You're doing great, Lizabelle88. It's definitely not easy to write.
However, I wish that your storyline will stop going back and forth. For example, Allison lost consciousness the other night, nothing was said about what happened next. Then a woman who was tied was shot dead, and no further info was given about that. Then all of a sudden, Allison is back hale and hearty.
There is justice and there is karma in life. What one sows is what one reaps especially if there is no change or repentance. Unless your story is trying to teach us otherwise - that evil people like Allison are so lucky that they get away with every bad thing they do.
IamDikachi