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Earth_Is_A_Donut
Does anyone know what happened to the author? I was actually invested into the story more than most others, I hope the author didn't drop the this. :(
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ranimah

The story is getting better and better. The story line is getting better and better. The characters building are interesting and fulfilling. The way you develop the story is worth reading.
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tellynana95
I just started reading this book and it going great so far and I would like to read more of this novel so more updates more updates please it a really interesting novel.
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ArtistaFeel
After reading through the chapters, I found the interaction between the girls hilarious. And the MC's temper is quite eye-catching. It has similarities with the K-Drama 'Strong Woman Do Bong Soon' when it comes to the MC. As for Mr Ghost, he is similar to ML from the K-Drama 'Something about 1%', with is name and persona. Keep it up, Author! Can't wait to see how the romance blooms!
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Zyanide100
Reading this book (believe it or not) was a new experience for me. I hadn't read this kind of thing before. Well, I liked it. It was something unique and I definitely am glad that I agreed to swap with you, author! The two main characters are good and their dynamics are fun to read. Aside from that, there is a decent amount of humor that kept me entertained throughout the story. If this is type of book you like, then you should probably check it. If this is not the type of book you like, well then maybe like me, you might still end up liking it so do check it out. ^^ Good work, author!
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raeliz_shelton
It's ok a few it's of bong soon as well as some lesser known dramas I hope the writer goes somewhere unique with it instead of following the others.
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kathana_rhaine
i didn't know that it's new hahaha so i was expecting for more updates but then here i am typing a review. So far so good, i like it. i have been reading recently many kinds of this so i can say that it's quite unique. hahhahahahaha i dont know what to say na.
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7Lotus
It's really good story. There has only been 7 chapters updated so far so I can't tell much. But I like the plot so far. I can tell where the author is trying to take this so I'm sure the chapters ahead will be fun to read.
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Oscillating_Sine
Wwwooooh Ghost Hubby is finally here! uuurcnnucrnnueurhcurhunuvtunuvguymmiricekjd7nryyythvuniybmuyyyvvtmmmmmvtuybygfedecrvtb6ujikokyhgrftgyhyh
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Barbacoa
K-dramaesque and somewhat cliche, but a promising one, at least. We can't really connect with any of the characters in the first chapters, but it has room to improve. Cannot say anything regard quality of writing, it's all the same to me.
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Wayward_Scholar
Wow! There are only 5 chapters, but so much has happened. The story is developing very well. Also, every single character introduced so far has a distinct personality. Ryujin, Aera, Jaein. I can already tell the type of character they are despite so little interactions, which is amazing. With so few chapters, the world has not been fully explained yet, but there are details added in such as good looks and enrollment in a prestigious university being valued. The only thing I could criticize would be the grammar. Some of the sentences don't mix well, and there are a few misplaced words here and there. However, if you fix that, I believe the story has no issues. It has good characters and solid plot development!
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Kari_Rakitan
This story has vibrant characters who are easy for the reader to relate to. The lollipop is a cute quirk. You also do an excellent job utilizing a wide variety of words.
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ScrapMetal
There are only five chapters so far but they’re entertaining. The author wants to create a flow similar to k-dramas. I’m not an expert on K-Dramas but I can say it does remind me of the few episodes I’ve watched. There is dramatic humor and a good amount of foreshadowing that makes you want to know what’s next. I would say if you’re looking for something that is different from the typical face smacking and want a change from the abusive CEO stories here, this is a good fit for you.
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Cynk_Napp
Shaping to be fine romantic comedy for the business ***** love genre. Fast paced and easy to read. I am waiting for more.. I am waiting for more.. I am waiting for more.
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Norah_Koch
yay! good novel~ story is interesting and promising. grammar is good. I like the author's idea of romance and yeah, i love ghosts. keep it up, author!!!!!!
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Destiny_Aitsuji
Came here to support the author. Don't ask me to send you money because I'm broke too! Hope you get the ss that you wanted and please be responsible enough to finish what you started even though this is only a WPC work. Fighting!
