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Autismo_Hecc
Such great characger development i love to see the op grow and change as a person and as a pokemon enthusiast i love how you really captivate the real pokemon spirits unline these phoneys nowadays writi g trash story i like and vietnamese spoken over the world by 2026
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Jack_Murray_1072
Really interesting having a pokemon trainer in a cultivation world with a dungeon like system, gives the story its own unique spin from other isekai programs dungeon fics canβt wait for more
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Alcides_Martinez
I like the story and the character too and do you have the list of pokemon she will be having too. Also will she have a legendary pokemon in the future.
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Zero_two02
I like this story π============================================================================================================================
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_Kaitlin_
Just finished reading chapter 42 of this book. And I must say... Iβm immensely pleased with this so far! Hope you donβt drop this any time soon... Thank you!!
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Reykun
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Christen_August
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Vynris_Foxtail
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David_Ross_8826
This is fucking amazing keep writing and Iβll keep reading ........................................,............................... sorry has to be 140
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Sillygamer
Love the story so far there arenβt many pokemon stories in the platform so this is a very good step to provide inspiration to other authors, I like the Main character in the way his demeanor is changing subtly from a modern world person that has never fight to the cultivator person that must fight and stand up for himself, the only recommendation that i would to make is that i want the cultivator world to influence the pokemons, wath i mean is for example there are many wacky martial arts in cultivator novels with wacky effects, what is stopping a fighting pokemon to learn this arts, there are many spirit fruits that enhance elemental powers on cultivators or adds kinda superpowers what is stopping a pokemon from eating one of those fruits, i really thing that the novel would become not better but more immersive because all transmigration novels is about how the cultivator world influences the main character and i want the same happening with the pokemons
Love the story and keep it up π
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Reaper_X_7998
Honestly I didn't think this novel would be as good as I thought it would be but its a great novel itd advancing at a good pace and the character development is good and the writing quality isn't that bad do overall its greatπ
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YoungReaperX
This is so good!!!! I actually learned some new stuff about pokemon and how theyβre ability works. Wow. This is also interesting with the gender bender, im a fan of gender bender. This is great. I canβt wait for more!! Iβll kill you if you drop this! But keep up the good work!!! ππΎβ€οΈ
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_Goodies_
The story is captivating and very entertaining for me. The character development between the MC and his Riolu is great. I love how you added the level up system, which reminds me of the games.
One thing though, the MC chose the girl gender over the boy which sometimes confuse me from "he" and "she"
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Manaki
i love everything about it really, its a new feeling to a pokemon fic that ive always had read. Im always looking for something that will want me to come back to and never get tired of reading. im always reading to get my head away from school a bit and this stiry overall puts a ray of sun on me...thats if school doesn't ruin it ππ
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LazyDude
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PancakesWitch
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VashuRajput269
Well I have not read it yet, but 5 star for my buddy
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Riley_Nelson
I like this one a lot. I really like the concept and the characters. I don't understand why the author bothered making it a gender bender since the mc hasn't dealt with being changed in any way. It's still short so hopefully we get a lot more chapters.
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Ivan_Accosano
If you actually read the novel it's a pretty good novel the fights are solid and the plot is progressing at a good pace, maybe the updates aren't often enough but is a good sacrifice for a solid novel.
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DarkKnight32
Fuck gender bender i really want to read the story but somehow these things just make me uncomfortable, great idea but next time just make the mc a female or male dont change there gender i remember this one good novel that got ruined because the mc who was a old man turned his avatar to a loli girl... now how can i read that **** and not feel anything wrong. If you dont want any romance just don't introduce love interest make the girls fall for his companions or just make the mc a loner but don't ignore females completely just make it that they have a crush on him but he just leaves be it for another place or realm.
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Kurosis
please put a gender bender warning for the love of god. y do authors always forget to put it. that way they don't waste out time and we won't give bad reviews.
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Deqaqueenazula
Its Okay story im doing this for spiritus Stones so, dont take it serios it is nothing i jus pit Random numbers okay this is not good. Let me speak danish hej jeg er en pige hello ich ist eine mΓ₯dchen
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