Another quality story too add to this readers library. A Very enjoyable read . .thank you dear author for another fine literary master piece.πππππππ.
Not a mindless review but just a person talking about how good this novel is a hidden gem π found in web-novel good characters π great grammar
πππ π antihero character that makes the heroβs angry π€ non flat (character wise) girls π€‘ non retard mcπ΅ can you ask for more?
Great story so far! My only pet peeve is how he insists putting up the dr doom charade, but apart from that, his motivations make sense. The characters have realistic motives and the setting is getting fleshed out.
It's good but really slow updates I'm not sure else to write
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It's a great and a very orginal story I mean puting Victor on Doom to DC as SI that is the one of the most original fanfic idea that I have read I only wish the author would update more regularly. I absolutely recommend to anyone who is looking for an orginal and fun fanfic
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This is an amazing story based on the caracters and setting of Gotham city in the DC universe. The author's MC is original and just as crazy as everyone else in the city. He drags us readers along while fighting to build a place for our hero in between the forces of light and darkness.
One of the best DC fanfics that I have ever read.πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Author-tofu, I feel that you write in ecchi stuff to give the illusion of story development. It is a good story but it gets boring when waiting for all the fun stuff to happen. aside from the off-kilter pacing this is a good novel with fewer-than-most grammar mistakes.
Updates are monthly. Lol
Running so does dinner shelves while while I'm here until you are sunny of bugs send dinner Mac and is cute forward seven let's hugged Lindsey pie why Kevin and line prefer
This and the other story from the same guy has the besf story line going on.....if only he could post a chapter every week this might just take 1st spot for fanfiction category........Awesome story!!
Keep it up Man!!!
Great story!!!!!! Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Will Doom get more powers I hope so!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL LOL LOL !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
One the best DC fanfiction in this site and I'm looking forward for more releases,other than the slow releases it is a brilliant work like his other works,i recommend to stockpile it for a while, because what the author lacks in release speed,the length of each chapter more than made up for it
One of the best novels on this site at the moment. No reason to not read it. ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
A ruthless MC with the balls to do things that justice League don't do. Doom will have everything he wants even if it is to go balls deep into a few ladies along the way.
Dude it's almost 2 weeks u posted a chapter!!! Dude it's almost 2 weeks u posted a chapter ?????????????? Are u alright, if u are pls release a notification for non dicord users like me
I love the story. Within just three chapters youβve done really well in creating a world and active characters. The story does revolve around Doom, but the heroes and villains react to him and it doesnβt come across as passive. I recommend this story to anyone he sees this review. There are only three chapters at the time of this response but the length of them is feels like twenty, which is great. The story itself is well written, not too many grammatical mistakes and for this website that is saying something. I like the pacing of the story. The chapters are long but the pacing is consistent. I real wanna see how Doom grows as a character and how the characters(villains) around him grow and change as well. I have one question though. Will he have a steady relationship with Ivy and Cheetah or is this gonna be harem? I just hope it doesnβt go too far. Iβm not to sure about an update schedule. I just hope the story get finished.Thanks for the story and great job. Definitely recommend a read.
It's really good, each chepter has a fair amount of words , the OC isn't the typical horny dickhead, he is aware of his flaws and ambitions,his is not a hypocrite to classify himself as hero or villain, in order to reach his goals he will get his hands dirty and do what he want to reach his final goal.
Exp blacker than black and darker than dark, I beseech thee, combine with my deep level. The time of leveling cometh. Justice, fallen upon the infallible boundary, appear now as an intangible distortion! Dance, Dance, Dance EXP! I desire for my torrent of level a destructive exp force: a destructive force without equal! Return all creation to cinders, and come from the abyss!
Burst forth, EXP EXPLOSION!!
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Oh, EXP shrouded in light Frenzied blaze clad in night In the name of the crimson demons, let the collapse of thine origin manifest. Summon before me the root of thy power hidden within the lands of the kingdom of demise!
Burst forth, EXP EXPLOSION!
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Crimson-black blaze, king of EXP sect, though I promulgate the laws of nature, I am the alias of destruction incarnate in accordance with the principles of webnovel creation. Let the hammer of exp descend unto me! ... Burn to ashes within the crimson.
By my efflux of thousands exp, topple this level barrier !
Burst forth, EXP EXPLOSION!
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The tower of exp creeps upon man's world, The unspoken faith displayed before me, The time has come! Now, awaken from your slumber, and by my madness, be wrought!
Burst forth, EXP EXPLOSION!
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EXP... EXP... EXP... Wielder of the most glorious, powerful, and grand exp explosion magic, My name is d!ckbutt. The blow that I am given to strike turns a blind eye to the fate of my kindred, rendering all hope of rebirth and anguish, and the model by which all forces are judged! Pitiful creature... Synchronize yourself with the red smoke, and atone in a surge of blood!
Burst forth, EXP EXPLOSION!
-Megumin Exp Explosion Chant(Cringe yeah, but its for EXP!)
It is really great and don't look on the number of chapters but how many words there are written in the chapters because they are more then your brain can process ;).
keep up the great work......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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