I have this novel three tries but I can't cross 2 chapters..... nothing makes sense, and the English? is it even English at this point, the sentences look like random words jumbled up
Language-Poor
Story _ VERY poor
This is just garbage writing. I am sorry if i am hurting your feelings, but i have to tell you its rubbish. The MC dont have a proper power level. And MC have lots of unwanted techniques like garbages thrown around the road. Its totally unorganised and its full of grammer and spelling mistake. Its frustrating to read.
Sangat seru untuk membacanya, dimana karakternya baik dan tidak seperti karakter yang diisekai lain yang mana kebanyakan yang mana karakternya menjadi ba*****n dan semena mena
Sangat menarik untuk dibaca ceritanya yang mana karakter MC sangat baik dan penyayang, apalagi kepada anak-anaknya. Tambahkan lebih banyak dunia lagi seperti anime Fullmetal Alkemis dan anime fate seris .
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Fried Frog's Legs recipe:
Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat.
Ingredients:
24 frog legs, skin removed
1 cup all-purpose flour
Β½ cup cornmeal
1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed
1 tablespoon ground black pepper
2 teaspoons salt
1 teaspoon minced onion
2 eggs
Β½ cup milk
2 cups vegetable oil for frying
1 cup peanut oil for frying
Cooking Instructions:
Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl.
Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep.
Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs.
Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs.
Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
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llegan a nivel planetario pero no son omnis ya que si fueran omnis con su sola presencia destruirΓ‘n el universo, sΓ³lo corrige eso
author if you are reading this please fix your chapters because i can not understand a single thing also when ever I do the conversation or information is either to much or chalky(stiff).
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Nice, good story about harem virgin with no balls mc good collect some girl and make them fertilization too so mc can glad they don't cuckold mc and make his pride hurt
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The novel has great potential and started off interesting, but the grammar was in the level of a ten year old and actually gave me a headache reading it.
I have no idea how the WG haveen't kidnapped him and dissected the kid or brainwashed him to become a CP member in the future or literally anything. are we supposed to belive that the WG won't do anything to a kid with misterios powers that aren't a devl fruit and he is telling all his secrets literally to the first person he meets. By all means the kid should be dead before he even enters training
Even though we have a most likely Google translated and edited (poorly I must say, sry for the effort but it is what it is) FF the story is quite enjoyable if you get past the extremely bad grammar. You still get attached to the protagonist and what's happening to him. A somewhat smart protagonist but clueless about social interactions, i still appreciate how the protagonist is developing thanks to his interaction with the ppl he meet and fight. A good story but downgraded by the poor and badly edited grammar.
seems good but i couldn't get through the first chapter, i got sleepy and bored, things seemed bland and tasteless and sounded like something i read once. this is not a discouragement, keep writing and get better.
Es muy bueno me gusta como tiene qqie empezar a entender que el mundo no es solo hay luz sino tambien oscuridad y me encanta como empieza a comprender los demas sentimientos a demas de la felizidad aunque no aon bonitos dan mas sabor a la vida. Quisiera 1ue hicieras una con el mundo de tower of god porfaππππ
Dropping this because of the amount of braincells I lost trying to read and understand what in world is happening during the chapters. horrible and will probably never raid this again unless the chapters get edited and fixed
SectMasterWang