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Manasong
Hey there! I find it odd that Webnovel allows me to leave a review but I saw other authors doing the same, so why the hell not? Anyway, this is my first story so you can guess that my writing improves *a lot* throughout the story. This means that the first few chapters are the worst I have written, but not exactly *bad* (though chapter 2 is a pet peeve of mine, I really dislike it but I don't have the energy to rewrite it). So by chapter 5 is where things start to get really interesting. It's where I find my stride and things start to smooth a little. I do think that the MC's emotions on the first two chapters need a little adjusting, so perhaps in the future I will come back to it. Also, the chapters are in need of a grammar review. From what I know it's not unreadable or too distracting but I do have a problem with things like in/on/at (due to Portuguese, my native language, not having this distinction); some mixed up expressions, bone apple tea style; and run-on sentences. And the last concern: if you think he MC acquires girls too quickly it's only at the beginning. Once the main cast is formed things slow down and their characters become extensively developed.
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Fjdjjfjsjiwos
Really good job... For real cuckolds. The author, with pride (no), I declare you a person who does not know what a harem is and what polyamory is. And I also award you the title of the most honored Yuri cuckold.
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Ryo_Supremacy
a good novel with good story and characters
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ForgottenHope
Jesus Christ this book is fkรฎng cรคncer.Read the reviews and put of reading this, fast forward some time and I ignore the reviews and read the book.I just have one question why the fk does this have a harem tag?Look author I aint't gonna judge you about your cuck fetish, am actually happy people like u exist to carry the mantle of the Cuck. I Thank your dad for letting some random guy bring you into this world.
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Lagash
One of the worst I had ever read. Mci is the default idiot with no balls and the word is simply dumm. BloodSLAVES = you must keep happy, they can break the contract if they want, the serve only a fixt time that they agree of, you have to pay them and if you hit or hurt the BloodSLAVE the gods kill you ..... I think the writer doesnt know what SLAVE means, because thats more rights and advantages that a modern worker has.
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Storag
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Storag

Even though I gave this story a full 5 star, it's mainly on account of authors incredible ethics and dedication. While certain aspects of the story's craftsmanship may not reach those 5 stars it is undeniably a high quality product, especially compared against the majority of this platform's content. And it's even more incredible that the author managed to keep it totally free. No matter what I may personally think of the plot, characters or world building, I am sure that this author deserves respect and the story - recognition.
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Jausl47
just read 2 chapters and it easily could have been 20-25 chapters xd. There were more than 30k words respect man. These 2 chapters are great though
1yr
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Higgs
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Higgs

