Hi , people author here , I read most of the comments and reviews on this book and I want to give a good news to you people , about ten days later , I and other native editor and a person who has experience in editing the books will going to edit the book from the start.So for now , thank you guys for all kind of comments and reviews , just know that book will not going to stay like this and it will be edited , thank you !
the shapeshifting power system is unique, with plenty of variety and the world building, sets up a large potential setting. the Mc's character development from a murder hobo is actually interesting to see.
Has this novel been dropped? there hasn't been a update in months
The novel was very good and i was hooked on it but i am disappointed in mc character transformation.
He is a serial killer with no emotion towards anyone and now he has a bottom line.
In the initial chapters he was cold blooded, calculative and will do anything as long as it benefits him and later his character is being changed into a typical beta mc.
i was really happy to find this book initially but now it's just another disappointing webnovel.
I'm only about 40 chapters in and I instantly liked the main character and the world and system employed. I can't understand what is being said half the time. I as someone with a college or higher reading lvl can't make sense of the english it's practically illegible
Like the story but it was execute poorly, and the writing is so iffy, was put me off it the “made a confirmation sign with his head” bro just say he nodded in agreement or something, there some other annoying writing marks but I won’t go into it, everything is is alright 7/10
I love this story! MC is excellent and love the no hero complex and is evil but not villain, just out for himself. Writing quality definitely needs work. I’m confused half the time and have to reread sentences atleast twice since grammar is way off. But I really want to know if you’re still going to finish? I never see updates and have been waiting ages. I have reread multiple times but I want it finished atleast. Killing me with no ending and how slow is updating. Are you still working on this story?!
Be able to write a novel like this, great work author! I’d love to see more. Do you have a discord for readers to join or any other social media I can follow?
The character is quite something. A likable psychopath. However, Since this book is 35% story and 65% spelling mistakes, it’s really hard to go through it.
I have a special love for evil character, don't let me down
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It had a lot of potential, but the author got lost along the way. I don't care if the MC is good or evil, but he must pursue benefits first of all. The author got lost, I recommend that he read birth of demonic sword, in this novel and MC has a wife and friends, but he doesn't forget his essence, which is to pursue power above everything else.
I really wanted to read this novel badly but the grammar makes me dropped this good novel. It wasted its potential readers. Sigh I hope the author will edit this sooner before I forget this and move on. 😓
I was wondering when we can expect the grammar to be improved? Hope you don't mind me asking Author-san owo (also I'm asking here cuz idk how to contact Author-san otherwise)
Story so far is very interesting however translation quality is bad and really impacts the story making it not as good as it could be. Often time the translation makes me question what is actually going on since it hard to keep up what is happening to which characters.
I loved this webnovel.Its one of the best. Long story short the mc is evil and ruthless and cunning.The grammer and writing quality is a little bit poor but acceptable. I just want to know from the author that how long is the main story gonna be. I mean at least how big it how many chapters can we expect in the future!!
thx author kun....
Writing quality is horrible so is the update stability but be it the story development , Character design , World background they are all pretty cool and story plot is pretty good and one of a kind . I really love the work hopefully it will get better soon ❤️
This is like everything i have wanted in one novel, like the story itself and the arthor are amazing. especially that the story for me hass no boring part to it
I like evil mc. they are so cool. its make them smart.they did not have lust. They did not care about world.🤔🤔🤔🤔this is the best thing. they care about himself 😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭
The concept of the book is not to my taste, why does the MC murders people so much, not the even the good or innocent people are spared from his blood bath. I don't see mindless killikng as an ideal way to get strong. The concept is extremely poor.
Krizantem