeking out a proofreader, not trying to be rude but honest

Just reading this synopsis makes me feel offended but as long as mc us not a simp it's cool! Lololololololololololololololololololololooololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololol

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Prepare for a lot of Facepalm :D Nice conception btw, can't wait what still coming. Skill system looks smooth, many funny idea, but sometimes too childish.. What I really miss is character details..

The writing style gets confusing, you don't know if the writing is referring to the MCs thoughts or something else. Doesn't do justice for the name of the novel, you seriously consider the time line where the story takes place it lasts a few months at most the rest is in his imagination towards the end. Serious accusations on other novels when this own novel is such a subpar work.

Tambahkan ulasan Kualitas Terjemahan Memperbarui Stabilitas Pengembangan Cerita Desain karakter latar belakang dunia Tarif Keseluruhan 5.0 Ulasan harus lebih dari 140 karakter

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This is my first review in two years. This story is terrible. It is a entertaining read, but the author refused to check grammar. The mc refuses to read books. He basically wings it with the help of a system when he could save time if he just read the books in the world. It is like he has 3rd grade syndrome

While the writing can be difficult to understand at times, I have enjoyed all of the misadventures of Bart and Bonger. Each character has enough development that you can't tell if they are a persistent character or a passing face, which makes it feel like a real world.

Good novel, however, the title is a bit misleading. The MC only ever has one girlfriend although he does have *** with other people. He's also not super smart, so be prepared for a realistic story with some insane but reasonable power creep.

I only have one word for this novel, one word only. Are you curious about my one word too? Why so curious? Stop reading to find out my one word man. Omg, please stop being so curious. Curiosity will kill the cat, don't you know this. Fine, seeing how you're so desperate to know my one word. It's collection. What's collection? Obviously, it's adding this novel to your library fool.

A novel with a good but unfortunately wasted premise. -There is too much silly drama, almost everything is taken out of proportion. Whether the it is for romance or action, the spontaneous events happening around mc are not realistic. eg: Mc could be going to the shop only to find random enemies, girlfriend is attacked even though they should be completely alone. -No set up for the change of tone in the story, eg:quickly shifting from action to romance to dark. The events in the novel don't feel connected and is jarring. -Themes being added without any build up. The novel will shift from lighthearted to dark without any build up, catching those not interested in the dark themes unaware. -Whenever mc tries to say something wise, I can't help but think its pretentious eg:reminds me of my experience with naruto spouting platitudes. The feeling i get from the novel is like someone trying to explain something they don't understand. The novel would be better in my opinion... if it focused on a few themes from the beginning and had gradual development of the various events. Still worth reading but there isn't much to immerse in, only good for a casual read.

una historia excelente con un oc con mucho potencial además de poderosos inteligente que no tiene problemas para con engañar y aprovecharse de las situaciones

En primer lugar, hasta ahora no pude encontrar la novela validando su introducción y obviamente el nombre ... Por encima de todo, el personaje de MC parece un poco idiota, sí, a veces los cambios fueron apreciables para mejorar el estado de ánimo, pero la mayor parte de la historia se llenó. con sus pensamientos hipócritas y delirantes con la menor parte del desarrollo de la historia incluso después de más de 150 capítulos ... Esperando que el ritmo mejore a medida que avanza la historia ...

Esta es una historia que logra un equilibrio único, un equilibrio realista. El MC no es un listillo, un rudo o un drama emo como la mayoría de las otras novelas. El protagonista tiene un comportamiento más realista que la mayoría de las historias, con sus defectos y peculiaridades de carácter únicos. Aspectos positivos y negativos. Por lo tanto, al leer este libro, debe tener en cuenta que no es una historia sobre usted o su héroe, sino un personaje realista único. Comete errores, se vuelve perezoso de vez en cuando, a veces le entra el pánico y, a veces, bromea, pero son pequeñas cantidades y peculiaridades personales. La mayor parte del tiempo es tranquilo y sereno. Los otros personajes (la mayoría no villanos) son así de realistas, cada uno con sus peculiaridades personales, tanto buenas como malas, aunque a veces un poco extrañas. Pero eso está en el aspecto de que está en un mundo de cultivación, una cultura diferente, diferentes perspectivas. Y, por último, este tiene sin duda el mejor sistema hasta ahora, ¡como un buen socio también con sus propias peculiaridades! Por otro lado, si los lectores disfrutan leyendo algo que no es OP, rudo, asno inteligente, consiga a todas las chicas rey del harén, imagen perfecta, dios y demonio adoran al héroe. Pero un ritmo y un enfoque bastante más lento y realista, incluso con sus propios contratiempos en determinadas situaciones. Entonces definitivamente te encantará. El único inconveniente de este libro es que, como tantos otros autores, tiene más obras y, por lo tanto, hace que el capítulo sea bastante corto. Mientras que un autor podría pensar que necesita mantenerse al día con los lanzamientos diarios. No es gran cosa si es un capítulo cada 2 o 3 días. De esa manera, los lectores aún pueden disfrutarlo después de regresar después de una semana o 2. ¡Pero noooooo, los horrores! A veces el capítulo es tan corto, que ni siquiera te apetece leer nada incluso después de atracones de 2 capítulos. Afortunadamente, son solo algunos capítulos como ese. Les deseo a todos una buena lectura, que apoyen al autor desbloqueando al menos capítulos con monedas pagadas y, con suerte, acumulen 10 capítulos antes de cada lectura.