Its quite fine at first but men this is so boooooring. You could've added some comedy or something. The story was so generic and predictable so much so that it can be used as the very standard point to measure a fantasy novel since everything is normal with nothing for it to stand out than other novels.
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KingSeyer
This is the best!!!. I dont even know why this isnt in the top 10 cuz this is some dope stuff. Writing quality is on point, world building is classic,characters are great, and the best part is that it has some next level 18+ scenes. All in all, highly recommend and I personally think it deserves a higher popularity and rank.๐Ÿ‘ŒโœŒ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿค‘
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Darksbaine
This novel starts as your stock standard isekai but quickly becomes much more. Many of the novels on this site focus on the proverbial โ€œgolden fingerโ€ aspect of most eastern/fantasy/wuxia novels. Accepting it as the crux of the story This author however actively acknowledges it and makes pains to integrate it into the world protag finds himself in. In ways that both make sense and drive the story forward Each member of the โ€œHaremโ€ has well reasoned backstories for being there. Not a single one is a โ€œjade skinned ladyโ€ They each interact; with MC, FL, and all others, and develop independently alongside ML Sexual aspects aside, if you want to read one of the best ongoing books out of the 200ish Iโ€™ve sunk countless hours into. This is top tier. B+ grammar A+ world building A- Bechdel test A+ (gimme moar) update stability A story development
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Theudblad
Une trรจs belle histoire avec un dรฉbut oรน il faut s'adapter au monde pour en apprรฉcier toute l'histoire et ร  quel point elle est super๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿคจ๐Ÿค”๐Ÿคญ๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿคฒ๐Ÿ“–๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’ฅ๐Ÿ’ฏ
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AbysallNight
Overall had decent concepts but the Mc and harem pretty much every current character ruins any potential it had. I'm on chaoter 140 well was. In one of the chapters its states that he uses binding magic so everyone has to recive a "proper kiss" from that elven slave. Straight up disgusting behaviour, he has weird cuck and ntr fetish and forces women of his to become bi, I've seen the author write about how none of them have said they didn't want it. Hmmm well its a book you idiot, unless you state it it goes exaclty how you weird mind wants it to go. Sire good on people for having kinks n stuff but, this is just disgraceful and straight up the most disgusting off any sexuak realtinshiop one can have especially in a harem. Please just select the book, its wasting data on the webnovel servers
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Man_of_culture
The Mc is "introverted" and a complete mess. He is awkward beyond repair when speaking with others, stammers the whole time, and is naive. He had a fiance and experience with women, but he is so awkward with them and stammers when they speak about love, marriage, and stuff like this. The story would have been so much better if the Mc would have a little bit of backbone and isnยดt so submissive.
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jackmyst_13
This is one of my favorite stories on this app! Great sexy scenes with an even better story plot?! The best part is that each chapter is RIDICULOUSLY long. I love it. Im hoping that you just decided to take longer in fixing up the early chapters and haven't dropped the story. Please don't stop the story Manasong!! Rupegia is Love, Rupegia is LIFE!!
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lil_bitch
Greatest slice-of-life and smut novel there is. Grammatically perfect. Stable updates thrice a week. Story and character development are insane. The story goes from "being transported to a little side town in the middle of nowhere" to "champion of the gods that might travel realms". And the transition to the latter is so natural. Little hinds are dropped throughout the story and it's perfect. MC Character is extremely realistic going from "mental breakdowns with wimpy nature" to a "seasoned adventurer" who has seen some shit. The way he uses lust to vent his frustration is also realistic. The side character also has their own styles which remain consistent throughout the story. In most harem novels, the girl's personalities all blend in the end. Not here though. They have their own character development as well. World background is gradually introduced to not be overwhelming. Interesting calendar as well. Culture and ethics are vastly different from Earth. IMPORTANT TO NOTE: As the author has mentioned in his P.a.t.r.e.o.n, the book goes against ade to black *** scene and prudes ruining the fun of sexuality. So expect some ****ed up shit in the later chapter. Orgies and bisexuality and other fetishes are introduced. TBF tho, it gets monotone from chapter 40-60, but then the fun picks back up, so just bear with it. In conclusion: PERFECTION
3yr
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Sapper
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Fantastic book. The number of chapters is deceving. Each chapter is guite long. I would estimate 3-4 times linger than the average webnovel chapter. The charachters are well developed. Skills and magic system is well thought out. The pacing of action against character and storyline development is very well done. This novel is a real gem.
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TheSimp
Me likey... Maybe I'm biased with the review since this is the first scribblehub story I have read. Religiously. I stopped reading after managing to catch up with the update(months ago.) As much I am weirded out by beastility, tentacle, and two dics stuff. Let's just say I am not a fan of that magic pen** haha but the interaction, world-building is top-notch. The magic and so on. Me likey.(monke girl ain't part of the harem? Ah, that's a letdown.)
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Kyoraki
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Kyoraki

bad english ahead you has been warned A perfect fantasy story, really. You will find EVERYTHING you want in a magic world: good plot, BELIEVABLE characters and a logic magic system. You may find the MC a little too much coward and mentally "weak", but it just make the story even better. Why, you say? Because make sense. If you one day just wake up alone in a forest with monster around, I am certain you woud freak up much worse than Wolf Ryder. The reaction when he NEEDS to kill someone the first time is one of the best I ever read and you can relate with his decisions and guilts like a Modern Person because one of the best points of Rupegia is: THE CHARACTERS IS REALLISTIC. The harem is one of or even the best developed. No discussion. Each one of them has a complex personality, a function, motivations, fetishes and all shits and problems. They aren't weak girls who need the protection of Big Alpha MC, they fight with him and help each other. They have chapters and arcs who they are the stars and you know that a arc of the story of each girl will be there sooner or later. It is very hard to DONT like the harem, really. About the plot: amazing. Early chapters is heavilly dungeon crawler based, but later on the things go full abroad. It has a little pollitics in the background scenes, little early but escalates but I think it will appear a lot when the MC evolves to True Noble. I like that the MC is brazilian because me too and its hard to find MCs of my nationality in english-written stories. I lke too that each race has a unique language and VERY different cultures. The worldbuilding is good af And the last but not the least, the battles. Man. Its so... intellectual. The fights has strategy, isnt just blow up magic and heavy broken punches. The MC and party think because if they dont think they will die. The puzzles is very nice too and sometimes (like the horror stage) very tense. Ah, the MC fight style is very creative and unique to him, he is good in using his cards. Seriously everyone should read this. Even the **** is good and well written. A little too much early chapters but it balances well later. P.S: Elf girl = best girl P.SS: Golems best Chars
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MrPurple
Though I really like the world and the characters. I just hate the concept of how the mc is able to put and remove points on his system it's really confusing and in a way an annoying concept to put though that is just my opinion
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StarShifter
One of the beat novel I read in this app.Checked all my box of what an isekai harem novel should be.If anyone has any recommendations of noVels like this plz recommend me.
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alh
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alh

