Reviews of Child of Destiny

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4.58

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chiiiii
This novel is truly a breath of fresh air. It combines a real cultivation world and a virtual one interestingly. A hidden gem in my opinion. I hope more people could review and vote for this great novel ;) Keep up the good work author!
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Midhun94
It's a really nice story, nice character development. I hope that the gaming part gets a bit more structure, I would suggest the writer to refer The King's Avatar on writing the gaming side of the story. But I am ready to accept all these little short comings hoping that the writing will get better as the story progresses. To sum it up it's a great work and I recommend everyone to read atleast 30 chapters before dropping this book.
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carrots24
its great! the grammars needs a little work though but im having fun reading this right now.. im just adding this cause i cant post this review with less than 140 characters. there all done
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Jovi_Line
The start was good as it makes me curious about the story. As the story progresses, I became quite unsure of where it it really going. I just know that Shin is the mc. The end. Also, I don't like that big sister who acts like a bully.
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At3Miemz
dark of night and waxing moon come to us a single pool hear us sing our witches' song and send us moonlight clear and strong earth and water, wind and fire one and all you must conspire to banish bad for goodness sake cos I need moonshine for my cake weary travelers long ago shared their bread and made a vow that they will be forever friends and so shall be until time ends
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LV 1

AlmOst all is allright except the penAlties oF the devs , how come the game allows the player to cReate skills then punish tHem for not reportng cheating plus at some point it was saiD he was to learn the free mode yet implying it would boost his capabilities but nothing on that so far after the revelation ?
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kenlinvert1
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Timothy_Stuart
i think this book is interesting because you get best of both world. Both cultivation and also gaming world, system, skills and such and i also like where the MC is OP and cool headed.
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Stephan_w
it reminds me of Realm of myths and legends, which I realy enjoy. Main character starts of weaker so it brings you Along the ride more and gives more of a feeling of the World and the characters themselvea
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GothicAngel0216
Interesting story...
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Gellian
i love this book. support support support support SUPPORT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! [img=faceslap][img=coins][img=update][img=fp][img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=fp][img=exp][img=exp][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=faceslap]
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Troupe
Every girl in this novel is annoying and unreasonable as hell Number 1 in dark organization training became pathetic loser when he grew up older that get pushed around by girl I'm in chapters 26 and will change the review once I see improvement
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angelika_0
guys lets write more reviews for this awesome novel and try to increase the exposure. I found this novel through the recommended list but I think it would be best if everyone wrote more reviews and spammed their power stones :)
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yuiiixx
certainly a novel with great potential. the fights are well written and immersive, but the grammar could use some work. overall a great novel, kinda curious as to why more people aren't writing reviews. increase the exposure for the novel guys, to help support the author!
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fooodie
a great novel with a satisfying combo of cool traits from other novels. the wuxia aspect of the real world and the virtual world are combined seamlessly. although, having more RL battles could be more beneficial :) keep up the good work, hope more people vote and write review for the novel
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aaelite2
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Wave_check
what does the main reason for the rest easily 🀣 so I was thinking of a reason for me to call u πŸ˜˜β˜ΊοΈπŸ˜‚πŸ˜˜πŸ€£πŸ€£ ain't nothing going directly πŸ±β˜ΊοΈπŸ™‚πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‚ of the day and am looking for the past
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Moves_Like_Jaggi
Nice one kabayan bagong reader mo pala ako keep up the good work bro ngayon ko lang na search yiung novel mo na vote na din kita. Good story abd more powers.
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Blu30Din
Hands one the best original novels i have ever read. I couldn't stop reading it forbthe last three days until I got to the latest chapter. The way the author weaves the story of real world with the VR world is seemingly beautiful. 5 🌟
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Red_Planet
Nice battle scenes and Beautiful Cover 😍🀞 The errors in grammar is irritating... I love this book with an OP MC... Strong - Stronger - Strongest πŸ˜‚
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lyrehcanipse
The story is captivating, exciting and you get to anticipate a very splendid and well written battles. Character wise are intriguing and you can't help but root for them.
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