Reviews of Project: Mage - The Frugal Mage by _chomps - Webnovel

Any update? Was project closed?

thought this would be amazing, yet I missed it was harem... yay... doesn't writers realize you can have a girl, and break up with before finding a new one? instead of cheating on her, and then they all just be cool with it (as I see it). who convinced all those writers that the first girl HAS to be the one he ends up with, in monogamistic relationships? and if not, that it MUST be harem?

If I had to describe this novel in one word, it would be 'alright'. The overall plot of the novel is interesting. It certainly isn't new, but I'm not one to hope every novel I read is a brand new, genius idea. The grammar is off in places, but its isn't unreadable. My main gripe would be the character interactions. It was only 4 chapters in when we ran into our first 'arrogant young master' character, and much of the 15 chapters I read was just recycling some variation of "FL is way too beautiful and amazing," "ML is useless and plain and doesn't belong with her." The MC somehow gets a subpar score on the entrance exam (what was on the test still hasn't been explained), but has overwhelming power than expected for his age. There's a blatant disregard for any female's opinions (no matter their school rank or personal power). And bot the ML and FL are content to get walked all over so that they can 'live peacefully as a couple' while doing nothing preventative to help ensure that future. I'm sure at some point the ML is going to show off his power in a ridiculous way, and then everyone will fawn over him at that time. It's all of the usual things you would find in an average xanxia novel. I think it's done a bit excessively in this novel, hence the low rating. It becomes a bit of a slog to read through

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Hi, This is Tynan, I am an editor from another platform that focuses on adventurous Genre Fictions. After reading your “Project: Mage - The Frugal Mage”, I decided to contact you and if possible, to extend you an invitation on distributing your works. However, there are so little I can talk about it here. If you were interested, please contact me via geekyteddyyo@gmail.com, then I should take opportunity to discuss it with you in detail. It was a great pleasure to meet your story. Sincerely Tynan

First, writing quality. Its not good. Its readable, but as everything in this book it degrades as the book goes on. The grammar is all over the place. Cant really say much about updates, since I just binged 260 chaps. But doesnt look too bad. (this part may contain some spoiler, but I dont name anything specific.) Story... horrible. The first part is very nice, a lot of world building and focus on magic, somtimes some romantic scenes with his wife, and at some point he gets a second girl. So yeah, its ******** harem. But later on it just turns into badly written sex every single chapter and at some points the story just straight up repeats itself. Just SAY that his "essence" can heal everything magic related. It starts as a nice magic novel with some sex and romance every now and then and after 250 chaps its a badly written ero novel that sometimes justifies why he gets a new woman. Author if you read this, a harem with more than like 5 people just loses any sort of romance and is a plain ****feast. Which is fine, but then make it sound like its a ero novel and not a fantasy one. Character are the same as story, they are pretty nice in the beginning and get shallow in the end, World background as well, but it got built pretty nicely in the beginning. All in all, badly written, story degrades, has some inconsistencies every now and then, but the story itself had potential. It was nice until the like 3rd wife came.

love the story...................... love the story...................... love the story...................... love the story...................... love the story...................... love the story...................... love the story......................

more chat. more chat. more chpt..... ...................more chpt. more chpt. more chpt. .......................

good novel, needs to be longer. needs to be updated faster. wonder if mc will be taking little one as a lover when she gets older. 😂😂😂😂😂😂

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The beginning 100 or so chapters are pretty decent honestly and would have gotten 4 stars or so. The last 40 or so chapters have been so godawful as to drag the entire story down a full 1.5 stars. MC has added several people to his harem for literally no other reason than his 'essence' being magic essentially, seriously. A harem story is not necessarily a huge problem but the last 50 chapters have essentially been an erotica novel with perhaps the worst descriptions of sex I've ever come across.

good book so far. needs to be updated faster. mc needs to take care of his wives more, and hope to see the mc traveling the other world with his wives.

This is awesome book dddddddddddddddddddddddduuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesssssssss

I have never seen a story with more clichés than this one. - arrogant narrow minded young masters, check - forced but shallow Lovestories, check - everyone hunting the MC, check - separation of the 2 mainleads, check - forced suppression of MC's cultivation, check (that is only 84 chapters in) This story looks more like a list of clichés that are ticked of one after another. I'm not sure why the author thinks it's good to write that way but it's his book so you do you.

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Chapter 20 Review: So 20 chapters in and not only is the MC supposed to be frugal with his magic use but apparently the author has also decided to be frugal about focusing on this aspect as well which was the whole draw of me wanting to read this story. Instead there's a jarringly quick love interest that gets sickeningly saccharine and stays that way so far. And of course this is set within the overwhelmingly generic school setting with the requisite dumb antagonists who don't approve of him getting the girl. All of that is a major eyeroll but my real issue is with the lack of focusing on the magic system and especially on how/why the MC is a "frugal mage". At this point, unlike the couple's supercharged interest for each other, my own interest in this story has become limp and flaccid.

I can’t really say it is a bad book but the prose is horrible. Many sentences are useless and serve no purpose whats so ever, For example it is once stated that the house is dark because there were no lights and the night was dark, I mean no **** Sherlock.

All in all a generic chinese modern fantasy. Everyone thinks the MC is trash but secretly he isn't All the mobs are idiots who don't have anything else to do but try to make trouble for MC 'cause they think they are better than him All the beauties want to be with MC just 'cause he's the protagonist Would be an okay read to pass time if the author would get someone to fix all the stentences that have words in wrong places

I think this is being written by a horny 14 year old... Cringed so hard at the description of a vagina as a "wet cave" that i had to quit this novel!

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This is a great book, not as well known as many. The plot development, and characters are wonderful, although the translation is a slight bit off of being perfect, it is still a fantastic read.

Harem Tag missing. Would be a really good story if it wouldn't be so much about different relationships 😔 I like romance in novel but it's a little bit too much for me. Its missing out to much of the potential in my opinion

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Great story, Good characters, Ok worldbuilding, and generally not too bad. However, for me a slow story development just isn't for me, so I don't recommend this story for people that like fast paced stories. However, I will say that the story has been fairly enjoyable and fun to read so at least check the story out.

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