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Swordguy7
Great book. Litrpg. Erotic elves, dwarves, other creatures and monsters never seen before. Dungeon diving. Shameless *** scenes. I would buy this on kindle or read and reread on Kindle unlimited. It is that good.
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Thigh_Master0124
Seems like author is deleting reviews. It is just like those forced porns. There is bisexual girl in harem and mc forces some of his harem members into lesbian too. Mc doesn't have common sense even when he was getting cucked in front of him he was enjoying it while watching. Even some of the girl were asking mc that she wants to **** another guys beside him. And he.... Fuking accepts. Really author is your mind that corrupted. So many NTR and senseless mc with just stupid sexual fantasies. if you have some sort of dumb fetish it's for. If you are real men of culture it's not for you
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Khirodra
love this novel and relationship between mc and his Harem also there interaction...romance scene are also very good............................
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Xerstoren
First of all, the world building and the immersion this novel could give you is incredible. You won't find too many novels like this in that regard. Now, this novel had a good start, everything did make sense in some ways. You started to see a world fill of possibilities that MC could explore anytime. But it all goes to waste due to our MC personality, and I'm not talking about his character development (which mindset in the early novel may be displeasing to many, as he was realistically close to a normal guy from earth being throwed in a hostile world) MC drown in *** since early chapters to somehow escape his own problems, he raped, forced and many others nasty things to his own harem. His train of thought is inconsistent. I couldn't read the entirety of chapter 38 due to the amount of displeasure and disgust it has given me, and before making this review I have seen some others in other sites where this novel is also posted and let me tell this that this novel goes worse on it. Ciel is a pedophile for example, the *** scenes is just take more and more of the chapters content, MC doesn't growth in his mindset as many indicated the same problem as me, that he just became too realiable to his own harem. And for those that are wondering how is his harem working, Hana, one of his former slaves, is the one taking the role of male with most girls. Basically our MC had some cuck fetish that turned him up when he sees his girl being taken care off by his other girls. He forced many that didn't swing in that way, to do it with Hana and Roxanne just to satisfy his desire. He's disgusting. Overall, the story would have been much better if there was another main character showing us the world and developing the story without being a Fuckfest of fetish and debauchery.
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alh
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alh

it have Everything an isekai novel needs, cheat but not op, harem that isnt a decoration, mc development from a paranoid to being steady, no getting used to killing after the first kill, amazing plot....
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Ero_ShiFei
Sorry but I read a spoiler about this novel and gonna drop... #spoiler alert... Mc's forcing his women to be lesbian... I don't mind lesbian to become obesessed with mc but... I don't like straight women to become a lesbian cos of mc... I might try to pick it up later if the author changed about this aspects... Best regards...
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ImportantNPC
I found this novel by accident, but i have to say that im in love with the story and the characters. This Is one of the best novels that i have read in a long time. its just awesome to find a MC that is strong when he needs to be, but you can still see a true and realistic conscience In them. seeing him struggle in a realistic way in a new world is something that you dont normally see in fantasy world settings. All in all im in love with the story and i cant wait for more!
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Sculp
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Sculp

one of the best novels i read keep it up ........................................................................................................................................................................................................
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XArezzX
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XArezzX

You see, I found this novel and start reading it, it was pretty good, and the chapters are ridiculously long (This is a very good thing btw), but, at some point the arem gets into lesbianism, I mean, the MC it's practically irrelevant at some point between "His women" and I reaaaly hate it, Hana and Roxanne seems to just be with the MC because Hana is still her slave and they need a random dick once in a while, I read till chapter 29 ..... please someone tell me if this continues or not, I love the story, but I'm not wasting my time with this NTR (Yes is ntr when anyone else cucks you, and that's what they do, the cuddle each other and sleep alone, **** alone etc, and the MC does nothing)
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