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Transhumanist
I've read till chapter 78. This is my unbiased review. The story translation is better than most cultivation stories here. But the pacing is extremely slow killing any entertainment you can get from the story. But the weakest part of the story is the plot and world building is extremely weak IMHO. The plot can be summarized thus. The MC is someone without a spirit root, that can't raise their cultivation in the conventional manner. So he gets a golden finger and can raise the quality of pills and ingredients. He creates pills from waste materials that are created when pill concoction fails. And eats these pills to slowly raise his cultivation. That's it. Yeah if you consider the MC is wholly dependant on eating pills to cultivate, we expect alchemy or pill concoction to be a big part of the world building. But no, not only he doesn't know any pill concoction, the world doesn't have many different types of pills too. Like whole idea of pills is just a concentrated spirit energy that people take to speed up their cultivation. Extremely boring. Cultivation system is very weak and simplistic too. They just suck in spiritual energy (or qi whatever) , raise their cultivation level thus Qi amount. They use this Qi to use magical talismans , magical tools etc. As you can see, cultivation only makes their mana capacity higher to use limited use talismans or unlimited use tools. They don't have concept of different cultivation arts, styles, dao etc. Like where are the sword cultivators? Poison cultivators? Formation masters? Alchemists that can create more than concentrated Qi pills? Different dao? Space time powers? Yeah let me tell you where they aren't . This story. This is my review after 78 chapters.
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jankian
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jankian

Finally got updated letsss gooooooooo
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Badlands_Fight14
It's a pretty amazing xianxia for such a common name "Tempered Immortal". It's basically A Record of A Mortal's Journey in another universe.
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mexin007
This is one of the awesome novel that I have came across to read. I sincerely request the read this novel at least once. I also sincerely request the translator to translate it's all chapters immediately. I'm a very big fan of this novel. In the beginning of first 40 chapters, the speed of story progressing is slow and may get you bored, but later you will appreciate this novel very much. If you are fed up with the novels on the topic such as rebirth,reincarnation, system, heaven defying cultivation technique, as if the main character has whole universe supporting him, then this is one of the best novel to read amongst other novels.
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Melting_Heart
This a book with a cautious, low-profile MC. It kinda reminds me of A Record of a Mortal’s Journey to Immortality but it doesn't waste readers' time with pointless battle descriptions. All the battle scenes here are well written and they make sense. I love that the MC is a mortal! His cultivation is much more interesting this way!
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Jonathan_Kovacs
A Great slow paced Cultivation novel. Similar to RMJI in that sense and his treasure dose not make him op as of yet. Id say its a nice hidden gem out there.
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Maddox9
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I love the MC and other characters are actually living breathing people with their own problems and personality. The world settings is still been revealed as the novel is still at its initial stages overall it has potential but my only problem is the Romance I'd rather have no romance than forced romance the MC has never had a good opinion of Qin Yan she's beautiful and talented but that's it countless other females in the sect possess the exact same qualities but the MC has never been shown as one chasing after beauty. Yet she gave him an ultimatum with even asking for his opinion . Yet the next moment he has her name been mentioned he couldn't help but send her a letter ???????? Pls Don't ruin this great novel with bland tasteless romance . A great novel is not defined by the number of jade skined beauties chasing after the MC or by the number of girls the MC has slept with . Pls author don't go down that road...
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It's nice, a little like A Record of a mortal's journey to immortality. Yes so you should try it............ Djbdidhdihdudbfhdhdydyebdhudhdhdhdh
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Username111
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Daoist_GoodFortune
It's a good story. But there is little interaction with others. Even his servent just appear at the time needed as if she appears out of thin air. Except that everything is fine.
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Hacher_Unfriended
If I was the MC, I would be too scared to even go out to s**t, that’s because if I entered a bush to do my business I would stumble across a secret conspiracy involving evidence wiping. That’s the major flaw of this novel.
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Rucious
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Tidak seperti karakter di cerita Novel yang lain,MC cerdas dan tidak arogan,tahu mana yang menjadi prioritas dan mana urusan yang tidak perlu dicampuri..sayang update lambat
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AltoDaris
This novel currently is the best xianxia novel i have ever read. The MC is not only smart but also wise, he is not a busybody that always want to involve in other people matter. he will not intervene if some demonic cultivator kills innocent people as long as that demonic cultivator not targeted him, he will not lift a finger and only watch or escape. and he is also not a psychopath that will kill everybody he meet. i would say he is just a logical person that trying to survive in the cruel world of xianxia not someone who trying to be a hero nor a demon. if you like "lord of mysteries" and "A Record of a Mortal’s Journey to Immortality" then you definitely will like this novel.
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FruitPunchDaoist
Oh Wow went to forums to get this on pickup request and found it here in Originals. Finally get to read more of this gem this needs more recognition. Dint see new chapters on NU at all!
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Gacha123
Good, amazing character development, but slow update.............................................................................................................
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Gacha123
Good read.....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................MC is BRIGHT
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Dahaka
story is in the hiatus or something ? . already had 3 weeks . waiting for realese :) thanks .....................................................................................................................................
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aceid87
I waiting this story really long..now I'm happy..u all should happy too..keep support this novel yeah..uh y review is to long..I sad..dnt forget update this novel at fandom wiki..they many loophole in this novel but I really like the line of story..when will it finish..uh..will be long wait..
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Dahaka
i like so far and i'm waiting for new relase . so far dont have face palming and it's a good thing And translate is good . so if you love cultivation novels you can read this serie...
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kingasas33
I have been waiting for someone to pick up this book for 5 years... Finally I can read it again. This is one of my favorite xianxia novels. Hope translator keep doing it until it completed.
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ghostrino
The story is good and the grammar seems fine. I wish it would have longer chapters other then that is great. And the mc is likeable and not like all other arrogant mc usually found in this sorta story.
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Mogroka
Good novel, very different from the common trend. He does not fight worthless battles, very calm and cunning. He is not a know it all. But he is very ruthless with himself and trains hard. There are some time skips but they make sense.
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thetinman
The story is good and the writing grammatical seems fine. I wish it would have longer chapters other then that is great. And the mc is likeable and not like all other arrogant mc usually found in this sorta story:P
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Willox
The mc is intelligent and cunning, doesn't let himself be overcome with emotion. So far a good story, sadly the update are slow. Im happy to have found someone that is taking the time in translating this story so slow or fast I don't mind as long as they keep it going. Thank you.
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Wow8487rhg
It's good, it's nice, it's fantastic, it's amazing, it's great! It's exciting, probably, it's excellent, it's breathtaking, very much want to read. I'M SERIOUS!
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YNK
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YNK

A great novel, very happy to see it back in translation. The MC is very good, clever and not rash. The universe is interesting, and not as absurd as the one in some other xianxia, so it's a very good read.
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