this is a good story and I enjoy reading it A LOT but I think that it's a bit sad that this book doesn't have anymore chapters with is a downside BUT it was good I liked the story and the "op naruto" character so good job.
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It’s a really good novel with funny moments and stuff, giving me a phew laughs, but I’m not adding any spoilers since I hate them and reading it without any spoilers is much better.
No offense, but i like to tell you what in my mind, for a naruto fan like me, i have a bad impression toward naruto's personality that you make especially when naruto killed the bandits and he lost the charm that the original naruto have, and much more i dislike about this novel, you make a good story but you make a critical mistake about his personality, he still helping people wich is what originally naruto would do, but his personality gave me a bad impression somehow?l🤔
Just sharing opinion no grudge feeling 😏👍👍😁😊😊
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