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Fhrutz_D_Hollow
Hi, author here. I’m not shameless. This story is one of the best stories on this platform. Go read and see it for yourself. Though, don’t come ranting if it isn’t to your liking. Every person has his/her preferences. The thing you dislike can be the thing like by others.
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2yr
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Tacosrule123
I have gotten to chapter 124 and I am going to have to drop this. The story is good. But, the grammar is absolutely horrendous that it's super hard to read.
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Epialess
Don’t waste your time reading this author’s books as he never completes them and drops them whenever he thinks the views have dropped. If you don’t believe me check his profile.
6mth
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Joe_3031
how do u justify having chapters behind a paywall whrn u dont upďate regularly?
8mth
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Yosty_Toasty
Honestly not worth privileged at the price at all, update schedule is terrible and I think I’ll only use fast passes for this book from now on, like the book but wat is being charged for privileged is just stupid
9mth
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cruelsanto
Man, it was good at the start then started getting downhill, then the part where he started doing things in his domain was interesting then all of a sudden it changed into a cultivation novel and that’s where you lost me author.
9mth
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WindCutterTornado
good book .. I like it ..rpg .love story.ayeeeh... ops... swiisssshhh swooooshhh (sound of the wind)
9mth
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Rolling09
moreee, i need moree .................................................................................................................................
10mth
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Reyne_NorthStar
great story! Author-sama will there be more chapters? I feel like there's still potential with this novel
1yr
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Yuvraj0304
I've read 20 chapters and in those chapters the MC remains a simp and he doesn't even know how to use attribute points. Worst experience reading 😭
1yr
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VXZD_ZD
Nah I didn't like it It's kind of strange the stupidity of the protagonist even though he proclaims himself to be smart and he said he was a gamer but he doesn't act like someone who has a brain not to mention that the writing is kind of confusing since you can't understand when it's a thought and when it's a speech and also the protagonist talks while fighting so you lose a sense of time just like when you're having movement in fights it's hard to understand what they're doing as you mention some things that happened in the fight after the action was done
1yr
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Jason_N
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This really is an excellent novel. I always look forward to the release of new chapters. Updates are a little slow in coming because this is just one of many works by this author. Author would recommend reading some of their other works as well but I'm just too invested in this novel and don't want to get my plots, or characters, mixed up. One star off in quality because sentence structure can be a bit confusing at times. I will, however, defend the quality of this book and author with my last breath the same as I would my other 2 authors, and the works of theirs, that I read.
1yr
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Rolling09
is it dropped???? +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
1yr
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Rolling09
I wish author would focus on this novel more . . . . . . . .. . . . . . ..............................................................................
1yr
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Dragimlin
So sad to see such a good story get abandoned. The frequency that this happens on here is frustrating. Just like another story I was reading that stopped being updated, this was well developed while it lasted.
1yr
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Mayanobrien
At first i dropped this book twice but after that it started get affect me and i couldn't stop, You could hate some certain FL's but they become cuter later on, But it was a waste that they couldn't get enough time there is a serious harem potential here but its lacking apart from that mc was very stupid at first but he becomes better later on story and he was similar to certain mc that i couldn't remember his name but better version of it and i didn't mind grammar too much since i'm a person that not too great with grammars myself and My biggest complaint is chapters comes too slow ):
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DaoisttG3KuY
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1yr
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Anthony_Jones_2094
This is a dumpster fire I have no there words to describe the butchery of an already butchered language I made it past the first chapter hoping it would get better but gave up halfway though the second when it got unbearable
1yr
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buckibooster
I am so very tiring of reading the works of authors who abandons their readers by not finishing their work. NOTE TO WEBNOVEL: A work is not "COMPLETED" JUST BECAUSE AN AUTHOR STOPS SUBMITTING NEW CHAPTERS. pLEASE ADD A NEW CATEGORY "abandoned" TO WARN READERS.
1yr
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SoulLord
Sigh...The MC is stupid i really want him dead and change the character i just read up to chapter 140 and i cant continue anymore..The only thing i like is the writing quality and nothing else. bruhhh.. just bruhhh.. bruhhh..bruhhh
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2yr
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Happy_Leaf_5190
Good start and interesting world but it seems that a fight scene that could be over in 1 chapter gets pushed to 3-4 chapters, it seems like the author is just trying to get as many chapters as possible.
2yr
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amanbss
Dear author, I so wanna start reading the book, however, that 'taking a break' bugs me so annoyingly. I don't wanna be left on cliffhangers, so please start UPDATING it ASAP!!! thankin' you.
2yr
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Noah_w123
meh, Grammer could use help. The titles even have issues. Jumps around, tried to make good jokes but doesn't translate at all and things sometimes are kinda forgot or not followed up on. like a monster is killed for level up but he does level up or he is suddenly level 10 after alot of travel filler.
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2yr
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Werewolf_Redmoon
this is a really good story, the mc always shocks his foes with his new skills he achieved at a good speed. I want to see how strong he can get and get his revenge on Kyle
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2yr
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DaoistGRYj5v
sory just doin it for the exp ssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
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RealityWarper
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Tunic01
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Tunic01

most cring book I've ever read and not that much on this app but I've read a but load of books................................................
2yr
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SoulCore876
After 219 Chapters of what I've read I can most positively say that the Author of this novel needs to learn proper grammar, to small sentence structures and most of all the thought dialogues of the characters within the novel that use Single Quotation Marks instead of Double Quotation Marks for talking dialogues.
2yr
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Karthic_Raja
This is sooooooo good. The story starts off slow, but I really loved reading it. I wish there were more chapters😅. Waiting for next update ☺️.
2yr
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BILLY_Dores
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2yr
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Felaeia_Feline
well there are some words that arent spelled write but other than that its actually good. Hope you update it though as i want to read more.😢
2yr
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