Hey there! I find it odd that Webnovel allows me to leave a review but I saw other authors doing the same, so why the hell not?
Anyway, this is my first story so you can guess that my writing improves *a lot* throughout the story. This means that the first few chapters are the worst I have written, but not exactly *bad* (though chapter 2 is a pet peeve of mine, I really dislike it but I don't have the energy to rewrite it).
So by chapter 5 is where things start to get really interesting. It's where I find my stride and things start to smooth a little. I do think that the MC's emotions on the first two chapters need a little adjusting, so perhaps in the future I will come back to it.
Also, the chapters are in need of a grammar review. From what I know it's not unreadable or too distracting but I do have a problem with things like in/on/at (due to Portuguese, my native language, not having this distinction); some mixed up expressions, bone apple tea style; and run-on sentences.
And the last concern: if you think he MC acquires girls too quickly it's only at the beginning. Once the main cast is formed things slow down and their characters become extensively developed.
bad english ahead you has been warned
A perfect fantasy story, really. You will find EVERYTHING you want in a magic world: good plot, BELIEVABLE characters and a logic magic system.
You may find the MC a little too much coward and mentally "weak", but it just make the story even better. Why, you say? Because make sense. If you one day just wake up alone in a forest with monster around, I am certain you woud freak up much worse than Wolf Ryder. The reaction when he NEEDS to kill someone the first time is one of the best I ever read and you can relate with his decisions and guilts like a Modern Person because one of the best points of Rupegia is: THE CHARACTERS IS REALLISTIC.
The harem is one of or even the best developed. No discussion. Each one of them has a complex personality, a function, motivations, fetishes and all shits and problems. They aren't weak girls who need the protection of Big Alpha MC, they fight with him and help each other. They have chapters and arcs who they are the stars and you know that a arc of the story of each girl will be there sooner or later. It is very hard to DONT like the harem, really.
About the plot: amazing. Early chapters is heavilly dungeon crawler based, but later on the things go full abroad. It has a little pollitics in the background scenes, little early but escalates but I think it will appear a lot when the MC evolves to True Noble.
I like that the MC is brazilian because me too and its hard to find MCs of my nationality in english-written stories. I lke too that each race has a unique language and VERY different cultures. The worldbuilding is good af
And the last but not the least, the battles. Man. Its so... intellectual. The fights has strategy, isnt just blow up magic and heavy broken punches. The MC and party think because if they dont think they will die. The puzzles is very nice too and sometimes (like the horror stage) very tense. Ah, the MC fight style is very creative and unique to him, he is good in using his cards.
Seriously everyone should read this. Even the **** is good and well written. A little too much early chapters but it balances well later.
P.S: Elf girl = best girl
P.SS: Golems best Chars
Though I really like the world and the characters. I just hate the concept of how the mc is able to put and remove points on his system it's really confusing and in a way an annoying concept to put though that is just my opinion
Great book. Litrpg. Erotic elves, dwarves, other creatures and monsters never seen before. Dungeon diving. Shameless *** scenes. I would buy this on kindle or read and reread on Kindle unlimited. It is that good.
Seems like author is deleting reviews. It is just like those forced porns. There is bisexual girl in harem and mc forces some of his harem members into lesbian too. Mc doesn't have common sense even when he was getting cucked in front of him he was enjoying it while watching. Even some of the girl were asking mc that she wants to **** another guys beside him. And he.... Fuking accepts. Really author is your mind that corrupted. So many NTR and senseless mc with just stupid sexual fantasies. if you have some sort of dumb fetish it's for. If you are real men of culture it's not for you
First of all, the world building and the immersion this novel could give you is incredible. You won't find too many novels like this in that regard.
Now, this novel had a good start, everything did make sense in some ways. You started to see a world fill of possibilities that MC could explore anytime.
But it all goes to waste due to our MC personality, and I'm not talking about his character development (which mindset in the early novel may be displeasing to many, as he was realistically close to a normal guy from earth being throwed in a hostile world)
MC drown in *** since early chapters to somehow escape his own problems, he raped, forced and many others nasty things to his own harem. His train of thought is inconsistent.
I couldn't read the entirety of chapter 38 due to the amount of displeasure and disgust it has given me, and before making this review I have seen some others in other sites where this novel is also posted and let me tell this that this novel goes worse on it.
Ciel is a pedophile for example, the *** scenes is just take more and more of the chapters content, MC doesn't growth in his mindset as many indicated the same problem as me, that he just became too realiable to his own harem.
