Reviews of Parallel - A Virtual Reality. by Skywards - Webnovel

Shameless review by the Author! Truth is, I wouldn't really put myself a 5 star in everything. My story do lack a lot of things, and my writing skills are not on par to be 5 star as some of my fellow daoist here, but! BUT! I do plan to improve! While I highly doubt I'll be able to rise to 5 stars, it is my commitment to try to reach greater heights. For that, I fixed quite a few stuff from my chapters. (Believe me, there were a lot) I don't dare say I fixed everything, but I hope I managed to make my story more palatable for readers. I am going to try to keep the 1ch/day as long as I can, too! If any modifications occurs, I will let you fellas know. I hope you enjoy the story along with the adventure of Ardha, Peko and Zenith! - Sky.

Hi! Read the first half of your novel and it shows a lot of promise! There's already plenty of chapters with the perfect length to them. The story also moves smoothly and characters are portrayed well. It's interesting to see another take on this genre!

Interesting plot and theme! A refreshing take on the story and the narration is lively and so are the expressions! Looking forward to read some more future updates to come! Well done :)

Judging off the first tens chapters, not a bad story. Reminds of those fantasy rpg inspired webtoons! Which I like and can't wait to see where this story will go!😎

This is amazing work author, keep it up loved the first chapter, everything is just excellent[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Good Job Author! keep up the good work in creating this novel. I would just like to point out one major mistake that I saw until the latest chapter. it's about the TENSE. you should be consistent in this one. there are a lot of present tenses used that should be written in past tense also, i feel like you are telling the story. as an improvement tip, you should study about "how to show, not tell" i hope this review wont make u feel bad but rather motivate you to become better. Good luck mr. author!!

Hey! I give you 5 stars in everything, excellent plot development, good and constant updates, amazing characters and exceptional twists. Great!

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Seems cool so far. I enjoy it and i hope to see even more chapters from this in the future, the only annoying thing is that there are not enough chapters. 😂😂 But anyway, they are quite long so I can't really complain, keep it up.

Honestly the best, Grammar and Spelling wise anyways Original story I have read on this site. Story itself has some of the cliches this type of story always seem to have, but they to me anyways don't seem as bad as most. Better than a good portion of the translated stuff on this site. If you like: Reincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God Taming Master MMORPG: The Elementalist You should give this a try.