Hi i kind of like this so far , pretty interesting . I live the start before reincarnation it was writed good.
I hope you dont skip so much ib the future , i know you write this because it was not inportant but it was a little annoying to read , i think you should summarize briefly what happend .
Im not a writer so these are just my thoughts ;)
I hope you countinou :) Thank you
cuddlypanda