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Namipa
As far as the story goes I didnβt notice any grammatical mistakes ( English is not my first language) and the storytelling keeps me reading too great potential in my opinion (what else can you expect from the author of master of time great book,read it) I think itβs worth trying
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KieraRz
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ZGearCecil
γYour writing style resonates with my mind. Tingling sensations! Thank you for starting this book and I'm looking forward to future chapters and (multi-)world building and the characters you'll introduce.γ
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Erosire
Author here. Yup. Yup. Hope you enjoy the story so far, and as always, I give myself 5 stars because I am shameless.
The main character in this story is beyond overpowered (obviously from the first chapter), as he has already passed the "training phrase", but he is not the strongest.
His goal is very simple. Kill those 7 and takes back what they have stolen from him. Of course, it is not as simple as that may sound, as they are as overpowered as him.
Anyway, this is a story about System Creation, so his revenge is secondary. There is sex, obviously, but like Master of Time, it is part of the story, and not being driven by the story itself (Like Ghost of Culture).
What else. Oh yeah, expect other protagonists to pop up form time to time because this is set in the same continuity. Even my fanfiction are set in the same continuity. Hmmm...
Chat to me on discord, as I am always there, lurking in the background with a knife. Hah!
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