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Chenjieyi
I came across this novel due to Han Minhyun and Lee Soohyun. Haha oh well, three chapters and I am looking forward for more. Kudos to you Author-nim. 😊
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ILLYAchan
There are only three chapters as of writing this review. In the beginning, I had a smooth reading experience and it contains a good writing style which is a good way to catch a reader's attention I think. However, I noticed that the story became interesting for me when I reached chapter 3 which the main characters met. Another story with a CEO but a gamer at least. I imagined your story as Korean dramas I've watched although I read the synopsis and it says that the male lead will turn into a ghost. (Yeah, I've forgotten to read the synopsis first before the story XD) I think this story will turn out great and the current chapters are just starting. Another thing, it'll bring more readers if the next few chapters are published since the next events are intriguing! That's all goodluck author!
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Regius_Sanguis
So, this is my review for this story! :) The story is good, despite the lack of chapters. The plot is kind of cliche, but the way it was portrayed in the story was interesting. Some scenes in there made me laugh a few times. The author has this interesting approach to writing a story that it won't make the reader feel like they are reading a novel, but watching a Korean drama instead. It's fun and entertaining. It's also easy to read. But, it has its flaws, such as errors in grammars and the repetitive use of the same word to define of what the author wants to be portrayed in the story. Nothing major. The flaws can be easily fixed if the author works better in improving their knowledge in English. I highly recommend for the author to read lots of books, some dictionaries and a thesaurus to become more well-versed in the language in question. Other than that, it's a good read. It's fun and entertaining. Definitely a recommend to people that are looking for something entertaining. So, I'm giving this story a 4.2/5. I like the male lead. He was funny. The cover art for this story is good too, so that's a plus for me. 이 이야기를 완성 할 수있는 최고의 행운을 기원하며 즐거운 하루 보내세요! (^_^)
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luciel_707
Hard to type a full review when the chapters are too few. I've read many CEO girl mc many, many times and Korean names are hard to memorize, I said to myself 'ah here we go again in the CEO thing.' Boringly. But when I read this book it was an eye-catcher from the start like the girl mc that was failed into the interview many times, its normal matter for me. In chapter 2, it was fascinating that the ml CEO was a gamer (like me) but not bcs of he is a gamer I was intrigued, its bcs he was not a sadistic (err. I'm gonna throw up rainbows for that) or a villain like. Meaning his character gamer but a CEO is new for me. In chapter 3 still interesting and funny how the reporter and secretary embarrassing moment xD. Notes: there are some errors in the chapters, the detailed of the characters. And the other question of mine will reveal in the next following update. Like I said it's hard to give a full review so this is my review for now. ^^
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The_Canary
With only three chapters, it's hard to make a full review. But so far, the writing style is okay. There were just spelling errors at the latter part of Chapter 3.
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Gourmet_DAO
It is difficult to give a full review in three chapters. However, what catches your eye is the planned style of storytelling. It’s easy to read. The characters are bright, understandable, their character is described well. It feels like you're looking at a lively Korean drama, and not reading a web novel. The world is described in detail, emotions are natural. There are minor errors of the type - the color of the candy, irritation (instead of describing the very emotions of the heroine). Although the plot is a cliché, the genre itself requires it, probably. However, the author may change this cliché; there is hope for this. So far, according to the writing style, these are the Korean series that were before 2015, naive, cute, kind, without unnecessary details characteristic of Hollywood films. Those Korean dramas differed from the usual western films precisely in their purity, simplicity, and sweetness. I hope that in this novel, this option will be preserved. Well, if not, then of course, this is the will of the author, his vision of the novel, the development of history. Each reader likes their own types of genres, as they say all the markers are different. It was offtopic. “Disappointed and angry facial expressions” in the third chapter, it would be better to write how these emotions were expressed (see emotion tesarius) then it would be more interesting to read the reaction of journalists. In general, the story seems interesting, well written, I will include it in my library, since Roan intrigued me. Overall rating 4.8 stars. Thanks to the author for such an interesting novel.
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ApproVal
I will be updating this review. Progress: chapter 3 Writing quality is neat, so 5 stars. Stability of updates is noice, so 5 star. No ghost hubby yet, hubby still alive, 2 star. Character design is gud, they feel not bland, 5 star. World background, it’s obvious. 5 star.
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