Writing Quality: 4/5 I think my grammar sucks... there is no doubt about that, but I'd like to say its well written...
Stability of Updates: 2/5 ... I already said I was a slow updater... I'm sorry
Story Development: 5/5 I think that's just a personal opinion, I like the development.
Character Design: 5/5 I spent a long time on these characters, actually I started this book about 5 years ago... and most of these characters are inspired person I know in really life, don't worry, they know who they are~
World Background: 5/5 Bits and pieces are scattered through out the whole and nothing will be fully describe as I did when I was finalizing everything...
I really enjoyed creating this book, although its not all written down yet, I know whats going to happen. I must say that I really did want to make this book really messed up, and when I write it I might actually sensor most of it out of the book it self... It can be said that most of the relationships in this book will definitely not be a healthy one.
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