I really don't understand how it only has 4.3 stars and so less viewers I .
mean this is the best novel I have seen in a while, for people who think it's about business war and blah blah blah, it's not.
it's about a guy named arc grand who works as a labor due to his parents being in coma nad he has to take care of his sisters one day after returning he gets a factory system and he builds his empire, and people it's a very simple novel with really limited fight and blah blah, the only thing the mission are like 10 chaps I bet u can adjust, I truly recommend , it's a hidden gem.
I really love this novell. It has a good managing or "kingdom building" that I love very much. The only thing that I really want the author to do, is to bring back MC from adventure back to home. It is the only thing that I can complain about this novell.
Thanks for the hard work author. :)
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this is a pretty great story. it has a nice development and the characters are well developed. of course it suffers from a lot of stuff webnovels suffer from like the mc is too op and stuff along those lines. however this doesn't really effect the story in anyway. it's almost like a popcorn movie where you kinda just turn your brain off and enjoy the fun ride. it's just a lot of fun. if you are looking for a fun story you should check this out
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everything is top notch but one thing, the grammatical errors in nearly every chapter is worrying, I get it that English is not the authors main language, that is understandable, however try and get good editors that will do a good job
Good but the mc is a pussy while ambitious.
The grammars are not so nice but still readable, hope it will be properly edited and fixed.
Over all the novel is good except the mc attitude, it's good he is ambitious but his personality is like a hypocrite politician .
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This story starts shabby and somehow unreliable due to the writer skill being novice at start, but if you are patient enough and keep with the story, you will notice the author skill and imagination growing by leaps and bounds and story getting better and better, the only think I hate about the story is mc is acting like an idiot often times but hey if you pursue a certain degree of realism, there is no such a thing as perfect genius genuine mc......take cake .
This book has an interesting concept. But sadly it needs major editing. The characters dont really pop out. They lack depth. MCs system missions are simple and the rewards are over abundant. MCs planet is rank 2.9 out of 10, where 10 equals 1 star. MC purchases a 2 star i.e. rank 20 A.I. within the 1st 10 chapters. At a remarkably low price. Stars a business and gets 5 clone employees 1-2 stars. With stats that dwarf anyone else by at least 20 times. Just super OP
Aside from the obvious need of going back and fixing the grammar, the story also needs to be a bit more fluid in its plot development.
Assuming it was inspired by (Super) Monster Factory the author isn't doing justice to the one that inspired him (unfortunately. we all need a decent factory building novel out there!).
Poor character development,
One dimension side characters,
Overly OP and plot armor,
The author needs to think and plan on what he's going to write. Like, stop now and plan the plot on the novel.
Eg. It starts on a post apocalypse world that turned a large part of the world to a wasteland and mutated beasts, then goes straight to human fleet fighting aliens without any development...
I don't say to scrap it now because the idea behind the novel and the factory system are great! This is pure gold on my opinion. But it's a mess at the moment.
A great book, story line is great. It had me hooked only down side is i the amount of chapter release rate is only one chapter a week, and the chapter lengths are short but the story is amazing... keep up the good work author dont be discurged to contine
i like this story, the world building, characters and story arcs and suspense are present and very good for a novice writter. my only problem is the grammar but it is understandable as the writer is not a native english speaker. i hope the writing quality and esthetics improve. i wish more people could read this. it is a simple story, not complicated, has twists and turns, going to end up with a battle royal for sure,. keep up the good work buddy. i will be sure to give you power stones every day! 👍