And for those that are wondering how is his harem working, Hana, one of his former slaves, is the one taking the role of male with most girls. Basically our MC had some cuck fetish that turned him up when he sees his girl being taken care off by his other girls. He forced many that didn't swing in that way, to do it with Hana and Roxanne just to satisfy his desire. He's disgusting.
Overall, the story would have been much better if there was another main character showing us the world and developing the story without being a Fuckfest of fetish and debauchery.
it have Everything an isekai novel needs, cheat but not op, harem that isnt a decoration, mc development from a paranoid to being steady, no getting used to killing after the first kill, amazing plot....
Sorry but I read a spoiler about this novel and gonna drop...
Mc's forcing his women to be lesbian... I don't mind lesbian to become obesessed with mc but... I don't like straight women to become a lesbian cos of mc... I might try to pick it up later if the author changed about this aspects...
I found this novel by accident, but i have to say that im in love with the story and the characters. This Is one of the best novels that i have read in a long time. its just awesome to find a MC that is strong when he needs to be, but you can still see a true and realistic conscience In them. seeing him struggle in a realistic way in a new world is something that you dont normally see in fantasy world settings. All in all im in love with the story and i cant wait for more!
one of the best novels i read keep it up ........................................................................................................................................................................................................
You see, I found this novel and start reading it, it was pretty good, and the chapters are ridiculously long (This is a very good thing btw), but, at some point the arem gets into lesbianism, I mean, the MC it's practically irrelevant at some point between "His women" and I reaaaly hate it, Hana and Roxanne seems to just be with the MC because Hana is still her slave and they need a random dick once in a while, I read till chapter 29 ..... please someone tell me if this continues or not, I love the story, but I'm not wasting my time with this NTR (Yes is ntr when anyone else cucks you, and that's what they do, the cuddle each other and sleep alone, **** alone etc, and the MC does nothing)
So I am on chapter 38 and so far I have enjoyed this novel greatly. The one thing that is concerning me is how the harem seems to be devolving more and more into debauchery and lesbianism. What concerns me about this is I don't want to see a possible scenario where they cheat/ get raped/ mc watches while they **** non harem members type of situation. Can anyone who is much later in the novel clarify if any of these situations occur? Thank you
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It bored me, the truth was good while it lasted, this novel is very depraved and I do not like it, you presented the characters too well so that later you make them be either whores, nymphs, infidels etc, the truth is that way of ruin the characters, if I had not read the side chapter, I would continue reading this novel but unfortunately I'm going to leave it here, maybe I'll continue the novel when the disgust I feel passes a bit, already with all that side chapter, I wouldn't be surprised if In the future there are NTR'S or rapes among other things, the MC seems to like infidelity so I would not be surprised if one of his women cheats on him or someone rapes them while he watches them or there may even be orgies between all his harem members and others Men while he watches, I know but I do not want to risk reading this, the truth is a shame either with quality or the length of the chapters you would have to be one of the best Webnovel novels, unfortunately the plot does not arrive, very d You're lucky .. Bye brother until next time ..
Capítulos longos, mas que te prende na leitura. Batalhas bem detalhadas e emocionantes, um foco na vida cotidiana do mc muito legal que ainda não tinha experimentado antes, cenas de sexo bem empolgantes (apelativo, mas não estou reclamando), um mundo bem detalhado que existe muitas portas para aberturas.
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I'm loving it.
It feels real of what a normal person would do, the system is really well done and doesn't feel to op, a bit but not much.
The characters feels alive, and o boy the chapters are LONG("insert female joke here")
Overall i think is one of the best novels on this site.
Hmmm. I don't know what to say. It's amazing. Really a good I'll tell ya. "Wolfy Ryder"? Now that's a friggin' badass name, not gonna lie. It's like a Minecraft Youtuber name but hey! Minecraft is awesome! What the hell am i typin' xhjsnsbhznsmaksnxjsnsnkzka
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Shhhhhh. Wait, tell everyone. Best novel on WebNovel! It book keeps getting better nd better every chapter. The introduction of the lateat harem member is gret example of the uthor`s story getting better over time.
I didn't enjoy it much. The mechanics were good enough, but the story just could not pique my interest to continue reading. The characters and everything feels a bit too bland as well. The interactions are also lacking, I think the story is a bit too slow paced, that's why I get that kind of vibe.
Absolutely love this book and all its kinky ways lol. Thanks again for such a great book. Please keep them coming (cough).................................................................................................wow this is taking forever..................................................................................................................................................had to take a brake. My thumb stared hurting.............