I found many problems for this story 1) the title is totally wrong for the story 2) at the beginning the protagonist had the stats str agi etc .. so it is assumed that by increasing the agility you are not slow later around 300 cap the protagonist has trouble moving because he says he is slightly faster than a normal person 3) always around cap 300 he is in the sea and like an idiot to jump the current he uses shockwave and destroys the boat but I say but you don't have the skill of flight??? 4) towards chapters 200 the story has gone from good to worse mc seems to have become stupid continues to do nothing except to offend people without having available strength, we begin that the girl eve tells him about the family and reveals his name only to bring useless trouble just because the cousin found mc 5) when he was going berserk mc he almost killed one of a realm higher than the so-called cousin then when he calmed down after a few chapters that goes to fight against the cousin does so many di those attacks that he almost loses 6) the stats of the mc seem to be worth something at the beginning then they seem useless with the passage of time 7) as soon as the story begins he does it with stella the teacher of the sect at least I think like a normal person after doing it at least you will talk a little or something but no it says that eva is waiting for her and okay then star seems to disappear as if nothing happened between them 8) when she goes to the Forbidden Forest for the 2nd time she meets pengu that after a fight of life or death he remains almost dry but manages to absorb the excess energy and becomes very strong almost as much as he but after he says sorry and gives him his weapon because he is sorry 9) the fourth time in the forest forbidden manages to kill an action of a sect and after a few days several disciples arrive from different sects.Here I would like to point out that it took him a while to get to the city arena so the distance in this novel becomes worrying, various disciples arrive and after having seen that pengu was injured he goes crazy and kills an old woman with the pea by putting it in her after he beats the various disciples and rapes some girls already here one thinks that maybe the story will be that he is a bit evil and goes to various girls from various clans and he manages to conquer them but no after raping several girls he takes one to make her the future sect master of the sect so the teacher can "graduate" and go to a higher sect riore, 10) in the later chapters he destroys a city and keeps saying to himself I'm not a monster when you first chapters he raped 2 people and he gets so emotional that I almost stopped reading the story there are other flaws in the story but there are some throats by chance, towards the first chapters the story was good then it got worse and worse honestly I don't recommend it just reading this story it seems to me that mc is just a person with a system that the only thing that has not been understood is if it is needed to to get stronger or not, now I keep reading the story just to see if it gets better but it seems like it is getting worse and worse Sorry for my english

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in the overall I think the novel is good, it has some things that I don't love but it's a great novel. In my opinion the fact that you have to unlock some chapters doesn't matter but if you don like it you can read a lot of chapters that are free

I cant quite put into words how it feels to read this as when i began it was pretty cringy for the first 100 or so chapters then it slowly left only to be replaced by randomness wether it be with the stalling of the plot or most importantly semmingly making the main character op for the first 250 chapter only the then be useless and i wont even attemt to try to understand the thinking behind the mc thoughts all in all i would not recommend this as theirs far better ones in the same genre and it just feels like the story was made to feel cringy and a bit of a mess in terms of how its structured

jumps cultivation levels akwardly sometimes and pacing is all over the place. the backbobe of the story is alright even if I'm not a fan of some parts and the mc's major plot armor sometimes the stories ok.

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The book starts with a not so popular high-school kid who is a virgin who is great at *** (granted it OP system given). nerd to Norse God can't happen in 30 chapters.

story is good but the writer is way too much elaborating different stuff...I mean for a simple action he adds or prolongs more sentences which makes me bored to continue to read the "bullshit inner mind dialogue" of mc....😑😑🤔😑😑😑😑😑