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DollShururu
Finally a mature and likable fanfic OC, also with good character interactions. MC is also not too good but not too evil either. Author knows how to give Flex for the MC that didn't look too forced and childish. I also love the fact that the Overlord characters didn't act out of the character from the original. Just perfect. Author should write more! [img=Feeling it][img=More pls]
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The_Apex
Loved the fact that Arche and her sisters got to be happy unlike the original where arche was shalltear's pet and her sisters were sold as slaves.
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Yue_021
A well made fanfic that has potential but sadly it was dropped and the author was not able to finish it. However, I would sttill recommend this fanfic since it was a very good read for me.
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Afrendi_Eka
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Terra_Indomitus
I really love the OC and the changes that have been made. But I'm a bit disappointed that Zesshi dint become the love interest since there could be so much potential writing a story about that romance and the possible history behind jack and Zesshi ancestor. But oh well it's the author story not mine so keep up the good work and hope you're doing ok in 2021.
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Ainzsamaa
first good but ... haah... 😑. . .. . .. . . . . . . .. . .. .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . .. . .. . . . . . .. . . .. .. .. .. .. . .. . .. . . . . . . .
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LuminouShadow
Amazing story bravo, It has all the proper elements needed for an overlord fanfic but not Momongas ass kissery fanfic but yes I think you should put some more work into the interaction of Demiurge and the other servants making him make more assumptions just like the actual LN coz you know no demiurge misunderstanding = no overlord
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Thies
sometimes it felt boring to visit everything like in overlord and just change a small part.
i wished for mor new/solo stuff without ainz.
7 mth no update looks like aba.
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Rynier_Isaac
I like the story but i dont like the character pairing.....i mean a lolicon? Seriously??_______________________________________________________________________
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Lord_Stan
This is a quality fanfic. I enjoyed reading this. but I'm more into fast-paced stories. so I'm holding of reading more of this for now. Maybe I'll revisit later.
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ILMATTEO
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ShadowChaos
I just an to say thank you to the author. You have inspired me to write my own fanfiction in the world of overlord. I would really appreciate it if you could give me some tips with writing and world building. Just search under the angel tag and go to fan-fic my story is the newest one. I posted 2 chapter today. Thanks for reading this if you get around to it.
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ILMATTEO
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Eastiling
Great story, love to see a great Overlord fic. Hope this is still going to be continued at some point. It was just about to the good bits. The world take over plans, not to mention his love life!
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TenebrisOculi
Magnificent story, it's good to know that the MCs have believable personalities, goals, aspirations, and dreams. So many stories have people who don't have any will to do anything
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McLoggernaut
Came here from your other overlord book. Love it, thanks for the chaps!!!! Stay healthy!!!!!!!!
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Reticulum
Really pleasant to read. The best Overlord Fanfic I read so far.
I really appreciate your Protagonist. You gave him an interesting personality and developed it well.
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Yui_the_Kitsune
Cant be bothered to make a proper review cause I'm sleepy, but I'll have You know that this fanfic is pretty amazingly written with a kind of laid back atmosphere which is surprisingly really fitting (basically the author is skilled).
Well some may like it some not but I do. That's it.
Thank you for listening to,
your next universe neighbour Kitsune The Starlight Goddess!
lowly mortals!
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Kazuki_best_girl
this is too fuc.king good i worship you as author god
take my stones everyone should check all of author's work its too good for life the only worthy sacrifice of time
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HadesChampion
Masterpiece, better than the original. And this remake of the other overlord fanfic is much better. No harem just a pure romance that you can feel good about . Love this
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SeJob
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Overlord1010
I love this novel. I reread it I don't know how many times. Promoted in every respect.
I would like more and more chapters but I understand that it is in fact impossible. The important thing is that it is not dropped.
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Ser_Gamma
I am not a review person, so I'll just say very little.
It is a great story as well as one of the stories where the main pairing is the OC, Jack, x Arche. The girl who needed some loving in Overlord for being a great big sister, yet meeting an end which she did not deserve. The Angel is apart of Nazarick but goes off on his own and changes the world in subtle ways. It is quite interesting to see everything as it unfolds. And, the story itself is not overly described in detail nor is there too little detail. It honestly feels like I'm reading an anime, much like his other two Overlord stories, somehow. Oh, and for those concerned about the [Devour], it is not from the Slime Isekai but rather inspired from the game Prototype, because it also absorbs memories. And has only been used twice from what I've seen in the past 62 chapters. The story does not revolve around [Devour], it is used sparingly.
Buuut, anyway... Yeah...give it a try! You'll sure be sure to love it if given a chance! :D
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