Just to make it clear to everyone who is coming into this story, neither I, who am the author, liked the beginning of this story, if you're looking to read a good story, in the beginning, don't read it.
That was my first story and the beginning is *a m a t e u r* and even I don't like it, so if you care a lot about grammar and some stupid choices, I don't advise you to read it.
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No point in mentioning him being an S-class ranker. In the new world he is useless and an idiot. He bottle necks extremely fast, he wastes his time acting like a kid and focusing on his family. He joins a magic academy and does useless tournaments.
If he was a true tanker like his previous life he wouldn’t waste time playing in garbage. He would be out grinding levels and getting stronger.
Really like this novel so far, will you keep udating? Do you have any kind of social media or discord I can follow to know the updating time? Thanks x.
Good writing but Poor plot..needs too much revision on plot holes and characterssss
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The novel 'had' potential but was poorly executed. Honestly, you could spend a bit of time fixing minor mistakes on some of the earlier chapters which can increase the viewer's favourability a lot. Grammar is pretty big for a lot of people personally I don't really mind but it still bothers me but on an honest note, I shouldn't be speaking because I am trash when it comes to it.
Everything else is pretty decent
Goodluck :)
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I am the original author of this novel, I am also the author of the original "S-RANK IN ANOTHER WORLD", but I decided to rewrite it and fix everything I did wrong in the first version, I hope you understand.
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At first I liked reading the story because of its straightforwardness and simplicity but slowly it turns into shit...
Why? cause tooooo much something is bad...
Let me tell you why not to read the novel.....
1.Magic is too basic...he can do everything but does does not do anything.... Example:MC can use earth magic to dig holes but he does not know to freeze the ground....he can make a sword using magic...but he cannot do the same type of use for other elements....He starts using all 4 elements just like that...but he cannot use darkness and light just cause he never tried bro .... He gets super strong super fast but he does not train....
2. The story has so many plot holes.....just think he is a sword master level swordsman but he keeps on increasing magic skill level and as soon as he sees a person with more physical stats he starts to run.....then why not increase the physical stats instead....
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This is really good i really enjoyed it so much because of the plot and the way the storey goes
Is just so excellent. I would highly recommend that your read.
You need an editor. I like to story and honestly if the grammer was better i would keep reading. You overuse his/hers to describe objects. You described the MC as wanting to be a magiv swordmans. But he ignores intellegence. While constantly increase his MP amount.
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The author is Brazilian so if you're a grammar Nazi than it's going to annoy you. It's a decent story he just needs someone to help polish up his story is all.
I don't think i have ever read a story with a dumber mc than this story. the title misleads you to believe someone with common sense will be in the story. Reading this so has cause my disappointment to be immeasurable and my day is ruined.
I am the guy that rarely gives out a review or sruff like that vut some things really make me angry, in a the chapter ten or something the mc gets slashed and passed out ,every reader goes nuts that he was strong previously and should have some instincts to avoid that and not pass out ,I say **** you all, The author wrote a real scenario,just look at his stats
Ok now lemme start off and say I don’t like the mc one bit. Sure the story looks good but when you read it it becomes a ****show. the mc is the most fucking dumbest person I’ve ever read. Like where is this supposed “S rank”? His awareness was so bad he got slashed in the fucking chest by a bandit behind him “he didn’t die somehow” *cough* *cough*plot amour* *cough* cough* why he couldn’t end those bandits was simple awareness? Are you fucking serious,weren’t you supposed to be a S rank in your last life?? but anyway this whole story has little to no potential. I’ve dropped it because I just can’t with this stupid mc. If you still wanna read this story DONT. You will lose your remaining braincells
MC should focus more on mastering sword or any weapons and tried to create his own style. I personally like him focusing on mastering his skills sets like magic,int,stealth,assasination,ambush,tactics,...blah blah
You're book is literal trash. Plain and simple. Maybe if you read your chapter comments and took some advice it would be much better, but sadly, it's clear you don't and it shows. Does the book have the potential to be a gem? Yes, but you've ruined it.
If it was only a couple mistakes and grammar errors then whatever... but sadly... every chapter makes me want throw my phone. Dozens of plot development mistakes every single chapter.
The MC is pretty dumb and makes stupid decisions. And the thing that makes me the most angry and irritated are the many grammer mistakes in about every two sentences.
D ranked from another world should be the title of this novel. That would be much more fitting. Now I'm just trying to get characters in. This 140 character requirement is so stupid.
I read to chapter 53 and I'm sorry to say but it was a painful read the plot is forced and the grammar is quite bad as well the characters were developed as best they could with low quality in writing... the writer has the excuse of not being familiar with English but after this comment that can be void as the writer can use Grammarly which is free and it can help quite a lot with quality. Sorry for the bad review
Novel starts off decent but soon realize that s-rank in this novel is compatible to c-rank in any other adventure novel cuz the guy is just retarded. While I'm glad it's different where a guy gets reincarnated and decides he's gonna have sex all the time like I'm reading a porno or where he decides he's going to be a virgin his entire life the same as his first life but this novel instead of getting stronger after meeting powerful people there is just to many irrelevant chapters where he goes on dates and nothing happens
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