Reviews of Parallel - A Virtual Reality.

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Skywards
Shameless review by the Author! Truth is, I wouldn't really put myself a 5 star in everything. My story do lack a lot of things, and my writing skills are not on par to be 5 star as some of my fellow daoist here, but! BUT! I do plan to improve! While I highly doubt I'll be able to rise to 5 stars, it is my commitment to try to reach greater heights. For that, I fixed quite a few stuff from my chapters. (Believe me, there were a lot) I don't dare say I fixed everything, but I hope I managed to make my story more palatable for readers. I am going to try to keep the 1ch/day as long as I can, too! If any modifications occurs, I will let you fellas know. I hope you enjoy the story along with the adventure of Ardha, Peko and Zenith! - Sky.
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Daoist7u39pk
Hey! I give you 5 stars in everything, excellent plot development, good and constant updates, amazing characters and exceptional twists. Great!
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aaelite1
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nicedoris
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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97Alex
Seems cool so far. I enjoy it and i hope to see even more chapters from this in the future, the only annoying thing is that there are not enough chapters. ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ But anyway, they are quite long so I can't really complain, keep it up.
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LokiJoker
Honestly the best, Grammar and Spelling wise anyways Original story I have read on this site. Story itself has some of the cliches this type of story always seem to have, but they to me anyways don't seem as bad as most. Better than a good portion of the translated stuff on this site. If you like: Reincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God Taming Master MMORPG: The Elementalist You should give this a try.
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