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brett_hood
good read, but very hard to follow. would suggest getting proofreader to help, way to many errors. but overall good job hopefully you start updating again soon
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N0_Hope
One of the worst stories I've ever read ..
The author tried to copy the idea of Overlord and Everyone is a returnee to make something he never explained.
He doesn't explain ANYTHING in detail . He never explained lvl's . He started saying lvl 100 was the max and then made it clear 4 episodes later that there is no maximum lvl .
Mc nows that the world will be filled with monsters and he can avoid it if he stays long enough but he just jumps of the train too early ( the dungeon was frozen in time so is like 1 second outside )
Author confirms MC is immortal but he just leaves the leveling area too soon ... NO ONE would say no to lvl up having the opportunity to have magic and many more cool things. I would at least stay 50 years.
Also MC says he should have chozen magic in stead of swords ( which is true , magic is 1000 better than swords ) and he didn't used the SP point properly to balance magic at all until the end.
Resume : Author tried his best but words are set in a way that made me dizzy and In my honest opinion I think this is rubbish.
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soulla
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lars_6982
I like the plot, but why is the spelling so bad? If you don't know how to right some thing go google it or ask some one how knows.
I'm personally not bothered by the spelling but I'm sure many people are.
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Mr100Percent
Good plot and character.Have a good prospect .....but why is there so many spelling mistakes in every chapter!🤬🤮 it makes me wonder whether every chapter is Machine Translated....get an editor if you can't do this.
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Phil_Bob
As the one how wrote this Web novel I admit that it has flaws but I don't think it matters the story is entertaining and that's what matters the most.
I don't think any one is here to read about some deep filosofical ideas and principles.
English isn't my first language so please excuse the horrible speling.
Give it a try and you'll see if it's something for you or not.
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royalpunk
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