Reviews of Reborn in the Shinobi World as a Sarutobi by IntactReincarnator - Webnovel

........................................

It was a bad start, then it got worse. This was an irritating read.

The heck is chapter 1 and 2? Also, what is the point of reincarnating as a Sarutobi?

at first I thought it was MTL because of bad english.....BUT then I found out the author was suffering from deficiency of grammar

the wording ... the leasr is said about it, the better

Mükemmel oldukça iyi bir hikaye afgxfjjvnkjfchjgfyjbbcddgjmjhjkjcddhgbhjkkbgfghddyjgvftujgfdhr disk dönüş dönsün Cübbeli gününün gününü gününü gününü

I think that the story is very good and all but I can't give it a five star maybe not but. Sometimes there are scenes when I disliked however who am I to talk as I've done no good stories. Some parts weren't to my liking but I've got nothing to back this up also this is just my opinion other people have different opinions. I've also not given a single 5 star to any story and don't feel like doing it now but this is the highest amount of star rating I've given it so it's pretty much the best story now.

This could have been way better if the author spent time fixing the spelling and grammar a little. Even using normal Microsoft word would have done a lot of good. Stopped reading after 15 chapter as the story went too fast, made no sense, the character went too OP and seriously could not ignore misspelled words.

This story seemed to be great at first but ! The writting quality is barely acceptable and more than anything the story lacks personality. The MC has no depth, no originality and is too OP in the sense that his OP pop out of nowhere and seems to be contagious, spreading everywhere. The stoty background is that of Naruto World but it is too superficial and lacks in depth research on the subject. In all it is a 2D textbook fanfic in which the reader cannot immerse themselves into. Despite the fact that the original idee was good.

This is a really interesting perspective, a unique fan-fic if should say it a word. The MC's talent in fuinjutsu is at the level of savant, which I would say is illogical considering he is no uzumaki. Other wise its good please don't drop the novel

The story is interesting, but there is a lack of research. For example, Hayate is four years younger than Asuma, but the writer made them the same age. Gender-bending, I can't even comprehend my hatred for it. The idea of having Sharingan abilities without the Sharingan is genius, and I applaud him/her for it! Finally, detest how the mc spent a lot of time on other characters rather than growing stronger himself. Overall, good concept, but with a poor application? Not my cup of tea, though others might like it. I suggest re-engineering the fic.

I love this novel app thanks for this appp so can u please give us Naruto,black clover , and many more interesting anime novels please . can u please help me with the romantic novels kkkkkkk

An interesting story but ruined by attrocious grammar mistakes. I would like to continue reading this but I get a minor headache just reading a paragraph. This story needs a good editing.

I love this fanfic. One of the best Naruto fabrics on the site. Thanks for the work. 😄 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

keep up the great work..........................................................................................................................

Im not a writer and English is my second language but i have to say that this novel was imposible to read with the amount of typos and grammatical errors. I thought that after a few chapters the author would stop writing the same typo over and over again and again after a lot of people mentioned it in the comments but he didn’t correct the typos or stopped writing them (the typo is “has” instead of “as”).

the grammar is horrible and I don't like the changes made to the naruto verse but past the grammar this story is a 3.7. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

One of the best Fan-Fics that I’ve read so far, great quality of writing, in depth action/battle/in general fighting scenes. Overall the thing that really made me enjoy this story would have to be the NON-harem,thank you, just thank you so much, for not being an insanely perverted author!!!

Hi there! Are you looking for inspiration? You might want to check out our Prompts Writing contest! Apocalypse, Isekai, LitRPG... Follow the three provided prompts and take the chance to win up to $2,000! Please Google 70daysthemedwritingchallenge to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact ringdom_promptswriting@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!

helping lots of canon/non canon char stronger around mc is annoying for me -----------------------------------------------------------------------------

I looked at the chapter names and it made me cum. I ain't joking. It tells everything about world background, updating stability as they were 50 chs.. character design(for ex: born uchiha with bad sight), story developement is the most well defined. Also the writting quality is already best in chapters names. I am contented with this and thus won't read the chapters. Thanks for one of the best novel in webnovel site which has good chapter names..

Such A Drag, I Stand above all human clans, Bankai!!!!,  I Will Take A Bite Of This Potato Chip An Eat It, I Will Be King Of The Pirate's,  I Will Be The Hokage Believe it. Some Of My Favorite Anime Lines!!!

good..................

you should really consider writing in smaller paragraphs and making your writing more legible. The story gets completely overshadowed by this.

great story great story great story great story great story great story great story great story great story great story great story great story great story great story great story great story great story great story great story great story great story great story great story great story great story great story great story great story great story great story

mc ................................................................................................................................................................

Character gets reincarnated into the body of asuma but instead of making his own path, he seems to be choosing to following the path of the original asuma. So if you like a happy im going to teach everyone my new techniques type of character then this is for you