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Loyalscum
Hi guys author here just wanted to let you know that i am working on 2 books at the same time whitch is very stupid of me considering im an ******* writer but you know YOLO. I just really that his second on would be an intresting and uneque take on an over saturated plaid out idea were people put little effort into making it uneque. Ill update once every other day sunday and monday less likly to update. Plz leve comments and check out other book just started publishing 3 days ago. So not much but it the other book as a uneque direction i see no one else taking so be patient and keep visiting.
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Kheeta
A soul gets thrown into a different world, lost and confused it manages to find a perfect vessel for itself – a dead old man. On its way to a town the man manages to obtain some monster cores and decides to use his new found wealth to realize his long time dream – becoming an old crazy bum. But nothing good lasts for long, a week later after scavenging for food in the trash he decides to go for a walk and unexpected happens. Turns out the magical fantasy world he is in has magic in it, so the man has a sudden change of heart, he decides to pursue his new found dream – magic. Will this crazy dead old man become the greatest wizard sorcerer in the world? I can't wait to find out!
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Sebastiaan
ok im not best in explaining stuff but im a veteran reader here and i know a good book when i see one and this is a really good one and the character design is really good havent spotted any flaws yet updating stability good enough the world background is perfect no unnecesarry bs story developement is really good not perfect but really good and writing quality is one of the best you can find in webnovel cuz most of webnovel fics is just made by horny kids that force authors to destroy good concepts and this is really good stuff and probably eont be F.ed up
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The_One_Below_All
What an underrated book this is. I thhink that this is a great novel with lots of potential. The world is very unique and the story is exciting. I cannot wait for the next chapter to arrive.
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Kenringdomstorys
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Hewwo_Jesus
By far this is amazing and it deserves as much love as the author gave this. The MC is completely tortured by the world and it seems as if everything is against him. You feel bad for him and everyone feels so real and besides how beautiful the world is it's completely crazy.
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Rasm545e
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LongWang
Hi there really like your story. It's well written it's well developed and really like the main character he's not like other novel's were mc is just stupid and gets his powers out of nowhere. Well that's my review keep up the good work.
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TwistedMage
I don't really even right reviews, but here goes. This is one of my favorite books in the whole site, which is saying something because I read alot of books. It has an amazing world building, Great characters, and it's very well written. There are some small gramatical errors, but the writing quality is still very easy to understand. The character develpment is slow but steady and doesn't seem forced. The only thing I could complain about is that the MC isn't overpowered enough. The fact that I like the overpowered MC but still read this book even though it doesn't have one just proves the books quality. I would rate this very highly and recommend that it should be read.
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Thisone
How this has got so many 4-5 stars is shocking. The main character is completely useless. After 100 chapters he is still the same sniveling idiot coward that he started out as.
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InHisName
This novel has tonnes of potential. First of all it's the entire grind. You, as the reader will not only be going through step-by-step of the MC's rise to power, but also about how his journey affect him as a person. Every incident changes a part of him, he doesn't stay the same. That's something I really like about this novel, the characterisation when it comes to the protagonist is on-point! Hmm, as for vibes I'd say it's close enough to Warlock of the Magus World. General world building is same too, but the author takes his own creative license on it, making it unique in several others. Maybe consider it as WMW with a dash of D&D and Warhammer. Best of all, the author has promised us a truly evil MC. I'm looking forward to following the author all the way until the MC is swallowing entire worlds for power!
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Chrissy239
The writing it self isn't that bad but it constantly switches between first and third person, quotation marks are often missing and it is impossible to tell when someone is thinking something or saying it aloud or when sentences are a character's thoughts or the narrator's. There is a few grammar mistakes as well that make it very jarring to read.
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flyingshenanagens
Ok here is my review: this story is well writin, the characture( specifically) the main one-is very relatable. Very well fleshed out- as you feel like your trying to survive with him. I love that he comes up with all these ways to survive with the things and abilities and tricker pies he had available. Uploads are consistent but it's never enough for me because the story is so fun to read-but it's all good. All around super story telling -very ruthless world-love the different relationships the main character has made.
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mt805
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Loving this book as of chapter 39. I find it pretty unbelievable that it only has 184k viewers as of now. This story is worth reading. Ironically, I started reading this book because it had the "overpowered" tag, but this MC starts from just about the lowest point I've ever seen. I'm glad the author wrote it that way though. We get to see what the MC goes through which will affect what kind of person he becomes. If you're wondering whether to read this book or not, I'd definitely suggest you give it a shot.
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Ancient_
It'll really be nice if you don't justify his evilness and for there not to be a lot of character building. Fictitious u uh uninhibited oni 8n uh I'm
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HumbleWargod
Honestly enjoying this book. The mc’s life is really good. Going from fear to mad to normal(sometimes sounds naive). But it’s fun watching him grow. Just hope the book doesn’t get dropped.
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darkplease
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Marchioly
Good story with consistent updates. The MC is a clever and ruthless individual who has amnesia after a unique transmutation scenario. I would strongly recommend.
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holson_Charles
Read it to chapter 14 before I took a break will probably read it again when I have nothing else to read... writing quality up to chapter 14 is a 5/5 at the time I was reading it... story development didn’t see any of it yet (read to chapter 14) but got huge potential... it is a good read.. this is a story about a weak soul getting a weak old man body struggling while trying to learn and understand is environment..good story but not my cup of tea..
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UnhinderedWanderer
I the unhindered wanderer who has wondered across countless novels in my short 2 year time in this webnovel universe for the fact that you have given me the longest and also the most interesting synopsis that was interesting to fully read but has also drawn me in take this 5 star review young writer
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ScrapMetal
It’s an interesting story, the author is building the MC up, literally building him so there is a good amount of development. The world is pretty complex and there are quite a few details in the writing that allow you to visualize the world, such as walls, statues, streets, etc. The descriptions are pretty vivid. I won’t say much to spoil it but it’s a pretty original take on a popular genre so I would definitely recommend it.
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BorderlineAnorexic
Overall the story is great. I like how you didn't follow many of the the usual tropes like other novels. I like a little bit of originality. My only issue is the typos that pop up occasionally in chapter. Besides that, I have no issues. If you haven't checked this novel out yet guys then do so. You won't be disappointed.
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Wakiem
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This web is great for many reasons such at this time there is 26 chapters When you make a evil MC it is evil a reason and will stop anything to get and will be swayed by love, friends ect Two it magic system is great Three over all just give it a read Four the author replays when you say something
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SamStrike_
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This novel has an interesting idea and the world really is unusual. The problem is grammar and the fact that author switches from third person pov to first person pov randomly which makes it hard to follow. Updates are stable but more focus on quality is required in order for this novel to have a bright future
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CherShootX
So here goes my review: I like how the way the prologue was made. The Author definitely had a good grasp on English, although there is some typo here and there but who was free from it? The premise of the story is interesting and unique. Although for me, I prefer a shorter paragraph. Yeah, definitely recommend this novel to be read.
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LionCCG
It was a well explained, the story I very much liked reading it you really did a great job on explaining the situation that was happening. keep going with the hard work I hope to see more of this novel in the future.
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Abdirah101
I love novels that have a smooth, relaxing ride and this novel is one of them. Though it does have quite a few mistakes with grammar and punctuation.
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