Reviews of Master of the Omnitrix by AmpJ789 - Webnovel

Everything is just copy and paste . What is the use of the knowledge of previous world when you do nothing but just fellow the original story . Add "Butterfly" effect, more and something new .

It's just a rehash of Ben 10 canon with forced plot. Not worth reading, so don't waste your time and just watch the show.

This is by far the best ben 10 fanfiction that I've been able to find. Please for the love of God don't drop this fic. Also if you could add a picture of how the aliens look, that would be awesome 👌

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I loved this novel. I'm really looking forward to the next chapters, awesome character and backstory development and spectacular story development and fantastic stability and cohesion update

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It's amazing and well thought out the plot so far is good and pls do not drop it author ....................................................

I have read many different fanfictions of Ben 10 but most of them come in a way that cripple the essence of the original but this fanfictions is actually really good.

The history is amazing, your grammar, not so much. You don't tell us what is happening like: Ben took a shower and told Max he would stay in his lab. No, you should use quotes "" dialogue to tell your readers what is happening like. Ben walked towards the bathroom and opened the door, before entering he turned his head towards his grandpa and said. "Hey grandpa, I'll stay in my lab for the rest of the day after taking a shower." Not only that but you constantly stick words together. And lastly, you change the Pov too much Don't use YOU to refer to a character, I'm not Kevin, I'm not Ben, I'm a reader, stick using. Resuming everything, your history is honestly incredible but the grammar puts much of that down.

it started out good but went downhill soon after, confusing development and the mc aint showing how smart he is or how he controls the the world now, he did not fully unleashed the omnitrix potential and was beaten by his enemies easily, he should be near unstoppable for being a transmigrator and knowing the ben 10 universe

Author needs to fix the random first person second person third person pov, you start with I, then go your then go Ben... the intro starts out nice smart athletic mc.. then he made a company with grandpa max and become rich... but stuck to Canon cause he's afraid of the butterfly effect? Should've skipped those if you were sticking to Canon and just described the minor changes he made...

Author for me this story is a great inspiration , i was even thinking of starting writing fan-fic of ben 10 with yours has a inspiration. Please don't drop this novel , i guarantee you my stones every single day so please finish just this one. Don't listen to the haters , stay healthy and Godspeed

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its a good story and is about a show i loved when i was younger and still watch so thank you for righting it and if someone is reading this they should read the story

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pretty good just atleast work on some things. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .... . . . .

Love it. Please continue writing. You're a good author.

Just binge read this entire thing up to this point. It was pretty good. It was a bit stagnant in the middle or so chapters but I read on and was not disappointed. Keep it up!

Greatest Ben 10 fanfic you will ever find. The only bad things it has is the occasional grammar mistake and the updates taking a little bit too much to be released. :)

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Love this fic. I will love it even more if you pair Gwen with Ben. I've check it ****** is not wrong(Not!) if your cousins. People do it all the time. It's fune really honest!

What.The.Actual.Fuck is wrong with this novel...I mean it starts off with an interesting premise then with CH8&9 it pisses it away and becomes a less interesting rehash of cannon. It's always sad to see such great potential thrown to the fucking dogs.

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It's a great book, I like how the Author doesn't just focus on Ben I also like how the MC fixes things without overthinking it but it goes a bit fast at the beginning maybe the author wants to focus more on alien force or something

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