I'm gonna be honest. This story might seem to most as not that great. To me, this was the story that really brought me into certain concepts.
I didn't even know what a CYOA (Choose Your Own Adventure) was. Nor did I know about Worm (and its God like CYOA's) and Essence Meta.
I myself started to write a dxd story. Although there many reasons why, this was one of my biggest inspirations for it.
Although the language quality isn't exactly EX-rank, I could still enjoy it. It's a shame it's ending now, but all good things must come to an end. Thanks for writing this story [even if it hasn't updated for at least a year]!
Bruhh.... This novel is soooo good...... Too good to be true..... Nice concept you got there...... Hahaha..... Its too bad that you not able to update again.... But I am still waiting for your update.... Author-san... Fight it on..... Life is like a wheel...
This fanfic is something else...I like it very much it just doesn't focuse in DXD World and MC has a Harem but is not trying to get all the girls. He just wants lo live in peace while having power to back it up!!!
This is just my opinion dont be mad. This story sucks ass and every thung is hapening way too fast. Reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
This story has a lot of potential yet fails to deliver as it seems to fall in the wish fulfilment category which while potentially not bad has gotten worse in grammar and spelling best suggestion is to find a native English speaker and get them to read each chapter before you post.
I just give him 5 stars without reading but i have one question is there a f.u.c.k.i.n.g harem or not be I don't want to read something with harem s.h.i.t
easy to read since the quality is quiet good, just need a clear plot since i feel it isn't flow that good and mc doesn't have a clear objective.
overall your novel is good..
Fun read good crossovers and intelligent use of abilities. Looking forward for more hope to see you continue hopefully you will be able to make a good location to go next time
Very very very very very very very very very very nice to read. I absolutely love this.๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
This is a good story. hahahahahahahahahahahaahahahahahaha
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At the time of this review, it is on its 36th chapter
I can sum this novel up in one word, comfortable. Like a warm blanket, not in a lazy writer way.
Unlike most Op Mc novels the author doesn't focus too much on the fights but mostly on the connections. There's no walking around obstacles as Mc deals with trouble swiftly before going back to his identity as a boyfriend/mate
It did admittedly start with power struggle being the main premise but recent chapters move closer towards the slice of life.
I like it cause it a nice read to rest your brain after reading all the plot-twisting novels.
Thank You don't drop
I quite like this fanfic, it has all the things I enjoy in a story and mc; op mc, romance, world travel, comedy, beatdowns, mc pulling weeds at the roots.
I like that one of the mcโs main love interests is Ophis, it is not often that I see that. Usually she is made into a little sister or something. So that is somewhat unique.
All things considered, I really like this story and hope that it continues for a long time.
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