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SaxonViolence
Friends,
I must say that I was drawn to this story originally by the cover art. The author owes the artist a huge "Thank You." The story isn't overly morose. I'd say that it is about Average—so far—but that beautiful illustration of the protagonist, his dragon and his panther all smiling and seeming SO HAPPY, sets the tone and makes the whole story seem so upbeat! It is an upbeat story. The Protagonist is REALLY OP. He almost levels up from tying his boot laces in the morning—No, not quite, but almost. I LIKE these kind of stories, I wouldn't want EVERY STORY to be so straightforward and bereft of challenges—but sometimes it is refreshing.
GOOD STORY!
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Logan179
Good story
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Yorky_Man
this could have been a good read,but was let down by the characteristics of the mc. he's plain dumb. if you entered a new world with a system that could power you up,you'd do your damn best to level up but the mc is a pus##y through and through. he forgets events,damn he doesn't even check his system to see what he could do with it.
this novel is a disappointment
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Gee_Meed
i like isekai novel and this looks interesting. gonna try reading it and i hope that this story is good. thanks for writing! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Garo_
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bibiyenini
Okay, I am on the 2nd chapter and I was wondering what Jason would do to get back on his word. This is a spoiler so don't open this!
I don't have any problem with the plot, it's good actually, makes a lot of those system novels. One thing I noticed is that the punctuations are incorrect and it must be sometimes a disturbance on reading. Just a little proofreading will do.
Don't worry author, I'll support you on this as a fellowmen! The great job ahead!
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Kenringdomstorys
Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try!
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cshupian333
Hey there!
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Ken_ringdomstory
Hey there!
Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
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knowutall
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i like it so far great work
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97Alex
Found it by mistake, it seems interesting though, it just needs more attention, webnovel loves to show you shiet plot chinese novels where you waste 5 chapters on explaining, permanently surprised side fodder and shiet talking nstead of the good ones, so give this one a try and hope for more chapters like i do xD
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Chris_Herve
I was just looking at the book when I thought why is there no rating are people blind this is a very good story so I am going to give you a 5/5 I was planning to write a review at some point as well so here it is. I would recommend you to read if your afraid of spiders and if you don't like an MC who is not super op.
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Younus_Mohammed
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LokiJoker
Not bad so far, I like the more interactive system . I might change my rating later but, wanted to give author more chance to improve without a too negative of a review as their 1st one.
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