Reviews of Child of Destiny by ProudMonkey - Webnovel

You need to increase the amount of updates bit and make the updates more regular. Then there are a lot of silly grammar mistakes that make all the characters and narrator sound like silly little kid, which is very of putting. However for now the rest is superb.[img=update]

I just started reading it and i am at chapter 9. The level of grammar is degrading instead of increasing, if it still continues like this i am going to drop this novel. It's not worth the time.

I normally don't drop novels this fast, but I got too pissed off. I don't know about everyone else, but personally I started this novel partially because I saw that the MC was raised as a killer after being kidnapped by a dark organisation. I normally gravitate to these stories because it means the MC is ruthless and broken which makes for interesting reading (not raised to be assassin, but Supreme Magus is a great example of broken character). But then there is a timeskip and they are now teenagers. These two prodigies, who have grown up competing and sharpening each other every day get bullied by their slightly older sister who we have never had any indication is strong. Very annoying, but I accepted it and chalked it up to a staple of the genre, despite how infuriating it is. But then he gets attacked by a girl, randomly and with no provocation. So what happens. Does this MC who was raised as a weapon until the age of 9 fight back? Does the MC, who had to survive by fighting both male and female kids his own age to survive retaliate? No, he fucking doesn't. He takes it. Then she attacks him again. Is he finally provoked, and pushed to reveal a little of his killer instinct? Hell no. He doesn't like hitting women. Then when she attacks him again and pushes him to fight, and he wins, does he show any kind of ruthlessness? No he politely says goodbye, and says she can find him any time. This, in simple terms is a complete betrayal of who he is as a character, and it's a complete betrayal of the readers who have invested in the character. So dropped.

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At first, I liked the novel, but after the time-skip, the MC forgets all his serious personality and edge and becomes the everyday pushover that never complains or gets angry even if he is beat-up for no reason. Then we have the non-sensical traits of the novel world. We have a 'complex' world with many groups, organizations, and families, and yet, every time someone attacks the MC we NEVER see a guard or police, be in the real or game world. Every time something stupid occurs, the author tries to push a chapter's worth of info dump, as if trying to hide or just make use of something already messed. Sorry, but as interesting as the story appeared, I found it impossible to continue this. There are other points that lost points with me too, but since I'm dropping this before my default margin of 30 chapters, I will leave out.

although it drop from favorites list because of how dense the mc is and i hate dense mc's im suprise at my self that im still reading it. the novel it self is pretty good the grammer, plot,..... is super good you guys should give it a try

its great! the grammars needs a little work though but im having fun reading this right now.. im just adding this cause i cant post this review with less than 140 characters. there all done

The start was good as it makes me curious about the story. As the story progresses, I became quite unsure of where it it really going. I just know that Shin is the mc. The end. Also, I don't like that big sister who acts like a bully.

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AlmOst all is allright except the penAlties oF the devs , how come the game allows the player to cReate skills then punish tHem for not reportng cheating plus at some point it was saiD he was to learn the free mode yet implying it would boost his capabilities but nothing on that so far after the revelation ?

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i think this book is interesting because you get best of both world. Both cultivation and also gaming world, system, skills and such and i also like where the MC is OP and cool headed.

it reminds me of Realm of myths and legends, which I realy enjoy. Main character starts of weaker so it brings you Along the ride more and gives more of a feeling of the World and the characters themselvea

Interesting story...

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i love this book. support support support support SUPPORT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! [img=faceslap][img=coins][img=update][img=fp][img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=fp][img=exp][img=exp][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=faceslap]

Every girl in this novel is annoying and unreasonable as hell Number 1 in dark organization training became pathetic loser when he grew up older that get pushed around by girl I'm in chapters 26 and will change the review once I see improvement

guys lets write more reviews for this awesome novel and try to increase the exposure. I found this novel through the recommended list but I think it would be best if everyone wrote more reviews and spammed their power stones :)

certainly a novel with great potential. the fights are well written and immersive, but the grammar could use some work. overall a great novel, kinda curious as to why more people aren't writing reviews. increase the exposure for the novel guys, to help support the author!

a great novel with a satisfying combo of cool traits from other novels. the wuxia aspect of the real world and the virtual world are combined seamlessly. although, having more RL battles could be more beneficial :) keep up the good work, hope more people vote and write review for the novel

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