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Midhun94
It's a really nice story, nice character development. I hope that the gaming part gets a bit more structure, I would suggest the writer to refer The King's Avatar on writing the gaming side of the story. But I am ready to accept all these little short comings hoping that the writing will get better as the story progresses.
To sum it up it's a great work and I recommend everyone to read atleast 30 chapters before dropping this book.
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StormLily
Honestly I kept skipping this book when it cam up on my recommendations. I regret tgat I kept skipping it because this is a really good book. At first the writing was a bit touchy in places, but it got better over time. The story plot is really good as well. I still have not found out what the brother's IGN is yet, and I cant wait. There are times where I think there was too much information overload. For example, seeing all that information on his status. Other than that the story flows really well.
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Carismatic
It is a good book, the development suits the story. Yes there are some spelling & grammar issues (especially with homophones), but it doesn't take away too much.
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I don't understand why some ppl were 'shipping Alice as he did Not grow up with her, she literally showed up and fought him, twice, and she only reminded him of her big sister (who he saw as a sister figure). During the second fight he got her to state her purpose and told her how he knew her big sister, that was that, nothing to start flights of romantic fancy.
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rhuan
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Booty_Warrior
Uuummmmm….. why do you try so hard to make the MC so smart when he’s actually dumb….>.> he’s going 1/3 in STR when and 1/3 in AGI and 1/3 in INT when he should’ve went 2/3 INT and 1/3 AGI because of his skill named equalizer + Nephilim racial trait that 2x Magic ATK and I made sure equalizer doesn’t convert STR and INT so it’s not depended on how much points you put into them but physically and magical ATK meaning not only will you have 2x magical ATK but you will have a base of physical ATK that’s not different from putting the points into STR not only that you would have a much BIGGER mana pool….so yaaaa…. You try to hard to make him smart but he’s not LOL!
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Treems
This book is an interesting and well researched writing. Blending two environments Online gaming and living society. two stories developing in one book. Addicted to this book, can't wait to check for updates daily
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Niquiito
I agree with all the negative reviews, but I need to add something that they didn't say.
THERE ARE TOO MANY ARROGANT CHARACTERS.
TOO MANY BRAINLESS CHARACTERS.
In the game they attack the MC all the time for any stupidity.
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Apns444
Kid who was kidnapped at 3 years old, held in terrorist organization hideout and trained brutally for 6 years. Being beaten, forced to train, being brainwashed to be a mindless killer, being thrown into a room with all other kids and told 'last one to survive is free to go' and ends up being the last man standing. After all of this, SWAT raids the hideout and he gets rescued, not only does he have NO trauma, he acts like a grownup while talking with others, he trusts some random man to adopt him, agrees, goes home with the man and after 2 weeks of being there he GETS A FRIEND who is his age. How would a kid with past like that be able to trust anyone, not to mention make a friend? And to top it off, the 'friend' who is martal arts genius, who trained a lot, but only sparred, never had to fight for his life, somehow manages to fight the MC to a tie in a duel? The character design is very, very bad. His background is a massive plothole. No idea why the author would introduce a background like that, only to make the MC 'normal'.
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Otaku_242
I read up to 450+ chapters and I can honestly say this is an amazing novel! Whether it's in game, or in the real world either story would make a great novel and the author is killing it on both ends.
Ohh yeah looking like on the romance end the author is going heavy on team Cloe, but I really hope Alice wins in the end(my only complaint so far)
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DaoisttG3KuY
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Akselelator
One of the most interesting stories about vrmmo where there is quite a lot of the real world, as well as the virtual one. Of course there are also disadvantages.
1 of them are too boring quests and their slow origin. For me, the most interesting thing here is power. The explanation for this is that every friend of the tire has power because of this it is interesting to watch, and it will be even more interesting when everyone finds out who Shin's parents are or when he merges with Uno (I would like to see how he changed radically in character). The end result is a very unique story with a mix of martial arts, real world power struggles and the virtual. RECOMMENDED
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James_Sch
wish it would be updated faster, seems it's been slowing down on updates hope it picks up back to one a day if not more.
love how being strong in game and life are connected
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legend007
I got hooked up with story, truly having great deal reading it , just got a little uncomfortable reading love part coz want him him to both cloe and Alicia ,just don't know that without #harem can he have both , or will he choose one?,
aside from that truly a great read and intresting !!🔥👌😎
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its_L
I have read most of the novel but iam done I guess bcz I can't bear a for ed romance at all he first met Alice and they became rival and teammates for the quest and that was all good and I was really liking that idea but then she suddenly disappeared for no apparent reason and then there then introduce cloe and that seems really forced and she even forced him to date her and I really don't like her as a fml bcz that seems to forced I don't know why author have to do something so stupid when he/she was writing the story of shin and Alice so well but I guess that's their choice so Sayonara
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shin_lol_7939
also I'm confused is this really a romance? it says it has it but the female characters have had like a total of 10 minutes of book time. I don't even know who the FL is and I'm over 400 chapters in. I'm guessing it's Cloe but if it is that's just garbage writing considering she just showed up 250 chapters in out of nowhere. I thought it would be Alice (I believe that's her name right?) but all the sudden after like chapter 100 you just got rid of her. and when he met her in the game I'm like, ok! they become rivals then freinds and then start growing feelings for each other and 1 day they meet up in the real world and start dating. I'm like that sounds awesome and a great romance but...she just disappeared and that's the last time I saw her, then you add Cloe and it's felt extremely forced she forces him to go on a date with him when he doesn't even like her apparently. Idk maybe you have future planes with Alice (I think that's her name) I don't mind Cloe but it would be terrible writing if she's the FL.
