Heya! Shameless author here! After writing more than 1 lakh words, I felt like I wasn't satisfying the readers on WN. So, this time, I'm back with something refreshing and new. An extremely strong headed FL, and a protective and encouraging (*maybe* 😜) ML.
I hope that my new novel will satisfy the maiden hearts of my readers!
A slow start, you get introduced to characters right away and learn about their background almost instantly. The FL is not someone to mess with, she's very two faced. She flips from sweet to sour at a drop of a dime but it works. As for creativity it's still involving the rich so it's not that far off from what most people like with a FL that isn't fair skinned with a pair of Huskies.
Writing: It's actually pretty decent. My only problem is that the some of the descriptive words don't match what's written. If someone is yelling why not end the sentence with an exclamation mark but instead it was ended with a question mark. Made things a little confusing. Or if Mishka was yelling a question then use both to express the point. There was also another part were Sara smiles then says something and that was the only sentence in the whole paragraph. You could have easily expanded it.
Stability: I know everyone is busy and life doesn't go as expected especially now that it's December. I don't know about you but for me it's hard to get chapters out. Don't forget to at least get one out a week people are waiting to see updates.
World: you always let readers know where the place is but you can definitely expand on the world itself. You do a great job with explaining the characters surrounding and what they wear but we only seen places not the actual world. Honestly this is the hardest part in writing. Giving information without overloading someone and not having it take up most of the chapter is a true art. If you can find the balance you can really blossom.
Dialogues include emotions. It is great that the author can write such interesting dialogs. For me, this is an example of how to write them! Wow!
I was in India, no one is robbing jewelry shops there, probably simple guards with double-barreled shotguns near the door are such a simple reminder that there is nothing for the lads to do. And the robbers are aware of "probably the one who holds this place" and therefore they twitch once again. As it was interesting to observe the transportation of money in a bank bus, the guards were also with double-barreled guns. Not typical. Usually it’s armored cars, accompanied by the collection service and the police, armed with pistols or machine guns ... but this is already offtopic.
The first chapter instills a sense of mystery, do you think this is a mafia? Maybe a criminal sidikat? Powerful clan? Or something even cooler?
The chapters are dynamic, not too long, but not too short, skillfully convey the intrigue of history. It is read simply. Intrigue persists.
I wonder why they shine in the 7 star hotel? It seems that one of the classics said - money loves silence.
How cruel everything is ... but the world of jewels probably goes hand in hand with crime. Tin, it's some kind of dark Tao.
This is a good story, it started well, and the story went well, I hope to see you soon ........................... .................................................. .................................................. ..
A great piece of work. The quality of the writing is excellent. The characters are on point. The FL really fits the plot and the story. The story line is progressing well right from the first chapter. A very good read.
The story is just 10 chapters in at the moment but it's so good that I can't wait for the author to update what happens next.
This work is a gem in the making and I am glad to have stumbled upon it.
All the best for your future endeavors, Author!
It's a really sweet story. It was a kind of story that no one can hate. The CEO female lead and loving husband.., I am anticipating the story. But I will collect chapters for now and binge read them. Because I am a reader to read around 200-300 ch in one sitting.
Hi guyzzz...... if anyone out there is waiting for any unique combination of ML and FL this novel will help u. The novel has an interesting story line where the FL is a dominating one and the ML is a cool guy with approachable attitude. Do read it......☺️
Hello, I am another reader of this novel, writing a review.
⭐ WRITING QUALITY~ Though I'm not very great with grammar, the story is understandable and super easy to read. It goes with the flow.
⭐ STABILITY OF UPDATES~ Though the updates are not stable, I gave it 5 stars, because I felt that this book has potential. And, lastly, the author has mentioned her reasons why she is not updating regularly. ✌
⭐ STORY DEVELOPMENT~ Just 9 chapters, but the story has a regular pace, neither too fast nor too slow. 👌
⭐CHARACTER DESIGN~ The characters is sketched accurately and beautifully. Imagination is great.
⭐ WORLD BACKGROUND~ The author has tried her best to bring out the background of the story, its settings and all.
I will recommend everyone to read this story.
Keep up your good work!
Strong FL is a badass!!! Henpecked ML is a bonus (hehe😚)
The development of the characters is progressively build up.
There’s these some thrill and mysterious vibes from the storyline.
I can’t wait to connect all the dots of all that. Seriously recommended to everyone checking out this novel.
P/s: To the author~ Don’t give up! Your stories have been awesome. Keep up with the good work😘