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4.08

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Ep_E_X
So nowadays this type of fic count as a good fanfic ?. Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background
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deMiLemnSAdvenTure
.... ..... ........ .......................... The mc is trash. ........................
5mth
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FrogGodKing
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour Β½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs Β½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
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1yr
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arata_red
the MC's name is Sage. The story dialogue can be really confusing especially when you are using read audio. the dialogue style is beginner level. if jiraya turns to sage mode and uses sage's chakra, what does that mean? is he turning into MC and using MC's chakra? i dont know what the author took to be so delusional when he said he didnt like the vegetable names from dragon ball but decided to use Sage as the name. sigh.
1yr
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trueidiocy_577
meh it's just a wish fulfillment with no depth in the story. But I guess that's better than incomprhensible MTLs lol zjsmzz z z s szz z
1yr
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ReadEatSleepRepeat
Pleant of plot holes does unnecessary things and the story just goes downhill.[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
1yr
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Jonoh_gambler
GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD πŸŽ‰πŸŽŠπŸ’―πŸŒŸβœ¨β­πŸ‘πŸ‘ŒβœŒοΈπŸ€˜πŸ€ŸπŸ€™πŸ‘πŸ€³πŸŒ…β˜€οΈπŸŒ πŸ‡·πŸ‡Ί
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DaoisttG3KuY
bit.ly/3LyRF1N πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—
1yr
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kryptons_last
please allow him to go to marvel and dc universe to get raven and other waifus because they are top tier. hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
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TheViciousVillain
well... i thought it's gonna be a great fan-fic to see but instead I'm really disappointed review: Grammar: good Stability of updates:well I guess good? not like I will read this anymore- Character design: THE MC IS A LITERAL FOOL- not the funny type but fool- fool Story development: THE STORY IS BECOMING WORSE AND WORSE WITH EACH CHAPTER final evaluation:2.4(just for the grammar,the world background and the stability of updates everything else is -)
2yr
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CharAlpha
YESSS!!! Continue to disrespect that abomination called the Boruto series. I absolutely hate that series, and it’s a dream come true to see it amount to what it truly is, Nothing. Have the whole village join in the feast, cook that stupid discount bijuu like you would a billion bird. Use every single part of it to create multiple dishes.
2yr
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Rakhfi_Fairuza
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2yr
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SacredSilence
I haven't read it yet actually~ Hehe! This question is just crushing my mind though... why does the "cover" picture have a male with breast on it?!? I'm so confused~
2yr
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Quake_Midaro
Fairly solid fan fic my only real complaint is the skipping around he does with progression and the lack of smoothing out the relationship between him and his wives
2yr
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Nawaf_Qatani
UPDATE Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update.
Reveal Spoiler
2yr
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Soloinsanity
Absolutely love this book! I don't care what others may say about the ML, he is fun to read because he lets loose! I want to read more of he's adventure and who or what he is gonna conquer next! *.*
2yr
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bossbovatannin
all in all the story concept isn't bad bit the chapter length sucks and putting the Characters name before a : which proceeds their sentence implies lack of skill. it'd be much easier to read if if was like: ''Sage your a future pillar of Konoha.'' Says Lord Fourth. instead it's like a poorly built structure with substandard materials. Thus Despite what this review says its a 1.5 star rating
2yr
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southgamez
great book wish it was updated more often. __________._._._._._._._._._._._._._._________________._._._._._._._._._._._._._._.___.________._ .j jj j j
2yr
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The_Dao
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This is by far the best novels I have read and I do hope to see more chapters of this. The MC is really good and the story progression is really good to I hope you are able to post more
2yr
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Da_G0AT
this is one of the best fanfics iv ever read but i dropped it when it came to the bleach verse anyway i give it 5 stars πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
2yr
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Kwetzal_Lag
I like it and it has a lot of chapters. There are a few holes in the plot here and there but who cares. Just read to your hearts content it's a good way to pass the time anyway.
2yr
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UltimateSenpai
You have great writing skills, even that made me envy you. The beginning of the story is normal, I expected more when I read more chapters. But what I saw, the story just got worse. even MC's personality is.... well.. nevermind..
2yr
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Dookie_Man
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2yr
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BrianGallacher7
Mc is a saiyan in naruto yet at 1 years old can already teleport and can hurt one of the elites with single punch totally idiotic Mc has 0 experience yet the author expects the readers to believe that he can understand an advanced technique after watching it couple times Another mistakes by author having majority of those in village power know about his capabilities Not wishing to not have tail when reincarnating due to illogical reasoning Not explaining why he requested to be born 3 years before naruto is born Illogical reasoning by the so called god - said he couldnt tamper or interfere with imaginary worlds yet has power to send over powered individuals their Author ruined a great concept within 6 or 7 chapters
2yr
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omg_LOL_DOLL
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InternetSaint
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3yr
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Luft_Rauser
Im back to read some more! ◝(β•Ήβ–Ώβ•Ή)β—œβ—(β•Ήβ–Ώβ•Ή)β—œβ—(β•Ήβ–Ώβ•Ή)β—œβ—(β•Ήβ–Ώβ•Ή)β—œβ—(β•Ήβ–Ώβ•Ή)β—œβ—(β•Ήβ–Ώβ•Ή)β—œβ—(β•Ήβ–Ώβ•Ή)β—œβ—(β•Ήβ–Ώβ•Ή)β—œβ—(β•Ήβ–Ώβ•Ή)β—œβ—(β•Ήβ–Ώβ•Ή)β—œβ—(β•Ήβ–Ώβ•Ή)β—œβ—(β•Ήβ–Ώβ•Ή)β—œβ—(β•Ήβ–Ώβ•Ή)β—œβ—(β•Ήβ–Ώβ•Ή)β—œβ—(β•Ήβ–Ώβ•Ή)β—œβ—(β•Ήβ–Ώβ•Ή)β—œβ—(β•Ήβ–Ώβ•Ή)β—œ
3yr
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Leylindd
i'll give 5 stars cuz this fanfic deserve it pls keep updating .............................................................................
3yr
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Chrozo
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3yr
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DaoistDrunkenSword
Overall, It's a great novel. I've read quite a lot of multiverse novels on here, and I'd put this in my top ten, I do however wish there was at least a little romance involved with the story!
3yr
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