Reviews of Redemption: Second Chance

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pretzel005
The first chapter is well-written, I have no issue with the sentence structure and grammar, hence, the full score under Writing Quality. The plot though is pretty common where the MC grew up in a broken family and so did not bother with his education, got into the wrong crowd and all that stuff. I agree on the end, he really is an idiot. Anyway, for a first story, this was good.
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