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Oveja
a good novel with a slow pace your mc is the kind that is shy from the beginning and the slow pace of the novel don't make it better but the plot is good and i see more future in this that in all that cultivation crap in this place.
and if you can go and see it on the Scribble Hub in that page you can see the potential of the novel just for the effort that make the author in making a better imersion with his details
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Tasal
Long story short, the MC is Beta. A ******** Beta... Like SERIOUSLY HARDCORE BETA, reading about the mc is like someone watching someone in a wheelchair try to run in the Olympics, it hurts to watch
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doogylit
It's so slow! Hardly anything happened in the first 14 chapters. Every little thought and motive has its own story and explanations. It goes on and on about the details. It's really testing my patience. I don't mind a slow development but nothing is happening. It hasn't been established what the protagonist wants to do. There's slight hints of yandere. I really just came for the yandere and some mediocre and sometimes new plot.
All that has happened so far can be written in like 4 or less chapters. I like how the author thinks and I like his pacing but they are taking too long on minor developments and explanations.
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I_love_Rem
I give 5 stars just for name yandere harem.....The plot of novel is good so far and author make art for this himself , you could look at it in scribblehub chapters or join author's discord...... Well that aside as the tag mentioned , the starting plot is a bit slow , first volume is just prologue and intro of characters and world building and no yandere qualities appeared as of chapter 30 but it looks like we are going to get one soon.....
Arianuri