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daedpool18888
this is one of the best books i've read in all the e-book apps. the story is really well thought out to the point of how many slaves come to baymard and how to divide them in various sectors for efficiency and effectiveness. love this book. I'll make sure to read it till the end no matter how long it takes.
also hats off to the author, you did extremely well with this book. hope to see many other books by you in the futureππ
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Nafis3642
This novel kingdom building time is too fast. The author use too much explanation when not needed but too little when needed. Plus too many wrong information. Like Muslim vs byzantine empire in chapter 379 . 200 Muslim ship's won against 500 byzantine ships . But the author said that byzantine won by a huge mergin. Plus author doesn't know about real world technology. People have automatic door but not a camera?
Author also doesn't know how king's work.
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Akira_101
PERFECT for me!
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Rishi_is_here
This has always been of my favs, the daily lives of the people, the way the world progresses, the people's reaction to stuff is always such a delight to read. I just want to thank you author for writing this one and hope you continue this as long as you can
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majid_f64
Love the story. It takes a little time and couple of chapters to get used to the story but it's worth it. The world building is particularly awesome.
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Megan_Braceian
I think this book is really good that it deserves its own manga and anime adaption. When will you update on freewn again?
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Solar606
A beautiful world that feels lived in and the author gives so many characters their own lives and struggles. The concept is amazing and uses it to keep the direction of the story going with different challenges the protagonist must face. This series is dear to me.
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Robbie_Ocasio
The novel feels like it is rushed at the beginning. MC gets an iron ore mine and automatically pumping out steam engines, as if it only takes iron. All characters are too 1 dimensional. RTW and TOS are much better alternatives to read.
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Kasamplanka
I honestly like reading it but the repetition in the writing is annoying. After 1100 chapters, you can no longer ignore it when the author sais, "one should know...'info dump'...",or "yes,bla bla bla", and the worst of all 6 different paragrpahs after that explaining the same thing with different words. like we get it.You also don't need 4 chapters to explains how a fleet is moving to land with the same exact words used abuot every other fleet and army thats about to fight you don't need 4 chapters for that. Also the "play time is over" comment about obviously people 'fighting' using '30%'of their power then next chapter after that comment, boom 2 paragraphs describing how the 'good guys' absolutely dumpestered the enemy...Then we have the usual grammatical errors still, and ofcourse the plot armour which is, 'fine'.
'Solid' 7/10...maybe
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Mr_Fringhe_77
A very fun and lighthearted read. Greatly looking forward to the future phases of development of Baymard as more AT is unlocked.
Lovely book.But sometimes it's slow, most of the story is about production and development of economy. Anyway the author is fantastic
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unusedUser123
I love your novel, I hope you continue to the end of what you have planned for this novel
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joky
Let's go with the good first:
= the story is great - it's about introducing technology to medieval world that have some level of fantasy
= not that technical - most of the time author just explain 1 aspect then continue the story
= a bit like slice of life - not too many inside problem, most of the time mc just try to solve outside his kingdom problem, the problem inside the kingdom usually solve by introducing more technology
Now the bad stuff:
= editor - this novel seriously need a good editor, too many misspelled or wrong choice of word, there also grammar problem but not major in my problem, even mc name sometimes misspelled, this is really big problem that want me to stop reading the novel
= ending of an arc - some of the arc just end abruptly, there is no aftermath details
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LasagnaSEAFOOD
It's not an ultimate story, but it's fun in its own way.
Has this work been dropped or is it on hiatus? Why it seems so slow and paused the updates.
Well will Lucy and Landon have a son or daughter?
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WorldEnder
I renounce everything that contradicts with islamic law
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TheHighElite
a solid 4 star story I enjoyed personally however was this dropped or its on Hiatus?
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Kelfie
OK I don't know how you do it dee but you blew my mind with this one .. ...this is like one of my fav stories continue doing what you do best dee
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Althea_Jane_Alger
i re read this again untill i catch up to the new update/chapter
and i love it, how baymard rose
looking forward to more chapters!
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OracleOphi
Needs more chapters at a faster rate of release (needs to ve 30 chapters a week or quicker), and there is too much filller or reminders of past things/events. Also too much blabbing and not enough getting straight to the intended actuons/events/scenarios
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Enlightened_Noob
Author must be either high or a kid when he was writing this. This is the epitome of wish fulfilment novel. I mean to building Engines within 3-4 months of transmigrating in a 10th century era. And this is just in 55 chapters. I wonder how the author was able to write 1500 chapter like this.
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July_Xiao
La historia es buena para tomar un cafΓ© β mientras les la novela.β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’
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Joseph99
This story is really an amazing story , and I will like to call the attention of the author to some things
- No motorcycle: we knew about the invention of car , bus , train , bicycle but there is no motorcycle a society cannot be without motorcycle
- Guns: please give us a list of the guns that has been created , because in all the missions it is only pistol ( puei puei ) nothing like Ak47 and all that
Once more this story is an amazing story , am waiting for when he will go to another world , keep up the good work[img=recommend][img=update]
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nuerien
i love in chapter 800 they have black people watch tv for the first time and have them already doing the stereotype yelling at the screen always good to get a reminder of racism
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Lili544
This story Is really amazing the how it devel is astounding. How many chapters will this story have by the time itβs done πππππππππππ€£
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Geeta_Chaudhary_0475
This review after reading 700 chapter .I am kinda disappointed your changing the world with technology and giving correct morals about life but you supported polygamy in this novel don't you think it is morally incorrect . Instead forming good law, your giving future generations another way to torment women.Author please don't support such vulgarity
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Fahrenx
a fine read but overly ambitious, probably won't end as planned.
pace is on the fast side of the teconogy advancements, and slow on the plot. mc was/is too soft handed in the way it used its jail for me.
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