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shin_lol_7939
story was good but introduce 100 I feel like girls Alice they good river but where introduce cloe thee go date force i have questions who is mc love interest
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Khaz_
Dropped after 16th chapter. At the begging it was very similar to "Realm of myths and legends" which i love but MC became over powered too quickly in just 16 chapters he already has a lot of op skills and evolving weapon. Also the idea that members of some realativly big guild would be that eager for some uncommon gear 3 months after the start of the game doesn't make sense. Another thing that I assume gets fixed in leater chapters is the fact that the whole thing is written in present simple. It's very distracting to read.
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Tunic01
also I'm confused is this really a romance? it says it has it but the female characters have had like a total of 10 minutes of book time. I don't even know who the FL is and I'm over 400 chapters in. I'm guessing it's Cloe but if it is that's just garbage writing considering she just showed up 250 chapters in out of nowhere. I thought it would be Alice (I believe that's her name right?) but all the sudden after like chapter 100 you just got rid of her. and when he met her in the game I'm like, ok! they become rivals then freinds and then start growing feelings for each other and 1 day they meet up in the real world and start dating. I'm like that sounds awesome and a great romance but...she just disappeared and that's the last time I saw her, then you add Cloe and it's felt extremely forced she forces him to go on a date with him when he doesn't even like her apparently. Idk maybe you have future planes with Alice (I think that's her name) I don't mind Cloe but it would be terrible writing if she's the FL.
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JaydenLiu
In the beginning there are a lot of grammatical errors and spelling errors. If you can't get past it that's that. The errors get less and less but there are still the occasional error. The actual story is great with mystery around the characters around him. One thing I don't like is how the mc doesn't wanna hit girls. I mean he met several girls who were selfish on first meeting and yet he still tries and attends their needs which I think is stupid. He knows it and even calls it out "princess syndrome" but he doesn't give them a wakeup call but instead keeps it all in his head and doesn't say anything.
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nicolas_fitzgerald
This is a good book with a what seems to be a great plot, with great characters. Im almost 200 chapters in and I have to warn about the in-game fighting scenes(there are a lot of them) because I'm so tired of them. the of writing those in game battles has ruined the book for me. I really want to continue reading maybe I'll try just skipping the in game battles. everything else about the book is great.
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Akinola_Samuel_4193
I love this story. Extremely interesting and motivating more knowledge to you author. I wish the Vr game in your story was real. I would have tried mu best to get it. Thanks
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hanzzzz089
what great masterpiece. great world view both in game & real life. I can visualize the combat by how writer expressing the move & skill. nice touch of the combination of real life cultivation into the game. one of novel I'm currently waiting for update each day 👍
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zaky_zaki
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Alexander_Vlaescu
So the World Building is awesome , truly a breath of fresh air. Story development is somewhat slow compared to the ratio of chapters to time passed. Even though there is a big time skip at the start. Also after chapter 300 the plot gets somewhat monotone and tiring, especially the fights. After a certain point the fights continue to follow the same pattern. Due to that I was forced to skim through most of them after the chapter 300. Moreover Shin's ultra instinct talent in game gets thrown in the back and at certain points you even forget he has it.
The characters are pretty well developed and they get their proper screen time. Romance is almost next to non-existent. There are quite a few potential love interests but are mostly one sided. I humbly await for the #ShinxBigSisShelia ship as they have the most chemistry. They both have strategic smarts , business thinking (Shin rarely shows this as he is too laze to bother but when he does he can go toe to toe with Shelia. If he has some reassurance) and I think Shelia is the only that can handle him. Cloe is too shy and hesitant to do anything with Shin. Alice and Shin are like water and oil. #RipAlyssa. So yeah Shin needs someone that can go toe to toe with him like how his father and mother are.
Whoever says that Arthur and Shin are simps because they follow their Big Sis are plain stupid. Shelia has the strength to force her will on them. Moreover she isn't taking advantage of them but she is shaping them up so when they become adults they will have experiences to help them in various situations. Like how Shin can effectively negotiate with others. Furthermore avoiding hitting girls isn't being a simp especially for Shin. He doesn't expect anything in return and he has a pretty big mental scar about hitting girls. Big enough to have a split personality.
Author-san please consider my Big Sis ship seriously.
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Soul_Reads
Really nice book!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Daoistrua
this is a book meant for people who aren't afraid of a dark ish story and a scary over protective step sister and a great story overall of what I have read so far
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Jkesse
the characters feel flat to me. just sort of monotone. i didnt get drawn into the story and that disappointed me. i was looking forward to it because ita hard to find a decent novel, the other reviews got me excited but this story isnt for me
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King_Wast
It is so hard to read i tryed to stay with it but find myself back tracking and fixing sentence after senteCe till the point that im missing to story
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