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lazylyn
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ajtrinket8392
I love that this consists of Lexi and Matthew's story starting and continuing from Offer to the CEO π€ your character development is amazing, and it you always amazed me with every new detail given about who a character was. My only qualms are that I wish you has a Beta to help with any spelling or grammatical errors in your work, as it can be a bit confusing at times and there is no sense of what time of year/how time is moving in the story. It's rarely mentioned what time of year it is, the first I truly remember was Christmas time.
Please keep writing because I would love a story about James and Alecia's time in Australia!!!
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DaoistURtHh0
Not bad a story, bit difficult to read lots of gramatical errors. But I like the plot aand how tthe storyline developing into. Interestiiing story. When read few chapters only you could understand what
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niddaii
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Carefree_Sensei
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Kasey_Pierce_9891
Yoooooooooooo this book Idk I need points maybe itβs really dope thoughhhhhhh ahhh hhueieiehehsklsnsnsbsjsuduhdhrnrkeoeppwkwjwjwhehehjdjdjfjdndjsjsj
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Ajk_Melon
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ujunwanweke
Interesting and amazing story and I can't wait to start reading it immediately ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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Jay_Pee_8377
This is a nice novel. I highly recommend it, guys.... More updates please...πππππππππππππ―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―ππππππππππ
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PurplePoohBear
I loved this author's first novel and this 2nd novel does not disappoint. The story is solid and the characters are beautifully fleshed out. There are minor grammatical errors. The author just needs a dependable editor to iron out those small issues. Sadly, I was originally her editor, but I flaked out on her. I apologize again dear author. This author updates regularly and is serious about making a good novel. I think we'll see her works published on major platforms some day.
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Kora_McGuire
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ujunwanweke
What a beautiful and interesting story πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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kylieortiz183
It looks like an interesting piece but I wonder if this one secret won't drive them apart... Well done author all the best with your piece..
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manishajha10
Nice story. Should write more. characters are really good. Quite emotional. It broke my heart thinking about soldiers. Male character description is really good.
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Atria25
Looks interesting I like the concept of him being a soldier. Protect and serve and ready when a waiting
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alashifa
you story about BL story...
i read 2 chapter early but more about BL family...
and not like a review you give...
is spoiler me to read it...
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Thanya_Cadayon
It's beautiful story and I like it ... although the character development is still on process but i think its still good...πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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hiscon
The author had made me see how a military world is how caring they are and the risk they face as well as their family, those who serve their country faithfully I pray for their divine protection, this novel also shows that some understand the unison of the religion.
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amaturewriter
4 stars simply because you deserve it....In the sense that you written close to a 100 chps. ..congrats.... but I don't like your story.....
(If your story was based on something that happened to you and you alone ignore what is next....otherwise do read on)
Look I just read the summary and I decided that I don't like your story because....see the man and girl were apparently lovers in their teens but the man decided to go to war and the women got married because of family told her too and had child...but the thing is that it seems that both man and woman promised to get married in their teens.....where is the love and is it worth it...If they loved each other ..The man would've waited for the girl...and so would have the girl..hell she should have loved him enough to abandon her family for him...but noooo.....
Why would you write this? (Mind you I am not bashing you nor am I trying to insult you...I am honestly asking why would you write this. If this is a story..you could have used your limitless imagination to write a happy story..ie: the woman and man ran away together...or the girl simply waited for him faithfully and so did he)...basically something happy ...like a soldier retuning to his family and living happily whilst trying to get over the war horrors and also rasing his children....
I mean reality , (not always) is already filled hoes/sluts/rapists/wife beaters,etc..so why not write something happy... plus so many novels here always have this kind of separation ****....so why not write something happy?
Once again I am neither insulting nor demeaning your work....you are probably a good writer...I am just asking
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Daoist899163
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twistedskitten
It's an interesting story, the character development is still in process but looks good. I like the fact that they are more western names as I can relate to it easier. What I don't like is that it starts in the present then moves to 8 years ago. I would have preferred to have found out what happened from 8 years ago then read about the present. But that has no impact on the quality of the writing and I'm finding it interesting. And makes me wonder how it goes from what we already know to what actually happens
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klmorgan
Ok it is the shameless author here. I decided that I would kick off the reviews.
Yes this novel moves through the past to the present and may seem a little cliche at times, but for me the closeness of family, that even shows through at the early stage shows that family is the most important thing.
Matthew's position as a solider challenges both him and Lexi and their relationship journey, with twists, turns and fights along the way, but will they succeed in their relationship? That even to me is not clear.
I love Chester and Phillips story as well. Yes a side story, and may challenge the views of some people as to relationships that are acceptable to society, but their perseverance to get to where they are and where they will go is sweet tinged by the sadness of dealing with cancer (and yes I have left the actual cancer up to your imagination as I did not want to pigeon hole it - it can be any cancer you want it to be).
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