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Justin_Stokes
Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmoooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee please this is a really good novel and I need mmmmmoooorrrreee
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Sydragonor
in chapter 5 you wrote the mc smiled.. right now In my imagination I try to figure out how can a Swan smile 😃.
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Daoist1rvBov
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John_Indergardllp
It's a great new view of cultivation world especially because it is from more of an animal point of view. I hope that keep continue the story.
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Weirdo
I'm doing this for experience to up my account cultivation... I'm doing this for experience to up my account cultivation... I'm doing this for experience to up my account cultivation... I'm doing this for experience to up my account cultivation... I'm doing this for experience to up my account cultivation...I'm doing this for experience to up my account cultivation... I'm doing this for experience to up my account cultivation... I'm doing this for experience to up my account cultivation... I'm doing this for experience to up my account cultivation... I'm doing this for experience to up my account cultivation...
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Crosslynn
Its really good,...........................................................
..or should I say amazing I never read stories like this
........it's not boring like most other
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ToulueVang
I won't start reading it yet until there is 200+ chapter. Many other are like me, so don't feel let down that no one is reading or that you aren't getting any attention. I'm writing this so you know :) We are here, we know, we're just waiting lol. KEEP UP THE WORK BRO.
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InHisName
First of all. The author seems stubbornly resistant to authentic criticism. One of the reviewers pointed out plainly that the author could improve the story if he wrote it like a novel, instead of a poem. That's to say actually use a punctuation. The author's response? The typical 'that's the way I do things - don't like, don't read!' An author whose writing style will never improve from that primary school child? That's unfortunate.
Then there's pacing. There's fifty years of time skips in the first eight chapters. Let that sink in for a moment. Not a good sign, but surely characterisation can be a shining beacon of hope? Well no!
The characterisation has huge problems. There's logical inconsistencies everywhere. The protagonist, Wang Lin, is millions of years old. When he's reincarnated he decides that he's going to live life like a shounen protagonist. Power of friendship! This of course means that the author orchestrates encounters with several minor characters, with whom the protagonist behaves like a child. Wisdom, and grace of a Celestial Emperor? Doesn't matter at all!
You thought that was all didn't you? The background is next. The protagonist (Celestial Emperor whom is killed) reincarnates in Beast Continent as a crane. Novel? Surely yes! The problem? There's a fine line between anthropomorphic characters, and shoddy writing. In this case, the author just laughs off the fact that the crane (which he often confuses with other animals) is described throughout the novel as behaving as a human. Sitting cross-legged? A crane? Later on the author admits that he just wants to quickly allow the protagonist to become human so he won't have to think so deeply into everything. Lazy writing.
Other areas which just scream laziness. Cities have rank restrictions, two second later the rank restriction is seemingly ignored as weak cultivators are somehow inside. Corruption maybe? Nope...the author just forgot. An author who lacks consistency in even one single sentence...disappointing to the say the least.
Would I recommend this novel? Not for mature readers, maybe for children aged 6 - 12. It's a children's novel in the end.
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Gourmet_DAO
So typical of a feudal society, to fight relatives with each other. The peaceful and happy days of a good ruler are replaced by some kind of freak ... and a sea of blood then pours. Nr all the rulers do not care! Great written!
Unexpectedly. That the main character has become a beast, or rather even a bird, is amusing. Definitely intriguing!
It would be interesting to see how a bird holds a sword in his hands and fights with a wolf, this would be an epic battle!
Is a bird flying to the city? This is something unusual, unusual, incomprehensible ... but is this a magical world, anything can be ?!
The fang on the bird’s face? What does it look like? This is not a joke, I do not quite understand the downtime. I regret that my English is not so good if I misunderstood.
Does a swan fly, but not using wings, but using a sword? It certainly should look very funny!
Chapter 12 is cool!
A bird having passed the circle of reincarnation can be turned into a person? This is strong!
Definitely your book deserves to be added to my library. Interestingly write, easily already read 19 chapters. And it happens that you read 2-3 and then you write a comment. Well done! Bravo! Seachs reading chapter 20, addictive!
Alas, as a school or academy appears in the novel, there is always a place for intrigue, conspiracy, secret societies ...
Billion years ... it sounds too cool ... and requires the owner of this knowledge of wisdom and does not allow him to make simple and complex mistakes. Otherwise, a billion years, wasted ...
4 chapters a day ?! Well, you are a cool author !!!!
Yes, without proofreading loading raw materials, a lot of errors pop up. Thanks to the author for his hard work!
Interestingly the 3 remaining elder disciples were humans or magic beasts?
It's good that the tournament is not prolonged, thanks to the author!
Search the Internet for Chinese names, they are, or ask for help in the forum.
Well, a cliché also appeared, but I said that school and tournaments always lead to such ends ... and avoiding the basis of the storyline ... but of course there are more chapters ... enemies, intrigues, murder, on this basis betrayal, treason ... enemies ... everything is corny and boring.
A little offtopic - when they start to write a novel about alchemists, the beginning and the middle about alchemy and then there is crap about cultivation and not a word about alchemy, also in relation to medicine ... intrigue and murder and not a word about medicine ... in cooking tops ... maybe you should write right away, your novels are not about alchemy, not medicine, not fishing, not treasures, not warehouses but about banal cultivation ... a good novel was about apocolypsis, but then the author suffered 5D ... during a universe about giants and he tritely leaked the end of his novel, making it a masterpiece in unions loe shit.
I really hope that our author will be able to avoid this, will be able to continue to write an original story, to develop his amazing story. Updating 4 chapters a day is cool and commendable.
I read 33 chapters in one go. It is read very fascinatingly. I recommend to all lovers of cultivation and DAO. The author is a connoisseur of this! 5 stars, but I would give 10.
Cons - there are minor semantic errors, but they can be forgiven to the author, since he was in a hurry with the update.
Thank!!!! I included the book in my library and if it will be possible to give a couple of stones for promotion.
Good luck to the author. There is a wish - the author write but do not overwork, it is better to write 4-5 chapters a week but on an ongoing basis than 4 chapters a day and then do not write for 1 month.
The author of every success in his work and thank you very much for such a wonderful novel, bravo !!!
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Weirdo
For name, I think you should go Google "Chinese name" and it should give you thousand of name to choose form... Or if you want, just go to any xianxia novel and there should be hundreds of villain name that exist...
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Weirdo
Since you recommend it to me, I shall keep it inside my library... So hope this will not go hiatus... Go for thousand chapter novel!!!! And Wang Lin, seriously? So many fanfic author love to used it... Not to say anything bad to, just saying that people tend to love using the cliche name...
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allheavens
Hai!! Author here I just wanted to thank everyone for reading this book ..I am actually trying to finish this book since I had a lot of ideas about it this book has the elements of many other books like desolate era and other books of that nature
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